Title: Poor followup to Hammerfall
Product review: Covers too many people and almost all on the station overhead. The planet's given short shrift and one main character supposedly an immortal has totally disappeared. Meanwhile, she's back to writing too much, spending too much time with trivial or overworked through processes of the characters.The concepts aren't bad, but they only take up a much shorter amount of text than has been used. If less space had been taken up on Concord and the trivial details and more on the politics and environmental changes on the planet I think it would have been much more balanced and interesting.
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