Title: Boring Story and No Command of the English Language
Product review: I found this novel very frustrating. The story starts out promisingly enough but it quickly turns into something boring and lame. And, to add insult to injury, it is not even written in English, but in some kind of pseudo-English slang in which the rules of grammar have been tossed out the window. For example, Stephenie Meyer has an irritating habit of using "who" instead of "whom", even in places where the missing "m" is not only grammatically incorrect but also rhythmically jarring, as in the case of "who I would have hated anyway". Maybe somebody should give she English lessons so that her could learn the difference between subjects and objects.
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