Title: Don't waste your money
Product review: This "novel" is amateurish and obviously self-published. The author makes the most basic Writing 101 mistakes. For example, the punctuation in the dialogue is WRONG throughout the book. It is often difficult to tell who is speaking. Here is an example paragraph:"Make yourself comfortable. Have a drink." Dr. Hynes said. "I don't mind if I do. Ahhh. Sprite. Now I'm at home. Hold my calls." Bert said with a child like grin on his face.In addition to using a period instead of a comma after "drink" and "calls," the author puts the spoken words of both characters in a single paragraph to further confuse the reader. This book is filled with misspelled words, grammatical errors, and punctuation errors. The writing is stilted. It lacks any suspense or clear story line. What a waste of my money. I was caught by all the 5-star ratings, which were obviously contributed by the author under aliases or his/her friends and family. Shame on you, G. Novitsky.
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