Title: Great idea, bad writer.
Product review: The world was fascinating. The concept was fresh. The author should have put it into a short story. As it was he beat the reader to death with useless facts, backgrounds, and sidetracks to dead ends. The author did have some interesting writing conventions as he leapt the reader from one failed eigenstate to a successful one. This writer should be forced to write only short stories until he learns how to pace a full novel/novella.
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