I did not make it past page 80 since I think it is the worst thing ever! First off all the sex scenes! That is not how your first time goes :S 
 The girl seems to have no self control, own opinion or a voice. 
 + whats with the fucking lip she keeps biting? Is she hungry? 
 I did like the start but at one point it just lost it all and you were left with random and unnecessary fucking . 
 Not my thing!