Title: Not the best book for children
Product review: The story of MUSE is cute, a little simplistic and very much on the level of a young child, but sadly, the writing style is very overwrought, using very little punctuation and seemingly random rules of grammar.It is more like a high school free form writing assignment gone awry than an actual novel and the writer would do well with a strong editor.I don't think this is the best example of the type of writing we would like small children to encounter. It will at best be confusing and at worst lead to poor writing habits amongst the younger ones.
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