Title: Grammatical errors overshadow substance
Product review: Ms. Moorhead's book is an attempt to tell her story. This book was obviously not edited. While Ms. Moorhead brags about being in "honors" English classes, she misuses "there" and "their" throughout the book, puts too much information in parentheses, and didn't even bother to spell check certain chapters. Being a fellow MS sufferer, I had looked forward to the book. However, the nonexistent editing was so distracting that I could not enjoy the content. Ms. Moorhead would have done better to wait for a publisher who would have helped her produce a viable work. This is not it.
Would you say this review depicts the product in a flattering or unflattering light?
