Title: Big on fish, short on story
Product review: While the basic idea for this story is fairly bulletproof, several things got in the way of it really being good. (1) When writing about a theme we've all seen before (big fish, big dinosaurs, big monkeys, etc.) the basic story is really has to be more sophisticated. (2) Even though it's fiction, the research needs to be better. Alten's brought a prehistoric fish into modern times. Note what it can and cannot do (be more realistic). (3) Now, let's work on that dialogue..
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