Title: Good plot, poor vocabulary
Product review: Demolition Angel has a good plot but the disgusting vocabulary detracts from the story. The frequent use of profanity makes the story unbelievable and gets in the way of the suspense at all turns. The author has put together a good plot with the potential for much suspense, and if he had a better vocabulary the book could be riveting. This book could rate 4 or 5 stars if the author knew the English language better and cleaned up the language.
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