Title: Could have been great
Product review: Although this book is flawed in many ways, I enjoyed reading it. Inside this 4 star book is a 5 star book that could have been. A good editor with creative license could have easily fixed it. At 425 pages, this book should have been trimmed, there is plenty of fluff that could have been cut. The ending was silly, took way too many pages, and would have worked much better as a sequel. The ending before the ending was much better.As a work of entertainment, I enjoyed the story. The romance captured my imagination, the action and adventure drew me in. The characters were well developed, interesting, and diverse.As a work of enlightenment, many spiritual concepts are presented. Sometimes these seamlessly enhance the story, and at others they are repetitive and preachy. The national acceptance of the spiritual concepts was unrealistic, so suspending belief before reading.Entertainment: 3.5 starsEnlightenment: 5 starsOverall: 4 stars
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