Title: Fiction with bad dialogue
Product review: I really started to have my doubts after getting to the end when James talks to Leonard. "James, I would like you to be my son. I will watch out for you as I would if you were my real son, and I will offer you advice and help guide you through your life. If there are ever issues with your real father, I must insist that you defer to him and respect him before me and over me." Oh, please! I think this guy watched a few too many mobster movies with his frat buddies.Yeah, there were a whole bunch of things in the book that didn't seem true, but Frey has a tin ear for dialogue, and that was what really stood out as false.Now The Smoking Gun has exposed him as a fraud. My question is, did his family go along with his plan, or did he dupe them, too?
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