Title: Editing Please!!
Product review: Interesting subject matter, but poorly written. The author repeats herself excessively, to the point that she actually insults the reader's ability to recall the connections that were made a few pages earlier. I get it already, tell me something new! There has to be a biography about Natalie out there that has more substance, less repitition, and better editing!
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