Title: Somewhat engaging, but awkward plot
Product review: I purchased The Negotiator thinking it was a mystery novel, which it is to some extent. I was not aware of the religious overtones of the book, and found their introduction into the story somewhat disruptive.The mystery elements of the book are engaging, and the overall writing is better than average. The plot line is relatively strong, and there is enough action to be engaging.However, the discussions of Christianity were rather forced. When Dave, the lead character, is reflecting on his religious beliefs, the text is consistent with his character. The discussions about God are awkward, and Kate's sudden conversion to being a "believer" based on a deal she constructs with via prayer is not a good fit with her characterization in the novel.Anyone who wants a G-rated read will enjoy this book, or if you can move past the over management of parts of the storyline, you may enjoy it overall.
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