Title: Flat and contrived
Product review: The story had a lot of potential, but the characters were not developed and the plot was contrived. Thoughts and emotions were described in "5 words or less", jumping forward, skipping the "meat". I was disappointed with this "bestseller". For excellent writing, try "One True Thing" by Anna Quindlen. She knows how to tell a story and put you in the shoes of characters.
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