Title: Could have been SO much better
Product review: What a wonderful and scary premise for a book. However, the writing is really atrocious. Punctuation errors abound. The first half of the book is mostly interminable, boring, non-sensical conversation, which jumps around from subject to subject or is repetitive. In the hands of a better writer, this could have been a great book. As interested as I was in the story and the outcome, I found my mind wondering, unable to even remember what it was that I just read.
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