Title: P I T I F U L!!!
Product review: This "book" is a joke. The author makes numerous grammatical errors and it's obvious that punctuation is not on her to-do list. She uses quite a few cliches too which would be alright if she knew the whole cliche. The part about Des asking Yarni's mother for her hand in marriage, not getting it, and moving 15 year old Yarni in with him anyway is far fetched, to say the least. Ms. Turner needs to take a course in creative writing which hopefully touches on spelling, grammar, and punctuation as well. I found this book a pitiful, sophmoric attempt and very hard to get through just because I kept getting disgusted with Ms. Turner's silly mistakes and less than articulate style.
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