Title: Too Pat
Product review: I am so tired of authors thinking they can get away with ridiculous descriptive phrases like "the sensations of his magic touch led her to madness," or "gentle caresses created streaks of concentrated pleasure." What the heck are streaks of concentrated pleasure, and PALEEEEASE, "his magic touch"? Give me more, give me something I can lose myself in, I just cannot get into termanology like that. The story had potential, but the characters were annoying, especially Christiana. She was so stupid, and her childishness was not endearing, it grated on my nerves.
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