Title: Not in my destiny to finish this book
Product review: This book started off where Noble Intentions left off, which I thought might be promising, as the former book had some good moments before it started devolving into total ridiculousness. I quickly realized the problem with Noble Destiny is that it never takes off on its own feet. MacAlister loves the long-winded banter and comebacks between characters -- the humor is forced and tedious after the 3rd or 4th go around between Dare and Batsfoam, and Charlotte's malapropisms are an overdone joke. I got the impression MacAlister had a deadline to meet in getting this book out, and this ended up being a pile of piffle I could no longer suffer through. Still in all MacAlister can write when she puts her mind to it; she just needs to stay focused on her characters and story line. Right now this story is just too silly and rangy to be even half funny or entertaining.
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