Title: iUniverse needs editors
Product review: As an online work of fiction, this was a good piece of work. As a publication, it leaves a fair amount to be desired, not the least of which would be the quality of editing provided by iUniverse. I couldn't concentrate on the book because I was too busy dealing with the errors all over the place.As a novel, Roman's work is a decent start--unfortunately, having been started out in a serialized form, it doesn't make the transition to a novel very well. The story arc is jumpy, the characters display a level of awareness and emotional intensity associated only with people on Ecstasy highs, or serious hallucinogens. However, Roman isn't a bad writer--I would suggest picking this book up as a used text or borrowing it before buying it.
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