Title: Eric van Lackluster
Product review: The book has many good points and the story moves along at a fairly good pace. However, the author's choice of the names and vocabulary do nothing to add to the story, in fact his invented words deter from the enjoyment of reading the book. We, the readers, are aware of the fact that the story does not take place on earth by the reference to five moons and the physical description of the conquering race without the jawbreaking names. The most disappointing part of the whole book was the ending. The reader knows it is going to happen, you are running out of pages, but then it happens and you have to go back several pages and read it again to see if you missed anything, because it didn't really end it just sort of... stops.
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