Title: enjoyable but incomplete
Product review: Felt more of an expanded short story. The expanded print spacing is reminiscent of high school papers, in trying to make a 3 page report stretch into 5 pages. Two obvious story threads could have been expanded on to bring this up to her usual caliber:1) mafia tie-in from the shooting2) Franklin possibly having untrained gifts to deal withThis one properly belonged in one of the multi-author story collections. I've enjoyed those in the past as they've led me to other great authors.
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