Title: Where was the editor?
Product review: The author of this book seems well intentioned, but just was not up to the task. He seems to know quite a bit of Latino slang, but that is not enough to save the book.The plot is incoherent, the dialogue clunky, and the sex scene laughable. However, I really blame the editor for the mess. He or she seems to have run out of steam after about 100 pages and left the author to founder on his own. I doubt that even he has any idea what is supposed to be happening, and he is completely incapable of explaining it to the reader.The last straw for me was when he used "penultimate" to mean "ultimate". Buy a dictionary, dude!
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