Title: Starts off with promise and goes downhill from there
Product review: I could see this as a short story but it just got tedious. Chop about 10,000 words from it and it might be OK. Honestly, she notices all kinds of things in the world and in other people but seems so out of touch with her emotions the book doesn't fit together. She belongs in Princeton!
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