Title: Stilted writing
Product review: The premise of this book is good, but the writing style is choppy and the characters are unappealing. Despite Bailey saying she's not ready for a relationship she seems desperate to jump into bed with the detective and her ex-boyfriend. And for a journalist, her questioning definitely lacks finesse. The characters aren't portrayed in a sympathetic manner so it's hard to care who killed the victims or that the spa owner's business is being destroyed by the murders. In the hands of a better writer, this could have been a great story.
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