Title: Worst case of editing I have even seen
Product review: Not only are parts of this story farfetched, the editing is terrible. One character is said "to be in her late thirties." A few pages later her father is said "to be in his late forties." Two women are said to be cousins and a few pages later are half-sisters. Is Colin Forbes getting too old to write or as a well-known author his manuscripts are not carefully edited?
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