Title: Story Drags on Too Much!
Product review: Although Julie Garwood's plot for Heartbreaker is very good; her writing defeats the entire concept because the story just drags on and on way too much. As I was reading, I kept thinking, "Get to the point!". The way the story is written, she could have said it all in 50 pages instead of over-describing every minute detail.I finally just gave up and skipped to the section that told who the creep was, which I had guessed early on anyway.Another disappointment with her style of writing is that her characters have flat personalities, they are like cardboard cutouts - they have no depth. It's as though she stands back and watches them and never really gets inside of their emotions. She doesn't allow the reader to feel anything. Laurent was asked if she was scared, she just answers, "Yes, I'm scared.". . . and nothing more, there is no indepth description of how she feels. Very boring.
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