Title: Should have followed his editor's advice
Product review: The author mentions that he refused to accept his editor's recommendations for the second edition of the book which is unfortunate. His writing style is similar to a drunkard's walk, weaving around and around, occassionally making a cogent point and then starts wandering around again.The book title does describe his writing style very well.
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