Title: the work of an amateur
Product review: I bought this book for the sake of the audacity of the concept. I (foolishly) thought that an idea this ridiculous must have something really exciting to redeem it in order to make it publishable, but simply stated, this is awful.Our suspension of disbelief wears off under the burden of implausibility never mitigated by any skillful artifice of the author, and soon there is just no getting past the perfectly dreadful prose. I found myself editing nearly every sentence, trying to shape those leaden and so often misaligned words into something a little more bearable. The plot(?) is just as amateurish as the prose, and the denouement is worse. No real need to go on about this monstrosity; I hated nearly everything about this in the end, and I found myself incredulous and angry that it had even been published.
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