Title: Trite - don't bother - Here's some other recommendations
Product review: I pre-view books for my neice, nephew, and my frined's sons (ages 4, 7, and 10).Don't bother with this book. The story has potential but it's writen for a reader that is assumed to be completely unintelligent (and so are the characters).Example: Kids are told not to do something...in the NEXT SENTENCE they go and do it. No story build up, no circumstance that forces the kids into it.Example: Here's a common writing method in this book..."I don't get it" said Ernie. He was confused.-Obviously he was confused. The writer doesn't have to spell it out for the reader because the character says it himself...but to make the book longer, the author does.Spend your time on better some better series:The Children of the LampThe Last ApprenticeChronicals of Ancient DarknessHarry Potter (of course)The Hobbit
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