Title: DISAPPOINTING AND VERY SLOW MOVING!
Product review: Mariel was too immature, the story was very slow moving. Antonio was 40 years old and Mariel was 18 years old. She acted her age, playing stupid little games i.e. incident in the cave and her reaction afterwards. I like the characters in my romance novels to have more substance and smarts. I like them to be real and not blow hot and cold all the time. I'm tired of Latino authors projecting Latinos as wishy, washy characters that don't know their own minds. I have read stories written by non-Latinos that have made the characters more assertive and given them more depth. I'm Latina and I had high hopes for this novel, but I was disappointed.
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