Title: Preposterous, odd story
Product review: A lot of odd things happen to a strange leading character. Most of them unlikely. The characters do weird things without obvious motivation. The first 80 pages should have been trashed. This book desperately needed editing. Here's one sentence: "Perry pulled up a chair beside them and lit up a cigar he'd taken from the pocket of his pants which he'd been chewing on earlier that day."I think I'll go chew on my own pants for awhile...
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