Title: Get an editor...please!
Product review: I have been following this series faithfully, and I will read the next book, but if it is not better edited, that will be the last one. LKH, there was plenty of book here - no need to repeat the (warning: possible spoilers coming) Anita-taunts-Otto-and-then-(gasp)-apologizes scene three (three!) times. The fake-sex-on-stage scenes are tooooooo long. And then there are the missing parts of the story, e.g., did the rookie cop sacrifice himself by heroically starting the fire in the zombie-infected hospital room or was it accidental? Also, Anita promised to take care of the tragic monster created by Baco, but then she apparently forgets about it. Disorganized, repetitive - I'm glad I got this from the library and didn't pay money for this poor work. Edit, edit, edit!
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