Title: Too modern by far
Product review: This story doesn't feel like it's set in the 1920s. The problems seem too modern, and there is too much angst all around. The character of Hallie is not well developed; she turns into a one-dimensional monster. Some of the plot twists also don't ring true. Why was Oren fine when Ian was away at war, but suddenly stopped speaking when Ian moves to his own section of the house? I also didn't feel that Lily's "psychic" powers added much to the story - some were real; others not. What was the point?
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