Engage the audience more. Why is the man lonely? Why is he sitting on a clock tower? What is he looking at? Does he have a history of mental illness? Is he looking to kill himself or others? Fill the character with substance so that the audience will feel something towards them.

Why is he reciting poetry and by whom? Does he usually do this as a ritual before completing a task or as a way to calm himself before committing murder? Give the reader more substance to make them feel something be it either dread, hope, disgust, love or anything else.

Good luck
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