I think it's a much improved attempt.  This draft captures more of Tolstoi's thoughts and connects them to Blade Runner 2049 in a way that he might have interpreted the film.  At moments, it even captures his writing style and sentence structure a bit, but the parts spent explaining the plot seem far less like Tolstoi's voice.  Maybe if you rewrote this with the assumption that the reader is already familiar with Blade Runner 2049. So more like a Tolstoi commentary essay written to peers who know the work, and less like Tolstoi attempting to give a modern movie review to an unfamiliar audience.  Would you be able to try that?
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