Title: story needed a better writer
Product review: story starts out fine. then, along the line it seems to me there are gaps that need to be filled in in order to make really good sense of this. like the reason for the murder; writer makes it sound like because mom slapped him around he killed her, not true. he was abused and her family knew it also, so they bear blame also. maybe this guy just got tired of her and idiotic theories, moving constantly him trying to stay in school basically taking care of his brother. gotta be hard, had i been on this jury, i would have gone for manslaughter.
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