Title: Heartfelt sentiments in pedantic prose
Product review: I am a dedicated teacher who loves to read. This book appeals to me as a teacher, but loses me as a reader. The same points are made over and over again in the first section of the book; I found myself increasingly irritated by the editing errors that abound on each page. The same quotations are repeated several times, sometimes in the span of a few pages. It reads like a collection of notes scribbled too fast.As Ms. Collins might say to one of her students, "Nice try, but why don't we try proofreading this to make it better?"
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