manachi bhavna

"odd too sayak" hii johnn keatschee 1819 chya vasant rututil eka kavita aahe. hii kavita tyachya 1819 chya odapaiki pahili aahe, jyat "odd aun aaa grician kalash" aanee "odd too aaa nightingale" yancha samavesh aahe. "odd too sayak' haah odd shailitil eka prayog aahe aanee keatscha sonnet swarupachya vistarit aavruttivarcha prayatna aahe joou natyamay drushyache varnan karato. hii kavita keatschya suruvatichya kavitanpasoon eka mahattvache vegalepan mhanoon kaam karate, jyat varanvar aekhadyachya kalpanechya sukhad kshetrat sutakeche varnan kele jaate. keats kalpanashakticha vapar karoon kathavachkala manache punarutthan karnyacha aanee swatahla eros (prem) madhye punarjanm denyacha hetu darshavito. keats tyachya manacha eka "aniyantrit pradesh" durlakshit devichya pujesathi samarpit karoon yacha prayatna karato.
parshvabhoomi.
keats kadhihi vyavsayik lekhak navhate. tyaeivaji, tyane eka chhotya utpannane swatache bharanposhan kele jeey tyane tyaa vyaktichya ispitalasathi shalyachikitsak mhanoon kamavale. vayachya 23 vya varshi, kavita lihinyasathi swatahla samarpit karnyasathi, keatsney aapale utpannache srot gamavoon rugnalay sodale. too charles braun yaa mitrasobat rahat hota, jyane 1819 chya vasant rutumadhye tyala pathimba detana keatschee kavita gola kelee aanee kavita lihili. yaa prayatnanchya suruvatichya utpadananmadhye 'laa bele dame sance mercy' aanee 'odd too sayake' yancha samavesh hota, jeey tyaa varshi tyanni lihilelya ods maliketil pahile hote. hii kavita pratyakshat kevha purn jhaali heey anishchit aahe, parantu keatsney 3 meey 1819 roji aaplya bhawala eka sanlagn patra pathavun hii kavita pathavali, jyat mhatale aahe qee, "khaleel kavita, jee mea shevatchi lihili aahe, tee pahili aanee ekmev kavita aahe jichyadvare mea agadi madhyam vedna ghetalya aahet; mea bahutek vela ghaeet majhya olee bund kelya aahet; heey mea aaramat kele aahe; mallah vatate qee tee tyasathi adhik samruddhapane vachate aanee mallah aasha aahe qee itar goshti aanakhi shant aanee nirogi bhavnene lihinyas mallah protsahit karel."
keats heey manas kalpit kathanchya kahee strotanchya samparkat aale. yaa pauranik kathechya tyachya samkalin strotanmadhye johnn lampriorcha 'shastriy shabdakosh' aanee merrie tayagche 'sayak', 1805 madheel eka kaam jeey keatsney lahanpani vachale aanee 1818 madhye parat aale. keatsney tyacha bhau georgela, 'odd too sayak' lihinyachya kahee mahine aadhi, asey lihile qee tayagchya likhanane tyala aata anand jhaala nahee. asamadhani houn, tyane 1566 madhye william edlingtonne anuvadit kelelya apuliyasachya 'golden gadhav' kadey valale aanee cupid aanee mansik mithakachi purvichi aavrutti vachali. heey pustak vachalyanantar aanee roman pauranik kathanchya sandhyela hii pauranik katha prasthapit jhaali aahe heey lakshat aalyanantar, keatsney georgela lihileh "tumhala heey lakshat aale pahije qee auguston yuganantar yuganantar apulayus yaa platonistchya kalapurvi munn devi mhanoon moort swarupat navhate aanee parinami devichi kadhihi konatyahi pracheen utsahane pooja kelee gelee nahee kinwa teela balee dile gele nahee-aanee kadachit junya dharmat kadhihi vichar keela gela nahee-mea eka pararashtriy devila itake durlakshit karoo denyapeksha adhik rudhivadi aahe."
rachana.
"keatschee 'odd too sayake' hii 67 ola, hii 1819 madheel tyanchya pramukh odspacky pahili hotee. asha prakare, hii kavita odey sanrachanetil eka prayog aahe jyavar teey nantar tyanchya pudhil paach odsasathi avalambun hote. keatsney kavitechya bhashecha vichar karnyat vel ghalavala asala taree, shabdalekhan aanee shabdarachana yanchi nivad tyachya nantarchya kamanmadhye charananmadhye khalee aahe, jyat 'hyperian' kinwa tyanantarchya odscha samavesh aahe. "odey too sayak" heey mahattvache aahe kaaran keatscha badalalelya sonnet swarupatil haah pahila prayatna aahe jyamadhye adhik lamb olee asateel aanee sandesh kinwa satyasah samapt hoil. tasech, hii kavita keval tyaa sandeshavar aadharit asavi ashee tyanchi ichcha navhati, mhanoon tyanni kavitechya prastavnesah kathanak aanee patransarkhe varnanatmak ghatak samavisht kele. yaa jodyanpaiki, tyanchya pudhil odsmadhye prastavna vaparane bund karnyat aale aanee kavitanmadhil mandaniche varnan karnare tapasheel kadhoon taknyat aale; teey keval nantarchya odsmadhye soochit kele jaatil.
etch. doubleu. garraudne keatschya sonnet swarupachya vishleshanamadhye asey manale aahe qee keatsney sonnet swarupanche vividh pailu ghetale aanee keval tech samavisht kele jeey tyala vatale qee tyachya kavitela fayda hoil. visheshtah, keats petrarkchya sonnet rachana aanee petrarkchya ashtak charananmadhye charananmadhye aadhalanaya tukadyanvar' avalambun asatat. matra, emm. aar. keats petrarkla anukool aahe yavar ridley vaad ghalato aanee dawa karato qee odsmadhye shakespearechi kavita yojana samavisht aahe. aahe konatyahi sonnet sanrachanela pasanti dilee gelee asali taree, keatsna donhi prakaranche dushparinam talhayche hote. "odd too sayake' chee suruvat shakespearechya badalalelya kavita yojnepasoon hote. sampoorn kavitemadhye prasancha vapar suru rahat nahee aanee tyanantar tyanantar olee vegvegalya gatanmadhye vibhagalya jaatatah eka chaturthansh, dohe aanee eka swatah chee ola. tyanantar shakespearechya sonnet swarupanusar tayar kelelya baaraa olinchi malika tayar kelee jaate, parantu tyat antim dohoncha abhav asato. pudhil olee done chaturthansh aahet, jyanchi pras aahe, tyanantar done olee aahet jyaa mageel prasanchi punaravrutti karatat aanee nantar eka antim chaturthansh, jyanchi pras aahe.
kavita.
yaa kavitet mool cupid aanee mansik mithakanchya kathanakache varnan kelele naheeh harrold bloomchya matey, yaa kavitecha "sweekrut mithkashi farsa sambandh nahee". mool dantkathemadhye, kamottejak, eka prashansaneey mulgi asalelya mansiktela, cupidne tichya premat padnyasathi tyachya shakticha vapar karoon shiksha karato. tyaeivaji, cupid tichya premat padato, parantu too keval aapali olakh lapavanyasathi tichyabarobar andharachya jhakanat rahoo shakat hota. kutuhalane, tee cupidchi olakh ughad karnyasathi prakash vaparte, parantu too tichya upasthitipasun paloon jaato. munn cupidcha shodh gheu lagate aanee ephrodite teela tichya premashi ekjoot honyapurvi vividh kaame karnyas bhag padate. eka kamatoon jawaljawal maran pavlyanantar, cupid ziasla manache devimadhye rupantar karnyas sangato jenekarun doghe ekatra rahoo shaktil.
odey too sayake' chee krutee eka kathakarane done vyaktinna alingan detana pahanyas suruvat hote. kathakar lagech cupidla olakhato aanee jevha too manachi olakh patavato tevha aashcharyachakit hotoh
tisari shlok hii naveen devi asali taree itar devatanpeksha munn kase changle aahe yache varnan karate. tathapi, itaranchi pooja kelee jaat asatana tichyakade durlaksh kele jaateh
dharmik upasanechya babatit manamadhye kashachi kamatarata aahe yachee mageel yadee keval upasanechya bahya chinhanche varnan karate. chauthya charanat, kathakar jevha too mansiktene kassa prerit aahe yache varnan karato tevha too antargat goshtinvar bharr detoh
tarun devipasoon prerit houn kathakar ticha pujari banato. tyachi kalpanashakti tyala manachya naisargik aanee alaukik asha donhi ghatkanshi jodanyas anumati dete aanee tyachi upasana swatamadhye asate tarr 'odey too sayake' hii kavita devichi stutee karnare gaane mhanoon kaam karate. kathakar manasathi paigambar banato aanee shevatchya charanat mhanatoh
kavitechya shevati, kathakar rupkatmakpane mhanato qee too tyachya chetanecha vistar karel, jyamule tyala jagachya changlya aanee white yaa donhi goshti adhik changlya prakare samajoon gheta yeteel. yamule kathakarala manas eka abhayaranya pradan kartana prerana denari naveen bhavna prapt karata yeilah
vishay.
jyaa kshani cupid aanee mansikta prakat hote teey kshan heey "kitsian tivrateche" eka udaharan aahe kaaran teey naan vegale honyachya sthiteet aahet aanee naan teey ekjoot aahet; teey keatschya "grician kalshavar odd" madhye chitrit kelelya aakrutyanpramanech kuthetari tyaa sthiteet astitvat aahet. yaa sanyogache sakshidar honyachi kathavachakanchi kshamata hii keatschya manas kalpit kathechya aavruttisathi adviteey aahe kaaran mool katheteel premi andharat jhakalele hote. tathapi, kathakar tyanna ajibat pahoo shakala qaa kinwa too swapna pahat hota qaa assa prashna vicharato. too jagrut hota qee nahee heey jaanun ghenyas kathakar asamarth aahe, hii eka sankalpana keatschya anek odsmadhye disun yete, jyat 'odd aun alasata', 'odd aun aaa greekian kalash' aanee 'odd too aaa nightingale' yancha samavesh aahe. kathavachak chetanechya sthiteet asala taree, too swatahla cupidshee jodanyas saksham aahe kaaran too swatahla manachya premat asalyache, manache pratinidhitva karato assa vishvas thevato.
odey too sayake' madheel samasyecha eka bhag mhanje kathavachakane kelelya davyat aahe qee itar greek-roman devatanpeksha nantar tee devi bunley mhanoon manakade durlaksh kele gele. asha prakare, kathakar aatmyala samarpit asaleli eka bhavishyasuchak vyakti mhanoon kaam karato. aatmyachi upasana hii kalpanechya vaparadvare hote, hii eka kalpana aahe jee kavitechya sankalpananvar william wordsworthcha prabhav darshavate. visheshtah, yaa olee prerana aanee wordsworthchya 'daad reclues' madheel sangeet yaa varnananchi aathvan karoon detat. manachi seva karnyasathi, 'odey too sayake' chaa kathakar tyachya manachya kshetrancha sakhol shodh gheuun tichi pooja karnyacha prayatna karato. matra, tyachya manat devila samarpit kelele mandir adyap astitvat nahee.
yatoon asey disun yete qee kalpak anubhavachya swikrutimadhye sangharsh aahe joou manachya keval eka chhotya bhagat astitvat aahe. walter evertchya matey, yaa sangharshacha bahya krutichya jagashi konatahi sambandh nahee aanee kadachit swatah swapnadrashta swapnadrashtachyapudhi satya nahee."tathapi, anthany hect samasyekade vegalya paddhatine pahato aanee tyacha assa vishvas aahe qee, kathavachkala samasyecha samna karnyasathi bahya aanee antargat jagamadhye eka sambandh asane aavashyak aahe. kahihi jhaale taree, hii manachi upasana kinwa kalpanashakti swikarlyane manavjatila madat hoil asey kathakar kadhihi mhanat nahee, parantu kalpanashakticha vapar karnyat kavita aanandit hote.
swatahla manat samarpit karnyachya sankalpanevyatirikt, swagatachi sankalpana kavitechya sadarikaranavar mothya pramanat bharr dete; andreau bennet mhanato qee kavita, serve kavitanpramanech, swatahun (aanee mhanoon aikali jaat nahee) aanee kavita kavita aanee tee vegalya paddhatine paddhatine prekshakanni 'aikali' jaate. bennet soochit karato qee pahilya oleet 'vring' yaa shabdamadhye duheri antarbhav aahe kaaran too sakriy aikanyashi sambandhit 'kananmadhye vajane' dekhil soochit karato. kathakar aanee devi yanchyatil sambhashanat vachkala truteey paksh mhanoon kavita hatalane heey keatschya anek odsmadhye samanya asalelya kathanatmak prashnache udaharan aahe aanee vachkane tyachya kavitetil kinwa tyachya baherchya sthanala nemke kase manale pahije assa prashna bennetla vicharayala pravrutt karate.
samikshatmak swagat.
yaa kavitela uttar detana, keatscha mitra leh huntney ghoshit kele qee, "jevha mister keats tyachya kavitet chuka karatat, tevha teey changlya goshtinchya chukichya vyavasthapanamule hote,-kalpanancha utsah. ekada kinwa donada, too sakaratmak white chav, jase qee marino kinwa kauli, tyachya 'aud too sayake' madheel eka olipramane karato... pann too tyachya sadhyachya khandat fakt ekada kinwa donada aahe."
aahe." shatkatil sahityik samikshak robbert bridges yanni "shevatchya vibhagasathi (aaa. 50 teey shevat), heey yaa aakshepasathi khule aahe qee kalpana samore aananyasathi pratima tayar kelee jaate-jee keatschya paddhatiche vaishishtya aahe. tarihi atyant saundarya pratyek asantosh shant karate. yaa odachi suruvat itaki changli nahee aanee madhala bhag utkrushtatechya madhyabhagi aahe."nantar tii. ess. eleotne keatschya karyabaddal khoop uchch vichar keela aanee lihile qee "odd-visheshtah" aud too sayak "-tyachya pratishthesathi purese aahet."
odey too sayake' yaa konatyahi sambhavya kathor tikela virodh kartana, keneth allot assa yuktivad karatat qee hii kavita 'keatschya mahan odschee kendrabindu aahe, parantu tyakade itake durlaksh qaa kele pahije heey samajane katheen aahe aanee kiman done kavee asey soochit karatat qee kavitechi paramparik vaganuk kharab aanee ayogya aahe. tyanantar allot yanni 'brij aanee ellitt' yaa tyanchya sahanubhootipurn matancha ullekh keela aanee tyancha assa vishvas aahe qee hii kavita 'bekaydeshir kinwa sarvottam nahee, parantu majhyasathi tee itar konatyahi keatschya kavyatmak shaktichya malkipeksha, tyachyasathi eka asamanya kalatmak aliptata hotee, tyaa vyatirikt, tyachya swatachya adhikarat eka ullekhaneey kavita aahe. haah odscha sarvat sthapatyashastriy prakar aahe asey mhananyacha haah aanakhi eka marg asoo shakato, kaaran too nishchitach sarvat natyamaypane samapt hoto."
walter jackson bett mhanatat qee yaa kavitene "vachakanna nehmich gondhalat takale aahe... pann hii kavita itaki durmil vatalyane, itaranna adhik changlya prakare olakhalyanantarach aapan tyakade paratato. jarr aamhala teey chavya mhanoon vaparanyachi aasha asel tarr teey kulupat neat basat naheet asey aamhala aadhalate. darmyan, tyanni aamhala eka manak dile aahe jeey katheen teey samaan aahe. mhanoon ektar 'odey too sayak' baddal aaplyala nirasha vatate kinwa kalji kalji lokanni tee dilee asalyache lakshat gheuun, aamhi punha ekada kavita bhavishyatil vicharansathi bajula thewali."tathapi, teey asehi mhanatat qee" yaa sanmanabaddalchi aadhunik, aadaryukt vrutti yogya aahe. parantu navinatesathichya khajanene kahee samikshakanna asey suchavanyas protsahit kele aahe qee yaa kavitet, kahee gadad parantu moolbhut margane, nantarchya odspeksha sampurnatah adhik aahe."
harrold fulanyasathi, keatschya odechya shevatchya olee "mithak-nirmiti vidyashakheche prateek mhanoon konatyahishi spardha karatat". teey yavar adhik tapshilvar lihitat, "'odey too sayake' hii kavita adviteey aahe aanee madhyavarti dekhil aahe, kaaran tichi qalaa hii nisargatoon naisargik vaadh aahe, kaaran tee chetanechya eka atishay vishisht krutivar aadharit aahe, jee tyachya serve thosatemadhye pakad nirman karate."

