Ask HN: Critique for cold email
Dear insiders of real start-ups, I am visiting silicon valley shortly and want to set up meetings with companies I admire. May I have 5 minutes of your precious time and make some comment on the email I am trying to send? Thank you for your help.
Dear insiders of real start-ups, I am visiting silicon valley shortly and want to set up meetings with companies I admire. May I have 5 minutes of your precious time and make some comment on the email I am trying to send? Thank you for your help.<p>subject: Question about <i></i><i></i>* (a consumer electronics field) market<p>Great job founding the most inspiring <i></i><i></i>* <i></i><i></i>* (a consumer electronics field) company!<p>My name is Ziqiao Jin, I am running a <i></i><i></i> <i></i><i></i> (a consumer electronics field) start-up project and wish I could ask your for some advice. May I have 15 minutes of your time? It will be great if we can have coffee around February 10th.<p>I am interested in the <i></i><i></i> <i></i><i></i> (a consumer electronics field) too, have been doing research for a year now. If you want to know anything specific about the Japanese <i></i><i></i>* <i></i><i></i>* (a consumer electronics field) market, I am happy conduct research for you.<p>Thank you for your consideration.<p>Best, Jin