Title: Without Substance
Product review: The book started promising-an affair, a lot of sex, a "secret". The writing was all over the place. There were countless mistakes that the editors did not catch and the over all voice seemed too forced. It seemed more like the author was trying to find as many different ways as he could to describe sex. Even that got old after a while. I didn't like how it jumped towards the end with the son getting hurt and how all of the sudden he was in the hospital ready to die. The author could have done so much with that, but that lack of description and the whole lead was completely off. I won't bother to read a sequel.
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