It is an ok story, but rather mediocre as it mostly involves one thread: "feeling at home in a new city". I suggest bringing in more facets and techniques from story telling, and making up more side stories portraying interactions with others, describing scenery in more detail, and how that is seen through the eyes of the main character.
For the style and readability of the story it is unnecessary to refer in every paragraph to the "feeling at home" facet of the main story thread. It would be best to address this (meta perspective) up front, and from then on let the user infer this from the story. It is ok to refer back to it in certain moments, like in a concluding paragraph to complete a story arch.
Can you try to rewrite the story by addressing these points I made?
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