Title: doesn'tunderstand narrative
Product review: This may be the worst book I have ever read, with the possible exception of crap porn when I was a kid. At least then there were no pretensions. I was expecting a New York Times best-selling author to deliver at least a story expressed in coherent English. I was so amazed by the awful writing that I would read a passage to my 15 year old and ask his opinion. He just laughed. The characters are comic-book idiots. I can only assume he's coasting. Mr Baldacci, learn how to use a descriptive adverb!
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