Title: Intriguing premise, but so poorly written
Product review: The scientific underpinnings of this thriller are intriguing, especially in light of the documents published as an afterword. But the writing is amateurish and so wooden that it gets in the way of the story. In the hands of a better writer (or editor) this would be truly powerful.
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