Title: Poor communication skills obscure message
Product review: I bought this book because it seemed more complete than any of the other books I could find on e-commerce. Unfortunately, I found it difficult to read because of the author's poor command of English, or perhaps of writing, and the patent lack of editing in the book. I found myself getting distracted by the writer's and editor's errors. But what made the reading the hardest was the author's tendency to cram sentences together in a paragraph that did not seem to be closely related (or perhaps that he did not explicitly relate to each other). After 100 pages, I was looking for a different book to read.
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