Title: OK Story Line... Horrible Editing!
Product review: I haven't finished the book; I am only on the first few chapters. But the grammatical and punctuation errors in this book are ridiculous! Just because the book is about the 'hood doesn't mean that the author/editors can write correctly.I'm not speaking about the word choices and language used. I expect that from this type of novel. I'm talking about misplaced and unnecessary commas, run-on sentences, etc. I'm enjoying the story, but trying to decipher what Ms. Turner is saying is giving me quite a headache!
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