Title: Horribly flat and under developed
Product review: I ruined my vacation read (to Italy, none the less) on this book. It is impossibly flat-I had to read the first chapter 3 times because I felt like I had to be missing something- and to me, under developed. It seemed like so much was left out in regard to introducing characters, and then just having them evaporate. Aside from the style and mechanics of the story, it was horribly lewd. It was disgusting to read, however, when I realized that this was a 70 year old man writing I was sufficiently repulsed; I assumed that discretion came with age. Don't get me wrong, I understand that certain characters are lewd, therefore lewd acts and language are required. However, this was over the top and unnecessary. I can usually find a bright spot in every book, but not this one. Reader beware!
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