Title: Horrible writing
Product review: Just because this book was intended for the teenaged audience doesn't make it okay that the writing is grammatically spotty, cliched, and wordy. Here is an example of a sentence (one of hundreds) that the author and editor should be ashamed of: "I deliberated where I stood, wanting to return to him badly." This literally means, "I thought about where I was standing, wanting my return to him to be a bad one." Basic mistakes and a dull, long-winded story with one-dimensional, stereotyped characters made this an utter waste of my time. That the author is worth fifty million dollars scares me.
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