Title: Professional Editing makes ALL the difference
Product review: What we have here is a collection of cute stories (naked couple talking to snakes, father sacrificing his son, man swallowed by whale, grandpa builds a boat, etc) completely mixed up with long census reports, a metric crap-ton of genealogy, and a strange collection of passages condemning everything from poly-cotton blends to facial shaving.The central premise of the first half of the book(the relationship of the cleverly named sky-god 'God' and the hebrews) changes drastically in the second half, when God impregnates a teenager with himself and begins waxing philosophic about lilies and fish and sheep and camels and needles.Loooooooong story short; some good ideas (and a REALLY sexy little section in Song of Solomon) (I mean, that crap is HOT) but terribly written with serious continuity problems.
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