Title: Not as good as it could have been.
Product review: The authors should have concentrated more on the mission, or more on the training than writing a little about each. Two books could have been written allowing for more character development, better background introduction, and less repetition of the character's thoughts and feelings. The story line was okay , but could have been much better with some careful writing.
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