Towards Chapter-to-Chapter Literary Translation Via Large Language Models
neural machine translation;context-aware neural machine translation;literary translation
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1. The paper introduces a Chapter-to-Chapter translation dataset, JAM, which provides new resources and challenges for document-level translation research.
2. Through experiments, it offers a thorough analysis of the main challenges encountered in CH2CH translation.
The paper proposes a Chapter-to-Chapter (CH2CH) translation task, which is a more practical and challenging translation scenario. To support this task, the authors constructed a dataset of 132 literary works along with their professional Chinese translations and investigated the performance of common machine translation models under the CH2CH setting.
Lack of innovation. The paper employs repetition penalties and the removal of redundant clauses to address translation repetition issues, which is conventional. Overall, the paper lacks substantial methodological contributions.
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- Could you discuss any potential biases present in the JAM dataset, and do you plan to extend the CH2CH translation approach to other domains?
- Are there plans to test the proposed fine-tuning procedure on languages other than Chinese and English? What challenges might arise in such efforts?
- The paper addresses the issue of repetition in LLMs. Could the authors suggest potential solutions or improvements to decoding algorithms to mitigate this problem?
- Can the authors elaborate on the specific challenges posed by long-context translation and how their proposed methods address these challenges?
- The paper introduces a new translation setting that shifts focus from sentence and paragraph alignments to chapter-level, marking a significant advancement in the field of machine translation.
- It presents a new Chinese-English literary dataset, JAM, consisting of 132 books to support research in this area.
- The paper uncovers challenges in chapter-level translation through detailed analysis.
The paper introduces a novel approach to context-aware machine translation by proposing a chapter-to-chapter (CH2CH) translation setting. The authors curate a new Chinese-English literary dataset, JAM, consisting of 132 books to facilitate research in this area. They evaluate the performance of common machine translation models within the CH2CH framework and propose a fine-tuning procedure for large language models (LLMs) to improve translation quality. Furthermore, the paper highlights the challenges associated with chapter-level translation through comprehensive analysis.
- The paper could benefit from a more detailed comparison with existing translation models and commercial translation systems, such as Google Translate and Bing Translator.
- While the JAM dataset is a valuable resource, the authors might consider discussing the potential biases or limitations inherent in a dataset derived from literary works.
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Which GPT-4 variant is used? Did the authors try GPT-4o or GPT-4o-mini?

Why was segmentation of chapters needed for the GPT-4 experiments? A 2048 token segmentation will cut out 90% of the chapter for longer chapters like Robinson Crusoe.

Please combine Table 3 with Figure 7, so that it's possible to direclty compare fine-tuned models with zero-shot models like GPT-4.

Nit: It would be more helpful to provide the average number of sentences / words *per* en/zh article in Table 2.
1. This paper studies an important and relatively underexplored topic: document-level machine translation. Moreover, the contributions are in the literary domain which has important downstream applications: translations of novels / articles.

2. The paper contributes a nice document-level MT dataset of 4.2K parallel en/zh pairs at a chapter level.

3. The paper includes a number of interesting ablations: enc-dec vs decoder-only, comparison of decoding strategies, slicing by token repetition amounts, chapter-level vs sentence-level translation.
This paper presents a new dataset for "chapter-to-chapter" machine translation, called JAM. The JAM dataset contains 4.2K parallel chapter pairs from 132 books in Chinese-English literature, and on average each en/zh pair contains ~2K words.

The main difference from prior work in document-level MT such as Thai et al. 2022 [1], the dataset does not assume a 1:1 mapping between paragraphs in the source and target language. Instead, the mapping is at a chapter level (so the source/target need not have the same number of paragraphs).

The authors conduct a number of experiments on their newly introduced dataset, including (1) seq2seq models trained from scratch; (2) models pretrained on WMT sentence level translation data before JAM fine-tuning; (3) zero-shot LLMs (like GPT4) for translation. Overall, the authors conclude that the most effective small sized models are obtained after a two stage fine-tuning: sentence level data followed by JAM. The authors also find GPT-4 is surprisingly effective, seemingly outperfoming fine-tuned models.

[1] - https://aclanthology.org/2022.emnlp-main.672/
1. **The paper is lacking a human evaluation**, and it's unclear if BLEU / Blonde are suitable to evaluate JAM outputs. [1, 2, 3] suggests that BLEU / Blonde are very poor proxies for evaluating document level machine translation. On a related note, Figure 8 shows a very small difference between a chapter-level and sentence-level translation. This further makes me think the metric maybe not capturing the unique aspects of document-level MT. I suggest the authors to use aspects of the human evaluation from [4] to complement their automatic metrics.

2. **The technical contribution in the paper feel fairly incremental compared to Par3** ([1]). Both Par3 and JAM operate in a literary domain, and Par3 contains many more language pairs beyond en/zh. The chapter level mapping of JAM is a nice addition, but it's not empirically clear how much this adds over a paragraph-level aligned dataset.

3. **The paper has a limited focus on zero-shot pretrained LLMs baselines**, which according to Figure 7 / Table 3 seem to be the strongest at this task and are being preferred for translation applications. There are a number of interesting questions to explore here: (1) do specialized long context models like Gemini 1.5 Pro do better on JAM? (2) Are Chinese-focused LLMs better than English-focused LLMs? (3) Do pretrained LLMs use a 1:1 mapping at a paragraph/sentence level, or do they perform discourse-level operations? (4) Does GPT-4o / Gemini 1.5 Pro solve some of the critical translation errors listed in [4]?

4. **No qualitative examples or analysis was provided** for the dataset or for the translation model outputs. These are critical to get a general feel of the quality of the dataset, and understand the weaknesses in document-level MT for current models.

[1] - https://aclanthology.org/2022.emnlp-main.672  
[2] - https://statmt.org/wmt22/pdf/2022.wmt-1.6.pdf  
[3] - https://arxiv.org/pdf/2302.09210  
[4] - https://arxiv.org/pdf/2304.03245
our work investigates the efficacy of LLMs in literary translation and proposes a context-aware paradigm known as chapter-level translation within this domain.
@inproceedings{
anonymous2024towards,
title={Towards Chapter-to-Chapter Literary Translation Via Large Language Models},
author={Anonymous},
booktitle={Submitted to The Thirteenth International Conference on Learning Representations},
year={2024},
url={https://openreview.net/forum?id=aa5hoHNheb},
note={under review}
}
Discourse phenomena in existing document-level translation datasets are sparse, which has been a fundamental obstacle in the development of context-aware machine translation models. Moreover, most existing document-level corpora and context-aware machine translation methods rely on an unrealistic assumption on sentence-level alignments. To mitigate these issues, we first curate a novel dataset of Chinese-English literature, which consists of 132 books with intricate discourse structures. Then, we propose a more pragmatic and challenging setting for context-aware translation, termed chapter-to-chapter (Ch2Ch) translation, and investigate the performance of commonly-used machine translation models under this setting. Furthermore, we introduce a potential approach of fine-tuning large language models (LLMs) within the domain of Ch2Ch literary translation, yielding impressive improvements over baselines. Through our comprehensive analysis, we unveil that literary translation under the Ch2Ch setting is challenging in nature, with respect to both model learning methods and translation decoding algorithms.
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