Title: Contrived and disjointed
Product review: Chai attempts to write many different stories and have them converge. The result is a hodge-podge of poorly developed characters whose relationships feel contrived.Chai builds suspense by foreshadowing events, but she abuses this ploy too often! It became an annoyance.The scope of this book is ambitious, and Chai cannot live up to the challenge. Characters, emotions, and plots are lost in the hands of an amateur storyteller."The Last Time I Saw My Mother" was a touching book, but this second novel is very poorly written.
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