Title: Stay outside of this one
Product review: I plodded along, trying to get interested, but quit half way through. I simply didn't like any of these people. The author couldn't make up her mind whose POV to use, her own or Alice's. In one scene, Alice is hiding from everyone else at the picnic, but she still hears conversations, while the people she's observing are from another pov (the author's). Also a mess of pronoun confusion: "her" and "his" and "their" could mean any one of several people within a sentence or paragraph.
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