Title: This doesn't work!
Product review: No, this doesn't work - far from it, I'm surprised it has even been released. Foremost the plot doesn't make sense, it seems like a cross between "X-files", "Das Boat" and "The Da Vinci Code" on speed and then it doesn't seem to have been beta-red (or even delta- or gamma red) at all.It might have been a good story if someone had sat down and made an efford in editing it, chunking off dead meat, killing darlings, tying together plots and sorting out unnessesary spin offs and characters.Now it resembles more a fan fiction party in a High School computer hall than a finished novella...
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