Title: Not impressed with the language
Product review: I can't review the author's plotlines, character development, or ability to draw in the reader. I didn't make it past the first few paragraphs. The language was such a turnoff that I deleted it from my Kindle after turning to the second page. It's not that I can't handle reading a swear word, but there are many, many fabulous authors who can write a compelling story without resorting to foul language. The first few paragraphs alone contain four different obscenities, and that's if you don't count 'whore' as a swear word.If you like that kind of thing, great--I'm sure this is the book for you. I don't use that kind of language, though, and neither do the people I live and work with, and I'd rather not see it repeatedly in print. I wish there was a way to note whether or not a book is full of swear words, because I wouldn't have bothered with downloading this one if I'd known.
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