Title: Going Soon, I Hope
Product review: The first 20 pages of Coming Soon was all I could tolerate. The author's use of obscure slang and 'clever' devices such as the 'book-within-a-book,' notes from the fictitious author and memos from his fictitious mentor combined to make a work of fiction so rambling and intensely annoying that I could not force myself to continue. If you love a good story, as I do, then you will probably find youself wondering, as I did, if the author will ever get to one. Coming Soon is a work likely to make many readers wonder "Why am I not a published author?" I recommend that you read ANYTHING by Larry McMurtry instead.
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