Title: Check it out from the library
Product review: The story line had potential, and the characters were well-written and likeable. My main problem was the dialogue between the adults; it was so jerky and awkward. They supposedly flirt with innuendos and what-not, but I completely missed it. Were these lines deleted? I found myself often saying, "huh?" and having to re-read several scenes. Risa, the main female protagonist, had a best friend whose husband was unfaithful. Right away, after being "broken-hearted," she jumps right into the sack with some other guy. And I mean right away, as in the next day. These characters had so much potential being that they sounded funny and likeable, but the writing didn't flow at all.
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