Title: Readerwriter
Product review: Grisham's copy editor must have been asleep at the wheel on this book. I'm about 30 pages into the story, not too impressed at this point, although it is a page turner, until I stumbled on one narrative passage on page 12: "heavy man with the red face was running through the weeds, holding on to the car and growling." Can anyone say dangling participle? How does one run through the weeds while holding on to a car? That's some trick. He could have shuffled, side stepped, or what have you, but run? I mean, this is Grisham for God's sake. I would assume that he'd have better copy than this, not to mention better sense than to write such grammatically incorrect sentence.
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