Title: Great plot-limited vocabulary
Product review: The plot was great but the author's vocabulary could have used some divine intervention. The word "brief" was used three times in the first three sentences of the book. I nearly put the book down before I had finished the first page. Secondly, I found it bothersome that the phrase "she blew her hair (or bangs). . ."was used eight times in reference to Helen. The character development was also lacking.
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