Title: Clumsy and Awkward
Product review: I loved Blood/Land and Sword/Land, so I was excited to read this one. It's not nearly up to their standard. It's very poorly written; she explains to you all the emotions of each character, never showing them. Far too much "Deus ex machina" magic. It's clumsy, plodding, and poorly-written. I can only imagine her editor sent it into print because the first two books sold well; this one isn't worth the effort to read, and her editor ought to have stopped it from going to press in its present condition.
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