Title: Would benefit from some subtlety
Product review: While it's not a terrible story, I was greatly disappointed in the author's execution. This story gives far too much away, far too early. There were many "revelations" in this book, and I can't think of any that truly surprised me. Foreshadowing is a great tool for an author when used well, but it was far too obvious here.I was also disappointed in the characters; they're very flat. For example, Amanda's motives are there, but they're not subtle in any way, and they don't provide you with a real look inside her head.
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