Title: Needed more revision
Product review: The prose had problems. Example from page 200 of paperback version: "Please!" I beg.When you say please, the begging is sort of understood. Some characters had tiger-like grins or bank teller smiles--not as cliche' as wolf-like grin but its in the same ball park.I do hand it to the author, he has a great premise, thus the 2 stars. But I think the novel needed a little more polish. The problems were very distracting to me, and I could not get any momentum from this book.
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