Title: Where was the editor for this book?
Product review: The characters were depthless and the situations are trite. The protagonist goes back and forth between desiring righteousness and embracing sin that you are never fully convinced of his moral conversion in the end. The contradictions in the novel are so staggering that you will become dizzy with stream-of-consciousness that falls flat.That doesn't mean this book doesn't have redeeming qualities. I was pleased to see some variety from the stock "goody-goody" Mormon characters, and there is a lot of subtle symbolism that might help people who feel they don't fit the classic mold of what is good but are still good people.I just thought the book was poorly written and the editing of the storyline was severely lacking. For an adult novel, the writing was surprisingly juvenile. I expected more from a creative writing English professor.
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