Title: synonym overuse
Product review: I purchased two Tawni O'Dell books, Sister Mine and another; I am a somewhat avid reader and this is my first typed Amazon review. Ms. O'Dell's subject was interesting, however I found her careless use of synonyms irritating. Like a.... As if a... It was as though she finished the story and went back and lengthened it with analogies at every turn. I found it trite and forced. Back to Frank McCourt for me!
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