Challenge HN: feedback on elevator pitches
Use comment threads to help edit and refine elevator pitches. <p>Post a your link to your project/start up and your pitch and then give others feedback. Is the pitch clear and easy to understand? Accurate based on looking at the site? Can you suggest better wording? Is it written with the correct audience in mind (e.g. general public vs. hackers)?<p>Please avoid unconstructive criticism and any feedback relating to the actual project or start up. This is specific to communicating pitches effectively.