
akhaada (laghu kahani)

"erena" americi lekhak fredrick braun kii ack vigyaan kathaa laghu kahani haye, joe pahali baar "aashcharyajanak vigyaan kathaa" patrika key juuna 1944 key ank mein prakaashit hui thee. america key vigyaan kathaa lekhakon key sadasyon ney ise nebula puraskaron key aagaman seey pahale prakaashit sarvshreshth vigyaan kathaa kahaaniyon mein seey ack key roop mein chunaa, aur iss tarah ise "vigyaan kathaa holl off fame, khand ack, 1929-1964" mein shamil kiya gayaa thaa.
kathaanak kaa saransh.
prithvi aur rahasyamay videshi baahari logon key beach badhate sangharsh key beach, donon pakshon key badey paimaane parr armadas ack samaan roop seey mell khaane vaali ladaai mein milane key liye taiyar hain. bobb carson, ack chhote seey ack-aadami scout jahaaj kaa pilot, ack baahari samkaksh key saath judate samay baahar nickle jaataa haye. jaba vaha jaagata haye, tou vaha khud koo ack chhote seey, bund, golakar kshetra mein lagbhag nagna paataa haye. akhaade mein adhikansh vastuein neeli hain, aur carson key anusaar, akhaada "asahaniya roop seey germ" haye, jisamen koee paani upalabdh naheen haye. doori mein ack baahari vyakti hotaa haye, jise carson ack "roller" kaa label detaa haye kyonki iska roop lagbhag ack darjan patale, vaapas lene yogya tambu key saath vyaas mein ack laal gole kaa hotaa haye.
carson apane dimag mein ack aisee aavaaz sunata haye joe khud koo ack pracheen buddhimatta key roop mein pehchaanati haye, ack poori jaati kaa sanlayan, jisane hastakshep kiya haye kyonki yuddh ack paksh koo poori tarah seey nasht curr dega aur dusare koo itani buri tarah seey chot pahunchaayega kii yeh sambhavatah ack dinn khud kii tarah ack buddhi mein vikasit naheen hoe paayega. isaliye ikai ney samay key samanya pravaah key baahar ack kshetra mein ekal yuddh mein ladane key liye pratyek prajaati seey ack vyakti koo chunaa haye. haarne vaalaa apane bede koo turant vinash key liye barbad curr dega.
carson aur usake pratidvandi koo pareekshan aur truti key madhyam seey pataa chalata haye kii unake beach ack adrishya baadha haye, aur yeh kii spasht roop seey kewal nirjeev vastuen hii ise paar curr sakati hain. carson roller key saath samvaad karane kii koshish kartaa haye, yeh dekhane key liye kii kyaa koee samjhauta sambhav haye, lekin usey nirantar ghrina kaa mansik sandesh praapt hotaa haye. donon fenk diye gaye prakshepastron seey ladanaa shuru karate hain.
carson pair mein ghayal hoe jaataa haye; antatah rakt vishaaktata shuru hoe jaati haye. vaha roller koo ack mrit chhipakali fenkate hue dekhta haye jise usane baadha key madhyam seey prataadit kiya thaa, halanki baad mein usey pataa chalata haye kii chhipakali kewal behosh thee. carson koo ehsas hotaa haye kii baadha ack mansik haye. hatasha mein, vaha khud koo ack dhalaan parr baahar nikaalata haye aur doosari taraf ludhak jaataa haye. vaha hosh mein aataa haye aur saavdhaanipoorvak aaney vaale roller koo harpoon kartaa haye, ise ack chaku seey samaapt kartaa haye jise usane ack flint jaisi chattan seey khatkhataaya thaa.
carson turant khud koo apane scout jahaaj mein vaapas paataa haye. usey apane commander seey ack khushi kaa sandesh milata haye jisamen usey soochit kiya jaataa haye kii prithvi key pahale salvo ney kissy tarah poore dushman key bede koo vighatit curr diyaa, yahaan taka kii way jahaaj bhee joe seema seey baahar they. jaba carson kaee nae thheek hue nishan dekhta haye jahan vaha ghayal hoe gayaa thaa, tou vaha jaanata haye kii usane ladaai kii kalpana naheen kii thee, lekin buddhimani seey apane anubhav koo apane taka hii rakhane kaa faisala kartaa haye.
aadhikarik aur anaupchaarik anukoolan.
1967 key "prakaran" jise "akhaada" bhee kahaa jaataa haye, mein samaantaaen theen. kanuni samasyaon seey bachane key liye, yeh sahamati bunny kii braun koo bhugtan aur ack kahani credit praapt hoga.
adbhut comics sankalan pustak "worlds ananon" kaa ank 4 (navambar 1973), jisane vigyaan kathaa key classic karyon koo anukoolit kiya, kahani kaa ack wafadar roopaantaran dikhaaya. ack punarmudran adbhut patrika praarup comic pustak "vigyaan kathaa kii agyaat duniya" mein dikhaai diyaa.
isi tarah key kathaanak bhee paae jaate hainh 1963 "baahari seema" prakaran, "manoranjan aur khel"; "blake kaa 7" prakaran "dwandwayuddh"; "haye-maine aur brahmand key swami" prakaran "dha erena"; aur "batman banaam predator" mool comic book crossover mini-seereez.

