Title: Worse than "Exhale" ...
Product review: The politically correct term for grammatical runon garbage is "stream of consciousness"... puhleease, it was overdone and badly used. I actually had to put the book down and shut my eyes after one of those paragraph/sentences to avoid getting a migraine. Then, we have a part with Stella reading "Waiting to Exhale", 'by that Terry McMillan', geez how tacky, making references to another of your books in a fictional story....What was the point of including it in there? To let readers know that *you* know they don't like it? That's the only purpose it would serve for me, other than be an 'I'm trying to impress you' plot device. Ok... basic plot... bored rich woman goes to Jamaica, sleeps with a couple of guys, doesn't get much deeper than that. Read it if it doesn't take much to impress you, but frankly, I should try to get my 4-year-old to get published if this is all it takes.
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