Title: Basic story there but could've been developed more.
Product review: "Midnight Radio" has a good premise--a radio station being haunted. And the author made some good choices relating to the characters, namely that the main one, Ryan Knox, is suffering from real problems in the midst of encountering this haunting.The only problem is that the author misses some key instances where the story could've been developed a bit more. Ryan's wife is only minimally developed, so that I'm on the verge of caring about her loss, but am not quite there. Perhaps some flashbacks with dialog would've helped. There's also a scene where Ryan's doing an aside to the reader about a co-worker, Dave, and how he introduces him to his wife. Personally, I think doing this totally spoils the surprise when we encounter the woman later in the story.It's a decent book, but it's definitely not best seller material.
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