Title: Technically flawed, and very stilted and clunky
Product review: It is obvious that not only has the author never spent any time in a hellzone, but has never even been through Basic Training. For example, A 40mm grenade is a projectile, not a hand grenade. There is no pin, and if you throw it, you may or may not get an explosion, but it certainly will not perform appropriately. This novel is stilted in form and technically horrible.
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