Title: Juvenile Writing
Product review: I have been an avid reader since I was five and a writer since I was seven. I mention this because the writing in this book goes back to my skills around the age of ten. The characters are like little cardboard cutouts with no depth at all, the motivations seem false, the "I am a good guy" or "I am a bad guy" inner monologues are ridiculous, and the author commits a serious writing no-no by telling instead of showing.I am all about a good, brainless read, but this one did not keep my attention at all. Usually I can trust reviews, but it seems that the reviews posted here are a little off this time. I feel that I need to warn intelligent readers that this feels more like young adult fiction than anything written to capture the complex minds of adults. Pass on this one.
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