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On leap day this year, Microsoft released the first beta of Visual Studio 11. The company made free time-delimited installations available to all comers. Like many Dr. Dobb's readers, I was eager to see with my own eyes what the Borg had wrought. I downloaded a copy of the Ultimate Edition and set about installing and using it.
From the first installation dialog box, it is clear that the UI has changed dramatically. The installer favors the new boxy look of the Metro UI associated with Windows 8. In the event you've been involved with more pressing problems than reading about Microsoft and Apple's new UIs, you should be aware that we are on the verge of a major shift in UI design. It moves away from the paradigm that's been in use during the last 10 years. That's the one that has resulted in Windows 7 and Mac UIs looking remarkably alike today.
They will still look a lot a like going forward, but the UI — in both cases — will migrate to a style that is more visually friendly on portable devices. The buttons will be bigger and use bold colors, the dialog boxes will be considerably simpler, and menus will be deprecated. If you've ever tried to use a drop-down menu or a dialog with more than two or three options on a laptop or tablet, you have some sense of the difficulty imposed by the form factor that is driving these changes. So, what Microsoft and Apple are trying to do is to facilitate that small-form-factor UI and then back-port it to desktops and laptops.
The result is software whose appearance is undeniably new and somewhat unfamiliar. Many of the conventions of this new paradigm are still not well understood, even though it's beginning to appear everywhere. The area in which the new look and feel is most clumsy, alas, is one of significant use to developers: icons. Not only have icons lost all color but they've been redesigned to be smaller and to my eye essentially meaningless. Take these two icons from Google Apps, which was one of the first platforms to adopt this new UI style:
These icons are shown full size. One tells enables you change the color of the text, the other of the background. You might be tempted to choose the left icon to change the color of text, but then you might notice on the right icon that its letter is in white on a dark background and that the color bar below it is white. So maybe that's what you click to make the text some other color. Here is how these icons look on Microsoft Word today, using the contemporary UI:
With these icons, there is no doubt about what they do. The highlighter in the left icon makes it clear it's changing the background. One glance and you know what it is.
With this in mind, let's look at the UI of the VS 11 beta that just came out. The first thing you notice is that it's monochrome. Except inside the coding area, the colors are black and gray, with occasional touches of dark blue (so actually duo-chrome). For example:
How this approach is consistent with the bright boxes of color in Metro is anyone's guess. The new UI design is winning very few plaudits, to say it mildly. On the MS boards, the response is overwhelmingly negative. And the response to this ugliness is made worse by the inability to skin VS back to something normal.
While I really don't like drab gray areas in my IDE, my larger objection is to the new icons that should enable me to quickly find needed features without thinking twice. Look at the icons at the top of the menu above. The fourth from the left is a stack of pages or files. Four icons to the right is another similar stack. Want to guess what the right-most icon is? The best you can do is guess.
But apart from its inability to communicate meaningful information (in part because of the absence of color), the monochrome aspect means I can't locate an icon quickly on the basis of color memory, as is possible in VS2010.
Here my eye knows that the save command is the purple icon to the right of the opening yellow folder. This no longer works in VS11. Instead, my eye must read the icons to find the one I'm looking for. So using this UI is a step backwards: harder to navigate, less efficient, and visually unpleasant.
VS11 has a few other disconcerting aspects, the biggest one being that it tips in at almost 10GB of disk space. If this is in fact the IDE that Redmond hopes to bring to the masses (a specific goal of the redesign), a package so ponderously big needs serious reconsideration. Even presuming more RAM capacity in tablets and other portable devices than presently available, such space consumption will be a major disincentive.
The VS11 product is not wholly awful. I found it very responsive and, while I didn't run benchmarks, the feel at the keyboard was that it tore through compiles and builds faster than previous releases. In addition, it contains the new C++11 library that Herb Sutter promised, as well as some of the new technologies needed for Windows 8. We will review the entire set of new features in considerable depth when VS 11 is released
This version of VS 11 is only a beta. Microsoft could fix the UI issues, especially in the context of overwhelmingly unfavorable reviews of the monochrome design. However, previous betas have often looked almost identical to the final, released version. If that were to be the case with this edition, I confess I'd begin seriously looking for other IDEs and using the back-end tools from the command line or build files. Our recent article on how to use Eclipse instead of VS might augur the beginning of a new series exploring the theme of productive coding outside of Visual Studio.
Time will tell.
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One of the most interesting new features on Intel's Thunderbolt 2 technology is the addition of DisplayPort 1.2 support in order to enable video streaming to a single Ultra HD monitor or dual QHD monitors. While Thunderbolt is targeted at the PC industry, there are a number of IC design firms looking at the potential of a stripped down version of DisplayPort called mobility DisplayPort (MyDP) for doing similar work - streaming video from a smartphone to HD displays.
A key advantage of DisplayPort is that it can be used for driving the video signal for internal screens as well as external screens and can efficiently drive high-resolution displays such as for the 2048x1536 pixel iPad. That helps CPU makers like Intel reduce the number of I/Os needed because they can multiplex the internal and external screens on the same I/O, leaving it to the manufacturer to decide how they want to implement it.
During Computex, IC design house Analogix has been showing off its version of MyDP called SlimPort. Andre Bouwer, vice president of marketing for Analogix, explained that an increasing number of key players in the mobile application processor (APU) market are realizing the advantages of DisplayPort for HD video and are extending their support.
Intel supports DisplayPort across the board, while Apple, Samsung and Nvidia are providing support on the ARM side of the market. A key addition this year will be Qualcomm, which is introducing support in some of its APUs this year.
While many of these semiconductor firms are looking to have DisplayPort drive their internal high-resolution displays, the technology can be leveraged to drive external displays as well. If DisplayPort is supported, then the simpler version of SlimPort can be implemented by the system maker as well.
The Google Nexus 4 was the first smartphone to support SlimPort, and the technology is also used in phones and tablets including the LG Optimus G Pro smartphone, Fujitsu Arrows Tab and Asus PadFone Infinity. The Asus and Futjitsu solutions use a docking solution, while Analogix is marketing connector accessories to deliver video from the micro USB port on the smartphones to a choice of HDMI, DVI and DisplayPort ports on the displays.
Comparing DisplayPort with HDMI, Bouwer noted that HDMI has fees associated with it while DisplayPort is royalty free. This was one of the original big attractions for PC OEMs and it was PC players that pushed development of the technology, especially for notebooks. Bouwer pointed out that the legacy of this development is that design and architecture decisions were made based on a battery-powered mobile device to reduce power consumption, improve EMI through fixed data frequency and spread spectrum, and reduce noise to strengthen the RF signal.
Bouwer noted that if one looks at the total number of transmitter of DisplayPort vs HDMI, there are more DisplayPort transmitters shipped in the market.
However, SlimPort and MyDP are not the only games in town. HDMI remains popular and MHL has found a niche on mobile handsets. Some others think Wi-Fi will be the solution that will win out for transmitting video from a handset to a TV.
Still Bouwer believes that Analogix is only beginning to tap the potential of SlimPort. Next year the company will provide support for USB devices as well as video output through SlimPort. Bouwer envisions a future where smartphones can literally be pocket PCs, with users plugging them into peripherals at work, home and on the road.


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U.S. creates Arctic 'special representative' position
U.S. one of the few Arctic nations without an ambassador for the region
The U.S. State Department plans to create an Arctic representative position to highlight the growing importance of the region.
In letters sent to Alaska's two U.S. senators, Mark Begich and Lisa Murkowski, Secretary of State John Kerry said he planned to name a "high-level individual of substantial stature and expertise" to serve as Special Representative for the Arctic Region. He said he hoped to get input from both of them in creating the post and finding the right person.
"For a long time now, I've shared the view that the Arctic region really is the last global frontier, and the United States needs to elevate our attention and effort to keep up with the opportunities and consequences presented by the Arctic's rapid transformation," Kerry wrote in the letters, released by the senators' offices Friday.
"Properly managed, this region provides an opportunity for creative diplomatic leadership — but truly establishing and capitalizing on this leadership role will require making the Arctic region a higher U.S. priority; greater attention paid by senior policy makers; and, in keeping with President Obama's call for 'national unity of effort' on the Arctic, co-ordination of operational departments."
With the U.S. set to take over the rotating chairmanship of the eight-nation Arctic Council in 2015, Kerry said he believed it was vital to elevate Arctic issues and interests within the State Department.
In a separate statement, Kerry said the Arctic has "enormous and growing geostrategic, economic, climate, environment, and national security implications for the United States and the world." He said the special representative, referred to by Begich as an Arctic ambassador, would play a critical role in advancing American interests in the region.
Kerry called the Arctic's transformation "a very rare convergence of almost every national priority in the most rapidly changing region on the face of the earth."
State Department spokeswoman Marie Harf on Friday said she had no personnel announcements to make, but she might soon.
Begich, a Democrat, and Murkowski, a Republican, have been pressing for an ambassador or envoy to the Arctic.
'This is not to take anything away from what the State Department has worked on. But they are just so inundated with so many international issues (that) I believe the Arctic was slipping past us," he said.
Other federal departments also "were kind of on their own path and not really focused on the long-term benefit of the Arctic. So this will really hone it in," Begich said.
He said the position would not be ceremonial and his understanding is the special representative will have the authority and power to represent the United States on Arctic issues.
Begich said Friday that he hadn't heard a timeline for when an appointment would be made. "But they know we want this done sooner rather than later," he said.
Begich added that he doesn't think it would be necessary for the position to be confirmed by Congress.
Murkowski, in a statement, said the White House's efforts to seize on opportunities opening in the Arctic so far "have been a national embarrassment."
While she said she welcomed the administration devoting more energy to an Arctic agenda, she questioned whether a special representative would be "on par" with an ambassador, which she said most of the eight Arctic nations have. Murkowski said she would seek clarity from Kerry on that point.
Murkowski has been critical of where the U.S. stands compared with other nations staking their claims to the region, saying in the past that the U.S. is behind in its vision and thinking.
She sent a letter to the president earlier this week expressing disappointment with the White House's plan for the Arctic.
Murkowski said the plan did nothing "to advance our already lagging role in the region."
She noted that Russia and Canada have been aggressive in their plans and investment and that non-Arctic nations also are looking at opportunities that come with diminished polar sea ice.
"The United States has never been last in a race to the future, but absent any visionary leadership and meaningful resourcing, we will continue to take a back seat and fail to capitalize on all the Arctic has to offer," Murkowski wrote.
Begich said he would like to see the job filled by someone from Alaska who understands the diplomatic arena and different aspects of the Arctic and who can walk into a room and have the respect of other ambassadors because of their history of work on Arctic-related issues.
Begich said he had some names in mind, but he declined to share them.


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Air travel is back.
More people will fly this summer than a year ago and a record number of people will fly internationally, said Airlines for America (A4A), the leading U.S. airline industry group, in its annual forecast Thursday.
According to A4A predictions, the volume of U.S. air travelers between June and August will reach its highest level since the summer of 2008 — right before the the nation was gripped in The Great Recession.
The group expects close to 209 million passengers globally will fly aboard U.S. airlines during those three months, an increase of 1 percent over the same period last year.
The summer of 2007 marked the airline industry's high point with more than 217 million people flying aboard U.S. airlines.
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Earlier this year, Toll Gate High School was one of two schools in Warwick to receive a VSA Arts Grant to promote the importance of arts education, especially for special education students. Toll Gate used the money to facilitate a photography project, bringing in professional photographer Keith Jochim to take photos of students. The students first researched various historical events and people and put together projects and costumes for their photo shoots yesterday.
Sean Parker, a special education student and rising senior, researched literary character Oliver Twist. He proudly displayed a poster showing Twist in his photos.
"This is a brilliant experience," he said in his best English accent.
About 50 students from various art, photography and special education classes participated in the project.
Jochim said he was delighted to teach the students about various types of lighting and photography techniques that made the photos look like they were from the 1930s or '40s.
"It's just been a joy," he said. "I'm very pleased about the participation. The students really got involved."
Patricia Huntington, the arts teacher at Toll Gate that oversaw the project, said it's about reinforcing the value of arts in schools.
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Life Is a Long Quiet River (1988)
Directed by Étienne ChatiliezGenres - Comedy Drama | Sub-Genres - Comedy of Manners, Domestic Comedy, Satire | Run Time - 95 min. | Countries - France | MPAA Rating - NR
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Life is a Long Quiet River is the satirically philosophical title for this French domestic comedy. Borrowing a page from The Corsican Brothers, the film begins with a castoff mistress spitefully switching a pair of newborn babies at the maternity ward managed by her doctor lover. As a result, the daughter (Valerie Lalande) of a family of tramps and thieves is raised in a comfy bourgeois household, while the lowlife family ends up with the middle-class family's offspring (Benoit Magimel). Twelve years after the fact, the discarded mistress confesses to her misdeed. The mistress' ex-lover, doctor Daniel Gelin, tries to set things right, with hilariously disastrous consequences. Director Etie Chatiliez had received his training in French TV commercials, so it's not surprising that Life is a Long Quiet River is a string of anecdotes and punchlines.
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Delicious Nutella Cheesecake Bar Recipe
I am a big Nutella fan. It is just the right mix of hazelnut and chocolate in a delicious creamy spread. My kids love to eat it on plain bread or with jam. It's a great substitute for peanut butter. I like to use it instead of peanut butter in recipes. Just make sure that the recipe you're using it in calls for creamy peanut butter and not crunchy.
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Nowhere is the need for landscape and irrigation as critical as on recently graded construction projects. The exposed soil is highly unstable and, therefore, vulnerable to the forces of nature which can cause erosion and threaten the entire project. The growth in this aspect of the landscape construction industry has been spurred in part by revised local grading ordinances that seek not only to control erosion on construction sites, but to prevent sediment damage to local waterways and reservoirs as well.
Tremendous strides have been made over the years in the control of erosion and sediment. Tools and techniques have never been more sophisticated. Today, landscape contractors can ensure that a site will resist the stress of erosion almost indefinitely.
Real estate developers have also recognized that it is less expensive to prevent erosion than it is to pay for cleanup and regrading, not to mention the cost of any ensuing lawsuits. In addition, growth has been stimulated by state and federal mandates to reclaim vast areas disturbed by surface-mining operations. Another force in the growth of the landscape construction industry has been the influence of state highway departments. These agencies are responsible for extensive cut and fill slopes which threaten roadways and public safety until properly stabilized.
Erosion and sediment control plans for different kinds of projects have much in common. Foremost among these is the need to protect the soil surface from the erosive impact of falling rain drops. This can be achieved by growing a stand of grass, providing a protective layer of straw mulch or applying chemicals to form a crust over the soil surface. Another major element in erosion prevention is controlling the flow of rain water once it has fallen. This is done by using a series of diversion ditches and earth berms to direct the flow to a safe discharge point. Finally, erosion and sediment controls work to trap and remove the sediment in the flowing water. This is accomplished by using silt fences, sediment traps and sediment basins.
The landscape professional this has three main types of erosion and sediment control measures available to him: structural controls (diversion ditches and sediment traps), vegetative controls (grasses and mulches), and chemical controls (mulch tackifiers and soil sealants).
Structural controls can be constructed during grading operations without the need for additional equipment. Besides preventing erosion of slopes, ditches and berms are used to remove from flat areas, such as house pads They can also be used to prevent off-site water from entering and eroding the project itself, or to prevent sediment-laden water from leaving the site. Whenever feasible, erosion and sediment control plans should make use of permanent channels on the site. These channels can be lined with durable materials such as riprap, asphalt or concrete, and serve the essential function of diverting the flowing water to a specific location.
The second major function of structural controls is to trap and remove sediment before it leaves the site. This is usually done wither with a series of small sediment traps or with a large sediment basin. Slit fences make effective sediment traps. They are constructed with a length of geotextile material, often called filter fabric. There are a number of geotextiles available, each with a different strength, pore size and permeability. Straw bales are frequently used to form semicircular sediment traps. The bales must be securely anchored and set into the ground to form a watertight seal. Sand bags are also used to construct small sediment traps, particularly on roadways where straw bales cannot be used. The sand bags form a tight seal with the roadway and can trap quite a bit of silt if cleaned following each storm.
Basins are the last line of defense against sediment. A project will often have a large basin constructed at the lowest elevation for removing sediment before runoff leaves the site. Although the surface area of the basin, not the depth, determines its effectiveness in removing sediment, basins do need to have sufficient storage capacity to hold the trapped material. Otherwise, they must have easy equipment access for periodic cleanout. A method of draining the basin is also necessary to reduce the hazard of accidental drowning and to prevent mosquito breeding. The basin outflow is usually through a metal pipe riser. A basin should have an emergency spillway in case the riser?s capacity is exceeded. Because they require shaping and excavation of the earth, structural controls must be constructed before vegetative controls.
Vegetation plays a vital role in controlling erosion. A wide spectrum of plant materials is now available for erosion control, and designers have paid increasing attention to specifying plant mixes that are compatible with a particular site. In addition to the seed mix, the variables of this type of control include the irrigation system, the desired level of weed control, the permanent or temporary nature of the planting, and soil conditions. A soil test is essential in determining the correct seed mixture for a project.
An improper planting specification may achieve the short term goal of site stabilization, but could cause problems in the long run. Annual ryegrass, oats and barley were once highly regarded as temporary ground cover. After the site was stabilized, however, they can create a fire hazard and leave the site with a stubborn crop that must be eradicated before installing the permanent landscaping.
Weed control is a factor in re-vegetation plans, especially when one is transforming an area for aesthetic beauty as well as erosion control. Containing weeds in ornamental plantings is a major expense and can cost thousands of dollars. On the other hand, natural grasses and shrubs that are prevalent in the surrounding undisturbed areas may be desirable for erosion control. In this case, the contractor simply helps nature along at a greatly increased pace.
Temporary irrigation systems are often installed during the ground cover?s establishment period. The amount of water needed for germination varies with the plant mix. In some combinations, seeds are coated with a mucilage layer that breaks down only after several waterings, constituting a built-in protection system against premature sprouting.
The most common methods of applying vegetative controls are by hydraulic planting, hydroseeding and hydraulic mulching. These terms have been used interchangeably for years, but actually describe somewhat different techniques.
Hydraulic planting is a term for the application of planting materials by employing pressurized water as the primary carrier. The material is sprayed from a machine designed specifically for this purpose. The equipment can also be used to apply chemical controls such as straw mulch or soil stabilizers.
Hydroseeding is the application of seed (and optional fertilizers and chemicals) to the planting area using the same water spray technique. Hydraulic mulching, on the other hand, involves the addition of a mulch product to the seed, water, and optional fertilizer/chemical slurry in the tank. The same equipment is used in each case.
Mulches serve as protection for the germinating seed by retaining soil moisture, as well as providing protection from wind and rain. Hydraulic mulches may consist of virgin wood fibers, wood fiber and newspaper mixes, excelsior, grass clippings and even screened compost.
Thorough wetting and agitation of all materials in the equipment?s mixing tank is essential for uniform application. Mulch rates are specified in terms of pounds of mulch per acre, and typically range from 1,000 to 3,000 pounds per acre. The rates vary in relation to the protection necessary for the seed variety and with the prevailing conditions on the jobsite.
The application of straw to newly hydroseeded or hydraulically mulched slopes was once a practice reserved almost exclusively for big highway projects. Large expanses of slope, extending for miles on either side of new highways, were often covered with one to five inches of straw. Today, the practice is fairly common on smaller projects as well. Straw mulch forms a protective covering that absorbs the impact of raindrops. When anchored to the ground with a tackifier, straw provides additional protection from wind erosion. Asphalt, once commonly used to secure the straw, is now losing popularity in favor of chemical or organic tackifiers applied with a hydraulic planter.
Crimping is another method used to secure straw mulch. It involves using a large, weighted mechanical roller that literally punches the straw into the soil as it rolls along. A portion of the crimped straw stands upright among the horizontal straws, creating windrows and preventing migration in high winds. Crimping is very effective but cannot be done on hard soil or on slopes which do not have adequate access. Straw-blowing equipment is usually towed behind large flatbed trucks that carry the straw bales. Crews remove the baling wires and feed them into the machine, which cuts them into smaller pieces. Most straw-blowers can apply about seventeen tons of straw per hour.
Chemicals applied on construction sites for erosion control fall into two categories. The first includes materials used to tack down the mulches used in vegetative controls. The second category consists of those materials used to hold soil in place during and after site construction. This type of application can be expected to last from a few weeks to a year depending on the application rate and the severity of the erosion conditions.
Chemical controls are typically of the copolymer type, meaning that they bind soil particles together. The most popular are derived from a vinyl acetate, acrylic or styrene-butadlene base. Some have additional components to enhance the product?s performance in the field. The chemicals are packaged in liquid form and are diluted with water just prior to application. Dilution rates depend on the manufacturer?s specifications, and can vary from six to forty part of water per one part of the chemical product. Most copolymer control products can be applied with standard hydraulic planting equipment, a water truck or an agricultural spray unit. Chemicals are used to tack down seed and mulches when significant holding power is required due to slope steepness, soil conditions or pronounced erosion forces. The copolymer products which are most effective are those which penetrate the mulch and soak into the soil surface, creating an integrated vertical bond between mulch, seed and soil.
Application rates vary according to the product. Those incorporating an acrylic copolymer base enjoy lower application rates due to superior moisture and ultra-violet resistance. Typically these application rates will be forty to fifty gallons of concentrate per acre. The vinyl acetate and styrene-butadlene mixtures tend to require higher application rates of sixty to a hundred gallons of concentrate per acre. Products suitable for use as a tackifer can be applied either directly as part of the seed slurry or as a second application after the mulch, seed and fertilizer are already in place.
There are organic-based tackifiers that can be used in the same way as copolymer products. The organics come in powdered form and are derived from plant or vegetable products such as plantago, guar bean and the by-products of grain mill operations. They are low in moisture resistance and las as a covering over the surface of the mulch. Relatively inexpensive and short-lived in the field, the organic products are more effective as tackifiers than as primary treatment for erosion control. On the other hand, copolymer products do function well as a primary erosion and sediment controller. This is due to the fact that they react directly with the soil particles at the surface to form a hard crust. The soil sealers, as they are called, serve to hold the slope against erosive effects of wind and water.
Application rates for soil sealants can vary widely depending on the products and job conditions. For an acrylic-based coploymer product, application would vary from 50 to 200 gallons of concentrate per acre. The vinyl acetate and styrene-butadlene products are generally applied at rates from 110 to 450 gallons of concentrate pr acre. For particular job site recommendations, consult with the manufacturer.
There is a curing period for chemical controls, usually 24 to 48 hours. This time is required for the ingredients to achieve their maximum bonding strengths. The application should be done when the air temperature is above 46 degrees F. To facilitate proper curing. If heavy rainfall or improper irrigation occurs prior to complete bonding, the application can be diluted and the crust weakened.
Once a chemical control is applied and cured, freezing will not be harmful to crust formation or tackifying action. Copolymer products, however, do not react well to freeze-thaw cycles before applications, and as a liquid it should be protected from freezing. Most chemical products can be cleaned up using plain water. Tools and equipment should be washed off immediately after the application in order to make cleanup easier.
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Interview with Tony Cheng : Frank Scott: What is the main principle, idea and inspiration behind your design?. Tony Cheng : East-West style is main principle. We want to build up a high-class and luxury mansion. Feel remain in a five star hotel when you enter the mansion. Make this an extremely luxurious holiday home for ten occupants. .Frank Scott: What has been your main focus in designing this work? Especially what did you want to achieve?. Tony Cheng : The main living area allows the whole family to back and relax. Since this home to three generations of a family, everyone have different culture, so we need to adopt East-West style in living area. .Frank Scott: What are your future plans for this award winning design?. Tony Cheng : We want to popularize that mingle east-west culture. Let the world and east-west style occur chemical reaction. .Frank Scott: How long did it take you to design this particular concept?. Tony Cheng : We take one year to design this project. We need to spend time discuss our concept with customer. .Frank Scott: Why did you design this particular concept? Was this design commissioned or did you decide to pursuit an inspiration?. Tony Cheng : Our design is match with customer lifestyle. Listen to customer demand to begin space planning. .Frank Scott: What made you design this particular type of work?. Tony Cheng : Hong Kong is a special place that combine Chinese and Western cultures. Therefore Hong Kong designer possess East-West style design sight. .Frank Scott: Where there any other designs and/or designers that helped the influence the design of your work?. Tony Cheng : The main design concept originated by Tony Cheng. Our designer team are support the detail construction. .Frank Scott: Who is the target customer for his design?. Tony Cheng : The goal behind the design of the house was to ensure the needs of each and every family member were met, and as such there are six public halls where they can entertain each other. The basement and ground levels tend to be bedrooms, the grandparents also have their own personal area on the ground floor so they don't have to tackle the many stairs, while on the first and second floors, each brother occupies an entire storey with his family. .Frank Scott: What sets this design apart from other similar or resembling concepts?. Tony Cheng : Materials and special proportion of design that to be conspicuous in this project. Therefore appear different compared other similar design. .Frank Scott: How did you come up with the name for this design? What does it mean?. Tony Cheng : Since the main principle is East-West style, the name is Chinese - Western of Luxury. .Frank Scott: Which design tools did you use when you were working on this project?. Tony Cheng : We use 3DsMax render 3D drawing to show the idea for customer. .Frank Scott: What is the most unique aspect of your design?. Tony Cheng : Materials and special proportion of design that to be conspicuous in this project. .Frank Scott: Who did you collaborate with for this design? Did you work with people with technical / specialized skills?. Tony Cheng : Our designer team are support the detail construction. We use 3DsMax render 3D drawing to show the idea for customer. .Frank Scott: What is the role of technology in this particular design?. Tony Cheng : We use 3DsMax render 3D drawing to show the idea for customer. Our customer has foreseen the effect when the construction has not started. .Frank Scott: Is your design influenced by data or analytical research in any way? What kind of research did you conduct for making this design?. Tony Cheng : We need to discuss with customer to confirm that the design is suitable for them. .Frank Scott: What are some of the challenges you faced during the design/realization of your concept?. Tony Cheng : In living area there are featuring double height ceilings. It is difficult to change that the characteristic become to focus. .Frank Scott: How did you decide to submit your design to an international design competition?. Tony Cheng : In this design showing Hong Kong designer perform on East-West style perfectly. We have confidence on this. .Frank Scott: What did you learn or how did you improve yourself during the designing of this work?. Tony Cheng : In infinite possible find unlimited probable. .
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Wednesday, September 16, 2009
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Fucking Faeries. They thought I wouldn't notice the hollow bit of dry skin, crinkling like an old plastic carrier bag, where our Monine used to be. They thought I wouldn't notice the soulless wheezing of this creature. They thought I wouldn't know where they'd taken her, know the old stories or their names; but Gran told me everything. They thought--
They thought I wouldn't come after them alone. I'm sure they were watching you, Niesh, waiting till you went away on business. And I can hardly go to the Garda with a faery story, can I? So I load this- this- thing, this changeling into the Baby-Björn like a baby, though it turns my stomach. The creature's all the creepier for it's closeness to humankind, like a half-starved, hollow-eyed infant.
I'm off. I regret for the first time our decision to go carless. The busses all either arrive or depart after dark and the faeries will be watching. The days are so short this time of year. I hope, my love, that you never have to read this, but if I don't make it back with our baby, you should know why. I can't just sit here, thinking of their skeleton fingers digging into her fair skin. I'll get as far north as I can today, and write again.
Niesh finished reading and shook his head. She thought I wouldn't notice she wrote the whole thing out in cocaine? Jesus, didn't one of the neighbors see her dragging the bedroom mirror out onto the front lawn and scraping all that powder around? They coulda called the cops or at least called me. Shit, there goes our nest egg with the next gust of wind.
He pulled out his cell phone and called his friend Rick who worked at the sheriff's office. "Yeah, just like the other week. She won't be hard to spot, carrying an E.T. doll around in a snuggly."
That does it. We're never getting a car OR a kid.
Opening: Mother (Re)produces.....Continuation: John
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- Evil Editor said...
Unchosen continuations:
Loves and Kisses,
PS: The sprinkler out back needs fixing, and Max needs his disptemper shot from the vet. I realize you're busy and it's football season and all, but I can't rescue Monine, save the world, and keep the house tidy without a little help from you every once in a while.
Unless, of course, they catch me and put me back in the locked room with the woman who sees leprechauns in her handbag and that scary man who keeps talking about his family of selkies in the back garden pond.
--Kate Thornton
November 13, 9p.m.:
My darling Niesh, you've only been away on business for three days but it feels like three months. This is the first time we've been separated since we've been together and I must admit...it's hard.
Since the first day I met you, you've been my rock. You saved me in my weakest moments and gave me the courage to soldier on. But I'm ready. I can do this on my own. I have to be strong for you and the baby.
Unfortunately, my old dealer found out that I'm out of rehab and he's trying to contact me. I'm going over to his place tonight to tell him that I will never, ever snort crack again. Wish me luck.
- Anonymous said...
That's actually very gripping. Good mix of details and mystery. Well done. If the whole book is like this, you'll go far.
- _*rachel*_ said...
The first paragraph confused me, but as soon as I realized it was a changeling I really liked it. Perhaps you could replace the imagery in the first paragraph with saying it's a changeling.
How could they think she wouldn't notice? (I'm assuming a she on this.)
I would definitely read on, even though I've got visions of miniature Gollums stuck in my head.
- Adam Heine said...
I really like the voice, though the F-bomb first word was a little much, I thought. I really like the story this sets up (nothing like Man-On-Fire-style revenge to get me interested). I loved the first paragraph.
I don't know if I could handle first person present tense for an entire novel. But if I'm into the story, I probably won't notice.
I really don't know if I could handle an entire novel written in letters like this. I don't know if that's how it's written, it's just something I'm afraid from reading the last line.
Last, I think the first 3 sentences of paragraph 2 can go. It pushes the whole "they thought" thing too far and puts off the action. Could probably also drop "I'm off."
- Evil Editor said...
If I'm writing this note, I'm not taking the time to put the time of day on it.
Fucking Faeries sounds like it should be followed by They've kidnapped Monine. I'm going after the bastards. There's leftover casserole in the fridge.
What you have following Fucking Faeries sounds more like what should follow Stupid, incompetent, half-witted Faeries.
It sounds like the note she would write if this type of thing happens all the time and the Faeries are mischief makers, and the baby is in no actual danger. She's annoyed. Is that the case? If so, this isn't bad.
But if she's worried sick that she'll never see her baby again, she's wasting a lot of time composing such a lengthy note, some of which includes info Niesh already knows, like it gets dark early.
As there are buses and cars, one assumes there are phones; can't she get in touch with Niesh?
- Anonymous said...
They thought I wouldn't notice the hollow bit of dry skin, crinkling like an old plastic carrier bag, where our Monine used to be.(This sentence confused me. In part because it doesn't work with "fucking faeries." Mostly because I'm not sure what "a hollow bit of skin" is. And what is a Monine?
They thought I wouldn't notice the soulless wheezing of this creature. (Do you mean Monine? If not please tell us what this disgusting creature.)
They thought I wouldn't know where they'd taken her,(Are you referring to the creature, the Monine, or the bag of skin?) know the old stories or their names; but Gran told me everything. They thought--(The part about the Gran feels like it's for the readers benefit.)
They thought I wouldn't come after them alone.(I get what you're trying to do here, but there is such a thing as too much repetition. For me, this too much time telling me what someone else thought)
Who is Niesh and why are they watching him or her or it, or place or thing?
And I can hardly go to the Garda with a faery story, can I? (Is Garda a city or a person?)
Is the thing a changeling? Or is the thing still a "thing" and the changeling something else?
I'm off. I regret for the first time our decision to go carless. (who is this person talking to?)
The busses all either arrive or depart after dark and the faeries will be watching.(Buses is misspelled and while I don't follow that crap that spelling errors means you can't write, there's probably an anal-pore who'll tell you so....but I digress. I'm still not sure who the narrator is talking too. It feels like it's for the readers benefit anyway.)
Is the baby the bag of skin, the changeling, Monine, Niesh or Garda.?
I can't just sit here, thinking of their skeleton fingers digging into her fair skin. (Who are they and who is her? It's great to keep a little mystery but your use of pronouns is terrible. I can't figure out what's going on because I don't know who your referring to ever. Remember pro-nouns follow the antecedent. In this case, you have two; faeries and buses. They could apply to either, whilst her could apply to a single fairy or is a bus???)
Since you have buses and phones, you're going to need explain why phones don't exist.
I really liked the voice here but I was lost. Questions are raised, but I was too distracted trying to figure out who's who. I'm not a die hard fantasy fan, but I'll read anything if it's good. Clarify who's who, and I'd probably read this, but as it stands now, I was ready to quit by the end of paragraph one. I just couldn't figure out what was going on.
- Dave Fragments said...
Is this the Goodfellas of fairy tales?
I ask the question that way because I want to be provocative. I am not a fan of "fairies" and the "fae" and all that stuff. I'm not an enemy. It's just not on my horizon. That being said, I have to ask the question: "Do you really want to open the story with the F bomb?" I mean seriously, is this going to be the "Under the Rainbow" of fairy stories? (hint, that's not a good comparison)...
I feel bad asking that question but I think if has to be asked. In all the discussions the minions have had about "F" bombs and bad language, here is a fairy story beginning with it. Who is going to read this? Not children. Housewives who want to read adult fairy tales? Is this like the Real Housewives of Fairydom? If that's it, then OK. Run with it.
Now don't get me wrong. I know this isn't Tinkerbell or Snow White. I know that there is a sub-genre of stories about fairies that involved adults and all that stuff. That's why I'm reluctant to comment on the rest of the opening. But the first two words are "fucking fairies" and that's like being hit in the head with a two by four.
- Evil Editor said...
Usually the anonymous person who frequently writes in to pick apart openings line by line has a few useful comments, but this piece isn't nearly as unclear as he/she found it. And even if it were, it doesn't need to be clear to us, as long as it's clear to Niesh, who will be reading the letter.
That said, it wouldn't hurt to remove the "our" in front of Monine so it's clear that's a name. Capitalizing it doesn't show it's a name, as Garda and Baby-Bjorn are also capitalized.
Also, it's hard to reconcile the descriptions of the creature the baby was replaced with, first as a hollow bit of dry skin, crinkling like an old plastic carrier bag, and later as all the creepier for it's closeness to humankind. The first description doesn't sound close to humankind.
- Mother (Re)produces. said...
Aaaaaaagh! I'm not sure if I'm going to recover from this. When I close my eyes I see my protagonist stomping all over the west coast of ireland with an E.T. doll in a baby carrier. Make it go away!
seriously, thanks so much everyone for the feedback (anybody else?)
Loved all the continuations. Worries me a bit that so many of you thought of cocaine. Can't think why... *sniff*
- vkw said...
I was intrigued by the opening but became quickly lost and confused and I gave up.
what is an "old plastic carrier bag"?
The first sentence is - they thought I wouldn't know they took Monine but they left skin behind and I knew by that. I heard the soulless wheezing. They thought I would not be able to find her but Gran told me everything, including their names.
What/who is Garda? and the next sentence "So I load this-this thing this changleing into the Baby Bjorn like a baby." I had no idea what a baby bjorn was until I googled it up. Now I am even more intrigued by the story - which is good but I'm not going to pick up a book read the first few paragraphs and then google up a word - especially if I am trying to decide whether to buy the book or not.
I would try this instead - "So I load this- this- thing, this changeling into the baby carrier and tie it around me. I feel like I'm going to throw-up. The creature's eyes are hollow, like a half-starved infant. I want to smash its head in."
The opening is fascinating. It's intriguing. I love the idea fairies are being betrayed in an evil manner rather than the usual wistful, helpful, seductresses of mankind. I love the voice.
However, you need to take some of the mystery away.
I loved all the continuations, especially John's and Blogless Troll's.
- mb said...
...actually, IS it a note? Or is it a diary entry (which is what it sounds like) written on the bus? I agree it should be shorter and punchier if it's a note.
Like Rachel, I found the first paragraph confusing, but once I understood the set-up, I was intrigued. Partly because it seems possible that the baby is just a baby and not a changeling at all. Partly because I like the modern setting combined with the faery changeling story.
- Evil Editor said...
The Garda is clearly the police/authorities. Try wikipedia. As I said before, if Niesh and the writer both know what the Garda is, and what a Baby-Bjorn is, it would be perfectly natural to use those terms, and would be an egregious use of "As you know Bob," to translate them for the reader. Unfortunately, some "As you know, Niesh" did creep into the piece.
- Mame said...
I love it, minus the F bomb and the Monine confusion. Also, hollow bit of dry skin is no way to describe a living being, either. Knowing that Monine is a baby made all the difference on the second read.
I. Love. This. Shocker, eh?
- Mame said...
Maybe drop the first line for "My dearest Niesh" or something similar.
- Matt said...
The opening line grabbed me. I didn't find the letter confusing.
What's with all this faearies stuff anyway? Is that Celtic spelling? I've never seen it spelt like that until I read the fairy face-lifts on this site.
- Suzan Harden said...
I liked it. Leave off the date and time, reminded me too much of Law & Order. But I liked it, f-bomb and all.
- Chaoticia said...
For a book opening this needed a setting, even one tiny noun like home or at least where the person was off too, preferably both. I liked the explicative.
- Eric P. said...
The concept is quite arresting and I wouldn't hesitate to read on. (Of course, I'm familiar with the idea of changelings from my readings in folklore. I suppose I can see why a few minions were a bit lost.) Excellent job on plot set-up as well: just the right amount of backstory, scene-setting, and motivation to get us moving.
Lose the F-word, at least here. It sets the wrong tone right off the bat, and then you don't follow through with it.
The letter motif doesn't work. As EE points out, it just doesn't read like a hastily-scrawled note by a distraught mother. I'd suggest either making it devastatingly terse ("The Faeries took Monine. I'm going after them. If you don't hear from me in 24 hours, call the cops. -- M.") or simply transmuting it into a straight-up internal monologue.
- Mame said...
"As I said before, if Niesh and the writer both know what the Garda is, and what a Baby-Bjorn is, it would be perfectly natural to use those terms"
And I would point out, that writing down to readers is a huge mistake. Different books for different geeks.
- Anonymous said...
I liked this, although the fucking did make me think it was going to have a little more attitude, or maybe a different voice. But the voice as is is pretty good and dthe description is well done. I also liked it because I can't stand stories about fairies and I hate the spelling faerie. So you had me at that first line. Of course, it does appear that your story is about fairies, but I didn't hate it and I wasn't confused at all about what the dry skin was or who was wheezing. Nicely done.
- Anonymous said...
Anon 9:13 here again. Ok so this is my genre, I wasn't stumped by the meaning of anything like some people, and my advise = take no advise to Americanize your vocabulary or start 'splainin' everything to a lot of 'not my genre' people or you will lose too much of what makes it so richly and clearly an original voice and a modern Irish fantasy. It's brilliant as it is. Any minor adjustments that may be needed can be worked out with your agent/editor.
- Joanna said...
Not much to add. I got Garda and inferred what a Baby-Bjorn must be, and both the descriptions of the changeling worked for me. I'd definitely keep reading.
I also think it would help to drop the first word as well as the 'our' in front of Monine; and maybe cut the third paragraph except for the last sentence.
- Mother (Re)produces. said...
Oh wow. Thanks so much, everyone.
mb was correct, it is a journal entry. She has left a short note for Naoise (I've given up the anglicised spellings) on the kitchen table, but hopes to get home before he does.
she's keeping the journal with the idea of mailing it to herself just before she goes into the mound, just in case she doesn't come back. she doesn't call him because he would just go apeshit with worry, and can't help her from singapore anyway.
I agree with you all totally about the opening description *not* resembling something human. I was going to write my own continuation:
"Oh, and they left an old work boot in place of the cat. Took me a minute to notice, but they can't fool me."
Did I really start four consecutive sentences with 'They thought?' Groan..
About the F-bomb. I'm not sure. thought it suited her personality. If the story ever sees the light of day it will probably be in a speculative fiction publication of some sort- NOT for kids.
Anyway, thanks again, so much. I'm rewriting this in 3rdP (dropping the journal idea- wasn't working out for a variety of reasons) i'll put it in the comments when it's done, if I may, EE?
(ps, Monine is getting a name change. her mother is named Roisin- too similar.)
- Kathleen said...
ah Roisin, my favorite name ever.
All I was going to suggest was giving Monine a name change.
As for the rest, I really liked it - very creepy. I'd read more for sure!
- Evil Editor said...
If the journal problem is that we think it's a letter, that can be easily fixed. If it said I'm sure they were watching Niesh, instead of I'm sure they were watching you, Niesh, we wouldn't make the assumption. You'd also want to lose the last sentence. If Niesh ever reads this he'll be reading the entire journal at once; there's no reason to state in a journal when she'll be writing again; the date and time at the top of the next entry will make that clear.
- none said...
Oh, I dunno, EE. It probably is that confusing if you work really hard at being confused by it.
- Xiexie said...
I'm hooked. I'd like to see the rewrite. Oh, and it's just me personally, but I didn't really see the f-bomb.
*Echoes earlier concerns* <-- The minions pretty much said what I was going to.
Good on you, Mother.
- _*rachel*_ said...
I debated about mentioning my opinion on that word. I don't like the word at all, but I completely understand why you used it. Most parents, discovering their child kidnapped and replaced with a changeling would curse. I'm on the fence here, because this is about as OK as it'll ever get to curse.
- vkw said...
I am going to be very honest here - I was very confused by the names, the name of the baby carrier and Garda.
I agree you should not "dumb it down" for me - I like the Irish character to it - now that I know these words mean - I think its a great opening.
I love the idea that you may write this in a series of journal entries - it has a Stephen King feel to it - and I like his writing a lot. I like the voice that may be lost if you change it.
I don't mind the F bomb. I think it fits with the cold calculating hunt for the missing child.
The only thing I don't like is that there should be some sort of reference to why she didn't call her husband and an apology. That would be the husband's first question. Why the fuck didn't she call?
Just an idea -
P2 - They thought I wouldn't come after them alone. I'm sure they were watching you, waiting until you were gone. I'm sorry I couldn't call . . . I am but I knew you were too far away to help, to do anything but worry. I didn't even call the Garda. How could I with a faery story?
What would be really cool is have the entire story in journal entries like this and find out in the last page she was strung out on cocaine.
- Anonymous said...
If faeries stole my kid I'd be terrified and furious. Somehow the "fucking faeries" comment didn't sound like either. I thought it sounded exasperated - as if the story might continue "That's the second time this week. Let's call the exterminators."
My problem with "load ... this changeling into the Baby-Bjorn like a baby," was stylistic - the repetition of the word baby. Like walking in your walking shoes or grating cheese with your cheese grater.
I didn't have any trouble with the unknown vocabulary, though I did think at first that a Monine must be some kind of a car.
I really like story concept, and the images in the first para. But the tone from para 1 doesn't seem the same as that from para 3. "I regret for the first time..." seems too formal.
- Steve Wright said...
I liked this. My assumption was that your narrator has second sight or something and can see through faerie glamour on that account - am I anywhere near right?
Anyway. It's got a good strong voice, and I think the situation comes across pretty clearly. Could use a bit of pruning and reorganization, but couldn't everything?
- Jodi Ralston said...
Well, I'm a bit late to chime in, but, I think the opening draws you in and it has a flow that makes you read on even if you can't visualize or understand all components. But I am confused by whether or not Monine is a baby or adult and perhaps both Monine and the baby is taken.
Some nits:
Also, if this is a diary entry (as I read below in comments), then would she really write a dash to show she was interrupted here? "They thought--"
Also, I hate to argue with our host, but on this comment "The Garda is clearly the police/authorities. Try wikipedia."
It wasn't clear to me. And in my opinion, when reading fiction, the last thing you want your reader to do is reach for a reference book. It interrupts the flow of the story. Context can help clear up the Garda issue, by giving some kinda detail, like "they'd throw me in their paddy wagon and lock me up" or something like that if she took the baby to them.
Overall though, the concept behind this snippet is quite interesting. It may just need some polish. Good luck.
- Evil Editor said...
I didn't look up "Garda." as I was reading. My Wikipedia suggestion was aimed at the commenter above that comment, who had already shown a willingness to use Google to look up baby-bjorn.
The meaning of Garda can be inferred from the context: who is it you would normally go to when your child is kidnapped?
- none said...
Slightly worrisome that so many readers (and writers?) seem to lack basic skills like inferring meaning from context. Although I admit it took me years to work out what a letter jacket was.
- Sarah Laurenson said...
F bomb worked well for me. Helped set up her voice right from the start. One too many 'They thought'. Didn't understand the beginning description.
I'd read on. Nice job!
- Jodi Ralston said...
"Slightly worrisome that so many readers (and writers?) seem to lack basic skills like inferring meaning from context."
Buffy, I'm one of those who seem to be having problems with the context clues, but then again, once I get confused in a piece, it affects my ability to pick up remaining context clues on other issues. I think part of my problem was, when I read it the first time, I didn't connect Monine to a baby, in part because, due to lack of physical setting details in the first paragraph (where Monine was, for instance), I made up my own picture for the setting and character Monine. I admit to only skimming a line or two of the third paragraph because of my confusion in the first two.
But I do want to emphasize that over all, I liked this piece despite that--which is rare. Confusion normally tosses me out completely.
- Mother (Re)produces. said...
I hope this is less confusing. Some of the bits that people liked aren't here anymore, but that's just because they've been moved to later in the story. Thanks again, everyone, EE.
Fucking Fairies. They thought I wouldn't notice the soulless wheezing of this creature they've tucked under the blanket. Or it's skin, which crinkles slightly like an old plastic carrier bag to the touch. Or the vague smell of tar...
Did they spy on us, waiting for Naoise to go abroad? My skin tightens with the thought of their fingers hanging on our windowsills, their filthy noses greasing the glass. Did they think I wouldn't come after them alone? I can hardly go to the Garda with a fairy story, and I can't wait for Naoise to fly home from Singapore. Maybe the miserable cowards thought I wouldn't know where they've taken our Emer; but Gran told me the old stories, and I listened.
I write Naoise a note. I'll be back before he sees it and I'll tear it up, but if I'm not... he'll need to know why. Now, all I can do is sit here in the dark and wait for the sun to pull itself up. It seemed such a noble idea when we decided to go carless but at the moment I hate myself for it. Did the dirty, thieving little fairies also know the buses are on strike? I'll have to hitch, but standing by the side of the road in the dark is all kinds of bad; if the traffic doesn't get me, the fairies well might. They've no scrupples.
- Evil Editor said...
Spelling it fairies is going to lead some to think you're using a derogatory term for some gay kidnappers. Faerie is standard for a story about the Fae.
In the old version it eventually became clear that Monine was a baby. In this version it never becomes clear what Emer is. Could be a brand name for a motorcycle.
Also, it's losing some of the voice with these attempts to explain stuff. About all I'd keep if you go with the new version is:
Fucking Faeries. Did they think I wouldn't notice they'd replaced Emer with this soulless wheezing... creature? My skin tightens with the thought of their fingers hanging on our windowsills, their filthy noses greasing the glass.
I can't go to the Garda with a faerie story, and I won't wait for Naoise to fly home from Singapore. Did the miserable cowards think I wouldn't come after them alone?
I'll leave Naoise a note. I'll be back before he sees it, but if I'm not... he'll need to know why.
In first person present, you're not telling a story that already happened; you're putting yourself in the character's head and reporting her thoughts as events unfold. She knows where Emer was taken, but she's not going to explain to herself how she knows.
- Sylvia said...
you will lose too much of what makes it so richly and clearly an original voice and a modern Irish fantasy.
I want to repeat this as its important. Not everything has to be written in American colloquialisms, please. :)
TBH, I didn't even notice the use of the "F-Bomb" when I first read it.
I did stumble on the description of what was left behind which seemed to be nothing like a baby (so worthless as a changeling)
They thought I wouldn't notice the soulless wheezing of this creature they've tucked under the blanket. Or it's skin, which crinkles slightly like an old plastic carrier bag to the touch. Or the vague smell of tar...
This is much better as I can now feel that someone might not notice but your protaganist did because she knows of such things.
- Mother (Re)produces. said...
Hello. Here is my (hopefully) final attempt at my opening (i.e., "Fucking Fairies"). Too many people cracked up when I opened with those words, so I moved them to put them a little more in context. If any minions have time for another look, I'd really appreciate any comments.
Thanks, All.
In Emer's doorway I age a million years in thirty seconds. The universe expands and contracts with the soulless wheezing of the creature they've tucked into her place. I move to touch it. Did the little fuckers think I wouldn't notice? The skin crinkles a bit, like a plastic carrier bag, and smells vaguely of coal; not Emer's sweet baby smell. This is never my child. Fucking Fairies.
Did the cowards spy on us, waiting til Naoise went abroad? I write him a note. I'll be home before he is and tear it up, but if I'm not, he'll need to know why. Then I bundle the changeling out of Emer's cot, snatch my bag my keys my coat, open the front door and I freeze. I don't hear a thing. It's still an hour till dawn, but there's always something rustling in the hedges out here on the peninsula- birds, a cat, a stoat. Tonight, it's dead silent. I fix my grip on the changeling, keys in my right hand. I'll just make a dash, I'm thinking. There's a giggle from the darkness and something whistles in like a bomb and hits the car with a metallic 'pock.' A bolt rolls down the bonnet and bounces off the bumper to join the other bits, scattered like bones on the gravel. I slam the door against the sound of more giggling and lean against it. I hang onto the changeling as everything else slides to the floor. The sweat on my back freezes to the cold door.
- Dave Fragments said...
I just need a tiny piece of grounding in that first paragraph. She's walking into her baby's room, her baby's nursery and the language seems so impersonal.
- Matthew said...
I agree with Dave. There needs to be a sense of place, otherwise I don't understand what's happening until the middle section.
- Phoenix Sullivan said...
I love the rewrite. That first para, especially, is really terrific.
The other paras are really good, too, just need a little tightening from the revision they just went through. Tiny technical things.
I write him a note. If I'm home before he is, I'll tear it up; if I'm not, he'll need to know why.
The "my bags my keys my coat" echoes a little too cutely against "birds, a cat, a stoat"
"I freeze" - I think you either need a dash before that or the MC needs to pause to listen before freezing (I would also delete "I"). The "I freeze" comes too abruptly when followed by "I don't hear a thing". As is, to me it sounds like the MC is on the alert for noise, not the lack of it, so the not hearing noise made me think everything's OK until it's clarified it isn't. Maybe just deleting "I don't hear a thing" will clear that up.
I'm looking forward to seeing this in print. You mentioned a spec fic publication, so I take it this is a short story rather than a novel...
- Mother (Re)produces. said...
Thanks again, people. I'll keep tweaking.


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