Thanks, this is a great start to the short story. Could you rewrite the story with while keeping the following criticism in mind:

- There seems to be quite a bit of repetition at the end. This could make space for more depth.
- The story does not have any drama, it is simply a snapshot in time. 
- The name Daneel and the name Gaia is repeated far too many time
- The story should end with The End.
- Some additional description of the ship Daneel is on would help color in the story.
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