Title: Ughhhh
Product review: Let me start by saying, the characters were believable and lovable. The story line was good and a little unbelievable. The part that irks me is the actual writing (and I don't know if I should blame this on myself, for only reading after a long day-with my mind not always into it, but.....); in one area Ben's having Molly straight out of college-that puts him at 26 (at best), but he started college at 16, so maybe he's only 20 now? In all other areas, it's implied that he's in his late 30s/early 40s, welllll which is it? In other parts, we just jumped into things, I kept asking myself "how'd that happen?" "where did that come from?". And I'd reread the last page to try and make it make sense, and sure enough-there is no explanation! Even with a good story line, only sheer determination got me to finish this book.
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