Title: Awful writing!
Product review: I don't consider myself to be an expert in grammar, but this book is distracting to read. The author has no command at all of the English language. He uses commas frequently, in all the wrong places, and constantly misuses "there" and "their." Apparently, no one proofread or edited the book. I can't speak for the storyline as I'm only up to page 35, but I'm having a hard time seeing past the abuse of the English language. Had I previewed this book, I never would have bought it.
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