Title: I couldn't get past the grammar mistakes
Product review: Call me picky but I just could not get through this book. Yes the premise was cute but it boggled my mind that all of the names were capitalized, there were serious grammar and style issues, and there was no spacing between paragraphs making the book look like one very long first chapter. It is an editor's nightmare. A word of caution for anyone who is dyslexic (like me) this was a very difficult read visually.
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