Title: Needs a better editor!
Product review: I like this series and the characters very much, but they could use better editing. As other people have mentioned, there is a lot of repetition, which can become boring.One part of the story involves someone being blackmailed. The person who initially tells Mma Ramotswe about the situation says that a cleaning lady at the college told her about it. Later on the detectives wonder who else might know about the situation and be blackmailing the head cook, but never mention the cleaning lady. I would think an editor would catch that. There are other inconsistencies I have noticed in this book and the previous one. They are still fun to read as long as you enjoy the characters and the "scenic tour" along the winding plot.
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