Title: Couldn't read it
Product review: I really don't like to write negative reviews and usually don't, but the fact it that this book was so ineptly written that the writing itself distracted me from whatever story it had to offer. I got about twenty pages into it and gave up, just couldn't read it. The prose is absolutely awful and sophomoric, splattered with unnecessary adjectives and riddled with too cute dialogue.Now, here's the thing. I read another book by this guy, since it was recommended by Amazon, and managed to get through it, mediocre as it was. After all, I did pay for it. So, maybe he's learning and getting better. I do not want to absolutely castrate a new writer with a scathing review, although I have done so. I hope he keeps learning and maybe gets to the point of actually being readable.By the way, I couldn't get away with no stars here, so had to give it one. And so it goes.
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