Title: Too long, and too weird
Product review: The actual writing in this book is fairly good, where it has a chance. However, in addition to being much too long and drawn out, the actual story is rather uninspired and pedestrian. Also, significant portions of the book take place inside the computer system, in a sort of V.R. construct. However, the descriptions of the action taking place there are largely meaningless, being concrete descriptions of abstract concepts. The same is true of the scenes of the Ell "bindings," which were full of meaningless, albeit poetic, descriptions of telepathic communication.There are a host of other faults in the storytelling, which I don't care to get into, but suffice it to say that this book is simply not worth the time it takes to read it.
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