Title: Too many false notes
Product review: I bought the book because it had good reviews and I was interested in the Montana setting. Unfortunetly, it didn't read very well. Too uneven, too much ho-hum folksy dialogue, too many false and just bad moments. For example the line during the sex scene on page 45, "he laid his hands on the hairs that furled into the ditch between her thighs." Ditch? I think the author tried for too much. I appreciate her ambition, but couldn't buy the characters(especially Pervis), not evn Pattian. What kind of name is that? The characters just seemed too made up and I couldn't forget that I was reading a book.
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