Title: Could have been shorter
Product review: After reading the "The Traveling Vampire Show" by Richard Laymon I felt robbed. Three hundred and fifty pages of character development, with little story gusto. There's nothing wrong with character development if it was a novel but it's a horror book, which should mean more suspense and killings. If you read "Something Wicked This Way Comes" by Ray Bradbury that's all you need to read. This story is about a couple of kids who wreck the plans of an evil vampire who comes to their small town in a traveling vampire show. That's it. The story doesn't come alive until the last fifty pages of a four hundred page book.
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