Title: Good storyline, not so good writing
Product review: I think Ms. Mason's storyline and setting are exciting and the plot has a lot of ups and downs, but the writing itself is not so exciting, nor is it very good overall. I've read tons of great books, but I could never really put into words what made them so great. In this instance, I can plainly see why this book didn't do it for me. I think the main reason why I didn't like her writing style is because she just lays it all out on the table, without adding subtlety or taking her time on really important scenes. Some sections are even embarrassing in their cheesiness (i.e. the last line of the book). I've never written a review before, and I don't like to put people down (obviously my writing skills aren't fabulous) but I would hope Ms. Mason would take this as constructive criticism and maybe work on her craft, and readers would take this as a helpful guide when deciding whether or not to purchase the book.
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