Title: Did I read the same book?
Product review: I found this book to be so badly written that whatever imaginative message it has gets lost. The author relies heavily on dialogue to impart information. Most writers do this from time to time to advance the story, but Maddox uses it almost exclusively. Worse, the dialogue is unnatural and repetitious. I'd like to know the word counts for "Mark" and "Eddie" since he has each of his main two characters calling the other by name in nearly every sentence. In addition, the author has a problem with grammar, and I often found it difficult to understand what he was trying to say. He often uses adjectives as nouns and sometimes drops prepositions. Did he have an editor?
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