Title: Painfully Awful Dialogue
Product review: I would've given this book one star, except the plot has enough twists and the pacing is brisk enough to earn a bump. However, I know middle schoolers that can write less ridiculous dialogue. The author has an incredibly irritating tendency to have each character repeat the last two or three words that were just spoken to them. In the beginning, it was only a minor annoyance for me, but further into the book, having it occur in literally every conversation and up to 8 times on a single page, I wanted to scream. I would have thrown the book in the garbage if I hadn't been reading it on my Kindle.
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