Title: Failing to write what she knows, and failing to keep my attention
Product review: The author is clearly writing beyond her scope of life experience or research. The supposed 30-year-old main character is pathetic and unsympathetic, even considering the circumstances of plot.A knack for the visual is apparent, which probably translates well on film, but the excessively true-to-life dialog includes much pointless small talk that does nothing to further the story.I had high hopes for the concept, but it's mired in superfluous fluff.
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