Title: Seriously in need of editing
Product review: A beautiful looking book, well illustrated and seemingly informative, until you start reading it! It has obviously been written by an Italian with an imperfect knowledge of English grammar and syntax, and it makes for very heavy reading. Sentences are long and difficult to follow. Other sentences have no verb. Some captions are wrong, and others are labelled in Italian. Star names are also in Italian, which is not helpful.Why was this book not edited for the English-speaking world? I give it two stars for its appearance, but zero if I could, for the lack of editing.
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