Title: Poorly written
Product review: I accidently came across the novel after meeting the author at an Expo in Chicago. Unfortunatley, the book which is touted to be a gritty, urban tale was a little stiff, especially the dialogue, and lost its focus at times. Sometimes the character's actions were completely off-base, and the ending was totally rushed. The introduction of vital characters toward the end of the book was a crucial mistake as I wondered, where the heck does he/she fit in? This could have used a better editor and I only finished because I make it a habit of finishing every book I start. I hope Ms. Stringer does better on the next round.
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