Title: Great story - great concept -written like the intended audience was 11 years old
Product review: I loved the concept behind this book! The characters were pretty good too. It just was written as if the intended audience were 4th graders and although overall I enjoyed reading it - this story could have been AMAZING if the author had fleshed out the plot, setting and characters a bit more and it just kills me!! I felt kind of ripped off for the price (6.99) and because of that I chose not to trust the author enough to buy any additional books in the series.
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