Title: Would have made a great short story
Product review: To be fair the only other thing I've read by the author was his short story Press Enter_ which I found in a Hugo Award compliation several years ago.Since I loved Press Enter_ I had high expectations for Mammoth. Mammoth just didn't deliver. I think if the author had cut out a lot of the fluff this could have made a great short story. There was just too much fluff left in to make a great novel. Also, I think that if you're going to write a novel about time travel that you should make *some* attempt to explain where the time machine came from. Maybe you can get away with it in a short story but I expect more from a novel.I did like the twist at the end though.
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