Title: Need better editing
Product review: LKH needs a graveyard full of editors...in earlier books Anita has her car totalled then after being dropped of at home by a co-worker, she receives a call from Dolph, and she drives to the crime scene, excuse me... what did she drive? Also, in Obsidian Butterfly, ever notice how Dolph became Dolf? These books are good, but I think the series could be much better if things were to flow smoothly, which would mean...without errors or time frame mishaps. Overall, wonderful books, must read in order, Anita has not only aged with the series but her gifts have grown as well.
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