Title: Good premise, poor editing
Product review: I had a hard time finishing this book even though I found the characters enjoyable and the overall premise engaging. I can't help but think this book could have been many times better had the author's editor had a firm hand in ensuring the dialog flowed from one paragraph to the next. I was constantly going back to read previous paragraphs and pages to see if I missed something (nope!)
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