Title: some good things here but over all needed more direction
Product review: concept was good. acting was too weak for the length of screentime they received. It could have worked if cuts were moved off of them faster. Was the old lady in some way connected--was she rescued..? Dialogue was also weak. The woman was walking along the wall at first--that was beautiful but that made me think that it was going to be her story--her history. Who the man at the memorial was there to honor was not clearly established--that was confusing. If he was looking for the pictures of his journalist grandfather to begin with then we could have connected to the jouranlist when we saw him. Who the "hero" was was not clear--I get that it was about them both but it is too short for us to have them both be the "main guy." Director needs to establish a better sense of where they are going. The story made me want to know more about the battle. Could have been better but was a good start. Battle scenes were the best.
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