Title: Would be a great short story
Product review: The self-absorption and whining gets to be a bit too much nails on the chalk board. Glimmers of the author's genuine pain can be found throughout the book but nearly 400 pages is TOO much. The middle 200 pages in particular need massive editing/direction. It would be great if edited down to a short story.
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