Title: Illiterate perv
Product review: Oh my God, this guy was a principal at a school??? Around kids??? EWYEWWW!!! IF you can overlook the total illiteracy of this writer, who has no excuse for it, then the ongoing so-called sexuality of the characters will make you gag. It isn't pulp sex, good erotica, literate sex, it isn't even interesting. It's just plain gross. His sentences often have nothing to do with the previous paragraph, he jumps from character to another scene to conversation without any coherency, and his grammar is astonishingly bad for a so-called educator. I agree with the other reviewers that his books can turn your stomach, and are a crying shame. Mayport was a very interesting place, with loads of history and a strong community. It has very little resemblance to the pervs and sadists he depicts. Don't waste your money.
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