Title: If I could rate no stars, I would..
Product review: My thirteen-year-old can write better than this.I got through the second paragraph and had to MAKE myself continue. I couldn't even get to the third page. With sentences like "Des' mother, had Joyce, accompanied her as a favor to her son." It's amazing this book got published. Where were the editors/proofreaders?It's sad the state our young Black readers are in that this book had a good rating on this site. I can't even comprehend what the author is trying to convey half the time. I'm glad I didn't buy this and checked it out from the library; I would have been highly upset. The fact that the headers for the pages aren't aligned properly and that they use capital letters in the middle of the sentences should have given me a hint on what's to come. Please don't buy this book. I have nothing against urban contemporary Black fiction (I actually am a fan), but I'm warning you!
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