Title: Weak plot, characterizations. I still liked it.
Product review: I believe the reason romances get such a bad wrap is because of plot, characterization weaknesses. I felt like the author had something else to do and wanted to finish the story as soon as possible to get to it! The plot could have been so much more flushed out, and therfore, more enjoyable. What about the Cuba angle? Why have him go there if its not important to the story. He could have traveled to Minnesota! The characters had no depth and I never felt like I knew them. How did his sisters feel? For that matter, what were their names? Any nieces/nephews? What happened at the bridal shower? Did she have one? Did Jemery have any friends that would create a conflict for him? This story lacked significant conflict. Although, it had the seeds for it. There could have been so much more to this story. But what I really want to know is...is that Janet Jackson on the cover!!!!!!!!
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