Title: Romance novel masquerading as fine writing.
Product review: I can't help but flinch at the writing in this book. Submitted for your approval, quotes from the book."But if this were wrong, then what in the whole of life was right?""She turned herself loose to the liquid rhythm of their coupling and found beyond its sorrow some brief oblivion.""She gave him a sad smile then looked up at the moon in its new place and trapped pieces of it in her eyes."Trapped pieces of it in her eyes?! Ouch! That's gotta hurt! PLEASE! This book should have Fabio on the cover! This would've been rejected by any freshman creative writing class. Mr. Evans attempts at revealing the thoughts and feelings of an adolescent girl and a grown woman all sour as well. This book has bamboozled so many people. Sure wish I were a novelist who could command that kind of cash though! END
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