
baag, rakh

garden, ashes () hii yugoslav lekhak danilo kiss yanchi 1965 salchi kadambari aahe. "garden, aish' haah chitrapat kisachya balpanavar aadharit aahe. william jeey. yanni kelele ingraji bhashantar. hannaher, 1975 madhye harcortney prakashit kele.
samagri.
katha eka tarun mulachya drushtikonatun sangitali jaate, andy scam, joou kadambarichya suruvatila yugoslaviatil novi sadmadhye rahato. tyache anupasthit vadil, edward scam heey eka vilakshan aanee katekor railway nirikshak aahet aanee eka lekhak aahet jyanche apoorn kaam mhanje 'bus, jahaj, railway aanee havai pravas margdarshak' navachya pravas margdarshakachi tisari aavrutti aahe-adyayavat aavrutti, jee scam kadhihi purn karnar nahee, tee tyachya vyaptimadhye vishvakosh aahe. genderm sainikanni tyanchyavar golya zadlyanantar, edward tyachya kutumbala hangerimadhye halvato jithe andy prathamik shalet pravesh karato. nantar edwardla eka ghettot pathavale jaate aanee nantar tyala aushwitzla haddapar kele jaate, aanee too tyachya kutumbakade kadhihi parat yenar nahee. edward bahudha chhavanitach marto, matra andy thampane sangato qee tyache vadil nuktech gayab jhaale aahet.
edwardchya jaanyanantar kathatmak rachana adhik tutate. andy kalpana karato qee tyache vadil bhesat tyacha pathlag karat aahet aanee tyachya palakanchya pahilya bhetibaddal katha shodhatat. andy kabool karato qee "jyapasoon majhe vadil kathetoon, kadambaritun gayab jhaale, tevhapasoon serve kahee shithil jhaale aahe, tutale aahe."kadambarichya shevatchya drushyat, andy tyach jangalat bhatakato, jeey purvichya kalpanik chakmakiche thikan hote, jyamadhye edwardwar sahyogi guptaher asalyacha aarop karnyat aala hota. too dawa karato qee tyachya vadilanche 'bhoot' tyaa jangalanna tras dett aahe. andhar padat asalyane andichi aaee tyala nighun jaanyas protsahit karate.
andy avishvasaniy kalpanashil aahe, eka dosh. too varanvar yenanya duhswapnanni trast aahe aanee tyachya vadilanchya bhramanni trast aahe. kadambarichya shevati, jevha too sahsi kadambya vachoo lagato, tevha too tyachya kalpanet adthala aanoo lagato.
shaili.
yaa kadambarichi rachana "ardh-spasht kelelya sahasancha shithilpane jodalela kalkramanusar kram" mhanoon kelee aahe. bahutansh laksh vadilanvar kendrit asate aanee garib paristhitit katheen paristhitit jagana aaee aanee mulache kaay hote heey keval anshatach spasht kele jaate. vadilancha konatahi naitik nirnay denyas nakar dett, keesane tyala eka guntaguntiche, "goodh aanee ardh-vede" asey chitrit kele aahe..., eka vaktrutvashil bhasha aanee kalpanik munn asalela manus jyane varanvar kutumb, sanyam aanee tark tyagala, "merlyn croucherchya matey.
andy jaree lahan asala taree tyacha kathanatmak aavaj ullekhaniyaritya paripakv aahe. marqa thompson yanni andiche varnan 'eka sankarit kathakar' mhanoon kele aahe, joou eka kushal kalakarachya abhivyakti shaktila maryadit samjasah-parantu amaryadit kalpanashakti kinwa antardnyanasah-eka tarun vyaktichya samajutimadhye misalato."
aatmacharitratmak ghatak.
keesane ughadpane kabool kele qee scam kutumb tyachya swatachya kutumbavar aadharit hote. mallah khatri aahe qee heey mea aahe, qee teey majhe vadil, majhi aaee, majhi baheen aahe", keesane "baag, rakh" yaa mulakhatit sangitale.
edward scam heey kishchya swatachya vadilanshi (edward asehi naav aahe) tyachya rupat, vilakshan vyaktimatvat aanee railway nirikshak-saha-pravas margdarshak lekhak mhanoon karkirdit samya aahe.
kadambarichya ghatana dusya mahayuddhadarmyanchya kisachya vastavik jivanacha barkaine magova ghetat. tyachya kalpanik samakakshapramane, edward kiss novi sadmadhye genderm adhikadhyanchya golibarat jhalelya mrutyupasoon agadi qamee antarane vachala, nantar tyachya kutumbala hangerimadhye halavale. scampramanech edward keesala dekhil eka ghettyat maryadit thevanyat aale aanee nantar aushwitzla pathvanyat aale.
andine kadambarimadhye kelyapramane, keys swatah aagrah dharayacha qee tyache vadil chhavanit maran pavale navhate, tarr teey keval "gayab" jhaale hote."
vishay aanee chinhe.
gayak shivankam yantra.
andichya aaiche gayak shivankam yantra heey kadambaritil eka aavarti prateek aahe. keesh yantra tapshilvar varnan karate aanee yantrache rekhachitra samavisht karate, jenekarun keval andichi aaee saundarya nirman karnyasathi yantra vaparte asey nahee tarr yantra swatach sunder aahe heey sanganyasathi. heey saundarya ghar kinwa gharee jaanyachya kshamateche prateek aahe. jevha scam hangerila paloon jaatat, tevha yuddhachya gondhalat shivankam yantra haravate."heey nuksan heey yuddh andiche ghar kase uddhvast karate yache prateek aahe.
mrutyu.
tyachya kakancha mrutyu jhaala aahe heey aikalyavar, andy tyachya swatachya mrutyuvar vedepanane jagoo lagato. hii jaaniv aatm-vishleshanachya dishene andiche pahile paul mhanoon pahili jaau shakate. zopechya devdutanna pakadoon andy mrutyula maat karnyacha nirdhar karato."jaree too yaa prayatnat yashasvi jhaala nasla taree, tyachya swatachya mrutyushi andicha sangharsh patrache sanvedanshil swaroop prakat karato aanee heey spasht karato qee kiss balpanatil nirdoshateche aadarsh nahee.
swapne.
sampoorn kadambarimadhye andy duhswapnanni grasslela aahe. tyachya swatachya mrutyuvishayiche ghuskhoriche vichar anekada andila zopanyapasun rokhatat aanee jevha too zopato tevha too aswasth hoto aanee duhswapnanni trast asato. andila 'mrutyuchya devadoota' varr vijay midvanyachi varanvar swapne padatat."hii swapne itaki bhayanak aahet qee jevha too jaage hoto tevha tyache pahile vichar" nashwar bhitisarkhe asatat."andy yaa swapnanvar tevhach maat karato jevha tyachya swapnanmadhye too" mea swapna pahat aahe "asey ghoshit karato, jyamule devdutache varchasva qamee hote. tyanantar too tyachya vastavik jeevanat tyala nakarle gelele khaskhashiche keek khaat kinwa jyaa gavchya mahilevar too mohit aahe ticha pathlag karat tyachya "sarvat gadad aaveganna" tyachya swapnanmadhye takoo lagato.
jarco martinovic assa yuktivad karatat qee andichya duhswapnanna aaghatatmak swapne mhanoon sarvottam vargikrut kele jaate. aaghatanantarchya tanav vikarane grast asalelyanna anekada asha prakarchi swapne jaanavtat. andy spasht swapne pahoon tyachya duhswapnanna dadapato. spasht swapna pahane heey abhyasache eka uttam sanshodhan kelele kshetra honyachya khoop aadhi keesane 'garden, eshh' lihile hote.
shirshakachi utpatti.
kadambariche shirshak bahudha hungarian facistsney vadilanviruddha kelelya aaropavarun ghetale aaheh (khote) mitrapakshancha guptaher asalyacha aarop, yaa aaropavar mulala vishvas thevayacha aahe kaaran yamule tyachya vadilancha veer darja vadhato, asey mhatale jaate qee too mitrapakshanchya vimananna bomb pohochavanyache nirdesh deto jyamule "serve kahee dhool aanee rakhat badalate". adhik samanyatah, holocostamule saundaryachya vastoo ("udyane") rakhat rupantarit hotat. 
prakashan aanee swagat.
keesane baag, rakh yanche varnan tyachya 'kautumbik chakr' trayicha bhag mhanoon kele aahe, jyat 'prarambhik dukkh' (1970), 'baag, rakh' aanee 'tasancha kaach' (1972) yancha samavesh aahe. "garden, eshh' madhye 'suruvatichya dukkhan' madhye dekhil anek drushye aahet, jyat andiche julia zaboshi asalele naate, edwardche prasthan aanee narsamhar drushya yancha samavesh aahe.
keesane strasberg vidyapithat shikshak mhanoon kaam karat asatana 'garden, eshh' lihile. tyachya aadhichya kadambyanchya tulanet, keesala 'garden, rakh' lihine adhik katheen vatale.
yaa kadambariche "eka aashadayak tarun lekhakane eka mahattvapoorn kaam mhanoon samikshakanni swagat kele". tyache ingerjit bhashantar aanee prakashan hoiparyant, teey french, german, polish aanee hungarian bhashet aadhich prakat jhaale hote. ingraji samikshane sammishra hotee parantu bahutek sakaratmak hotee. yaa pustakala ekoon uddesh nasalyachi bhavna jaree asali, taree merlyn croucherne 'samruddha parantu tarun aanee kinchit atishayoktipurna shaili' chee prashansa kelee. croucherne vastusthiti aanee kalpanaramya yateel farak karane ashakya aahe yavarhi bhashya kele, jeey kisachya kamache vaishishtya banale. vasha mihailovich kadambarichya aakarshanavar bhashya karatat, jeey teey mhanatat qee kisachya nantarchya "adhik atyadhunik aanee paripakv pustakan" dware dekhil atulaneey hote.
gambhir vishleshan.
holocast sahityache eka karya mhanoon.
anek samikshakanni yaa kadambariche holocast sahityache kaam mhanoon parikshan kele aahe. holocostchya velee lahan mule asalelya itar lekhakanpramanech, kiss balpanichya aaghatancha samna karnyasathi sahityacha vapar karatat.
"baag, rakh" heey asamanya aahe, jaree teey ughadpane holocostabaddal asale taree, edward aushwitzmadhye maran pavto, keys holocostche kahee spasht sandarbh deto. elexander stevic assa yuktivad karatat qee keys, shikshakanchya swayattatela chalana denyasathi, holocostchya aathvani endine dadapun takane nivadato. andy kalpana karato qee tyachya vadilancha chhal jyoo asalyaivaji eka utsahi pratibhavan asalyabaddal keela jaat aahe. udaharanarth, andine eka hatyakandanantar tyachya kutumbachya upnagarat jaanyache varnan "majhya vadilanchya taanyane margadarshan kele" asey kele aahe."jaree vicharadhin taara spashtapane devidcha taara asala, taree nantar andy yaa taachaa ullekh" tyachya niyaticha taara "mhanoon karato, jyamule taara tyachya vadilanchya pravasache prateek banato. yaa nivadisah, keys tyachya vadilanna manavikrut karato, jyanna holocostne tyachi olakh hiravoon ghetali hotee.
medahinata' shhee tulana.
"garden, eshh' chee tulana anekada hungarian lekhak imare curtez yanchya 1975 chya ardh-aatmacharitratmak kadambari 'medahinata' shhee kelee jaate. marqa thompson yanni 'medahinata' chey varnan 'baag, rakh' chaa 'pudhcha bhag kinwa bhawand' asey kele aahe. medaheen' chaa nayak gyorjee haah andishee samya balgato, kaaran tyachi nirdoshata tyala tyachya bhovati kaay chalale aahe yachyakade aandhale karate. andy jyaa prakare yuddhachya pratima dadapato tyach prakare, bhayanak ghatanancha samna karnyacha eka marg mhanoon, gyorgi shibiranmadhye tyane jeey pahile aahe teey samanya karnyacha aanee samet karnyacha satat prayatna karato.
kertez aanee kiss heey doghehi holocostchya piditanna manavikaran karnyacha prayatna karatat. tyanni aikalyapramane shibire bhayanak aahet qaa asey patrakaranni vicharale asata, gyorjee dawa karato qee kahee vela too shibiranmadhye "anandi" hota, joou tyachya bhavnik svayattatepasun tyala kadhoon takoo ichchinanya rajvativiruddhacha pratikar hota. heey 'baget, rakh' madhye andy tyachya vadilanna satat eka apavadatmak pratibha mhanoon chitrit karato jyacha dharmasathi navhe tarr tyachya pratibhesathi chhal keela jaato.
"hungarian aanee yugoslav sarkaranni holocostveril charchela nirutsahit kele asatana 'medahinata' aanee 'garden, rakh' prakashit karnyat aale. yaa deshanmadhil holocostover charcha bhadakavanyache shrey yaa kadambyannaa dile jaate.