Sure, I’ll explain the changes I made and why.

- In the first paragraph, I changed “it was” to “it felt like” because it sounds more natural and less dramatic. I also added a comma after “Rivière-au-Renard” and changed “This allowed them” to “which allowed them” because it makes the sentence more clear and grammatically correct.


- In the second paragraph, I changed “are gone” to “went” because it is the correct tense for a past action. I also added commas after “Gaspésie” and “Josie’s house” because they separate independent clauses in a compound sentence. I added “'s” to “my friend” because it shows possession.


- In the third paragraph, I added an article (“an”) before “amazing holiday” because it is a singular countable noun. I also added “so much” before “energy” because it adds emphasis and sounds more natural. I changed “frequented” to “used to frequent” because it shows that they don’t do it anymore. Finally, I added some details (“as we were driving”, “suddenly”) to make the last sentence more descriptive and suspenseful.


I hope this helps you understand the grammar issues of these paragraphs. Can I help you with anything else?
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