Title: the story has potential, but it's dreadfully written
Product review: The plot and the characters have the potential to make this an interesting story, but the novel is so horribly written that the good points are overshadowed by the author's limited ability. With a good editor, this could become an enjoyable novel; in it's current form - don't waste your money!
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