Title: Could have been much better.
Product review: Okay so the plot was a fairly good one. There were a few holes in it (I won't give the story away by explaining them) but at points it was actually gripping and interesting and, dare I say, even scarey at times. However, the same phrase was used over and over and over again and really put a predictable damper on the story. I mean could a smell be described as something other than "cloying", please?? All noises seemed to "set their teeth on edge"...EVERY TIME!! And ditto on the fainting spells. I mean, the lady really needs some iron in her system. It became humorous. I actually considered getting out my highlighter to see just how many times each repeat phrase was mentioned throughout the book. But I knew I didn't have enough time for that.
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