Title: poor story developement, stilted writing
Product review: Since I only paid$.75 for this book, I didn't feel I was cheated out of any money. But I certainly felt I was cheated out of what could have been a very good story. I was not taken on a journey at all, inwardly or outwardly. Instead I just plodded along this book's path with no satisfaction to be found. It could have been a truly uplifting, insightful trip in the hands of a more elegant writer. I truly don't understand how this made it to any best seller list for any length of time.
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