Title: good try.
Product review: Great cover.I expected this to be good. It feels like a book that needs a lot of editing -- there's nothing wrong w/the concept, the coming of age story, the setting, some details.But, the writing is so uneven. I suspect it was self published. The writer thinks more highly of his talent than the book demonstrates.Self Indulgent.mjh
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