Title: Sloppy story and very sloppy proof reading
Product review: I felt that the story had alot of potential, but zero follow through. I have read three other Laymon stories and liked them. It seemed to build the characters up pretty well, getting you to care what happens to them. But like alot of the reviews (2 or 1 star ones), the story just fizzled out. The ending seemed like some crazy twist was about to happen and Slim was going to be the hero/tough girl. And I was looking forward to the new story branch and then fizz.... story over.I dont know if this was just my Kindle version, but there were sooooo many grammatical errors and strange "pastings" of "- Richard Laymon" through out the book. I have not read any other reviews with this mentioned. Seriously, was it just my copy?
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