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Previously, I published a post titled The National Mall (Daylight). People swear it is an entirely different experience at night, and I have to agree that away from the crowds and under the starlight that you see a different angle of the Mall.
My first evening experience on the National Mall was on the 4th of July. Cacia and I decided to brave the crowds to see the fireworks, which were truly an amazing experience. Getting to the Jefferson Memorial, however, was not a picturesque experience due to multiple security checkpoints we had to pass through. I have spent enough time on the National Mall to know basically every route to a memorial, and it took us 1.5 hours to get from Metro Center (Red line) to the memorial. However, our timing was perfect, as this location was not terribly packed and full of mostly respectful people. The payoff was gorgeous too.
While we figured this was a bucket list experience, we both agreed that we plan to come back and see the fireworks next year. Our viewing area was spectacular, but we hope to try the Lincoln Memorial next year!
When my friend, Emily, came into town this week, it happened to coincide with the August full moon. I thought this would be the perfect time to finish seeing the National Mall at night!
Since it was nighttime, we were not really looking to cover the whole National Mall (See my former post for that!), but we were trying to see the monuments with the most interesting lighting. My personal favorite view is the view from the World War II Memorial, looking towards the Lincoln Memorial.
The World War II Memorial and the Lincoln Memorial were my favorites to see in the dark. There are some amazing pictures online of the Lincoln Memorial in the nighttime, but it is really hard to get a great picture of it closer. There are tons of people on the stairs taking pictures with flash, which makes it hard to even to get a good view. If you really want a great view of the Lincoln Memorial and/or a great picture, a summer full moon may not be the best night.
However, if you go to visit the Martin Luther King Jr. memorial, you have a great view of that monument, and the Jefferson Memorial looks pretty from afar too.
While I will agree that the National Mall in the evening is a great experience, I just love it so much more during the daytime! I missed the trees and the green on the night walk.
I hope you enjoyed this week's blog! If you have any questions or comments, feel free to post them! The one and only Hudson dog is here this weekend, and he had a great walk on Roosevelt Island, which I will post about next week!
On an unrelated note, my friend Emma (Mentioned in Everglades National Park and Big Cypress National Preserve) just started her own Florida State Parks blog after being inspired by this blog. If you want to check out her blog, featuring her adorable Cocker Spaniel hiking in Florida, check it out here!

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Beauty and the Beast (1991)
A young woman whose father has been imprisoned by a terrifying beast offers herself in his place, unaware that her captor is actually a prince, physically altered by a magic spell. (84 mins.)
Director: Gary Trousdale, Kirk Wise
Stars: Paige O'Hara, Robby Benson, Jesse Corti, Rex Everhart
Peter Pan (1953)
Wendy and her brothers are whisked away to the magical world of Neverland with the hero of their stories, Peter Pan. (77 mins.)
Director: Clyde Geronimi, Wilfred Jackson
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When Cinderella's cruel stepmother prevents her from attending the Royal Ball, she gets some unexpected help from the lovable mice Gus and Jaq, and from her Fairy Godmother. (74 mins.)
Director: Clyde Geronimi, Wilfred Jackson
Stars: Ilene Woods, James MacDonald, Eleanor Audley, Verna Felton
The Little Mermaid (1989)
A mermaid princess makes a Faustian bargain with an unscrupulous sea-witch in order to meet a human prince on land. (83 mins.)
Director: Ron Clements, John Musker
The Lion King (1994)
Lion cub and future king Simba searches for his identity. His eagerness to please others and penchant for testing his boundaries sometimes gets him into trouble. (88 mins.)
Director: Roger Allers, Rob Minkoff
The Princess and the Frog (2009)
A waitress, desperate to fulfill her dreams as a restaurant owner, is set on a journey to turn a frog prince back into a human being, but she has to face the same problem after she kisses him. (97 mins.)
Director: Ron Clements, John Musker
Stars: Anika Noni Rose, Keith David, Oprah Winfrey, Bruno Campos
Tangled (2010)
The magically long-haired Rapunzel has spent her entire life in a tower, but now that a runaway thief has stumbled upon her, she is about to discover the world for the first time, and who she really is. (100 mins.)
Director: Nathan Greno, Byron Howard
Stars: Mandy Moore, Zachary Levi, Donna Murphy, Ron Perlman
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs (1937)
Snow White, pursued by a jealous queen, hides with the Dwarfs; the queen soon learns of this and prepares to feed her a poison apple. (83 mins.)
Director: William Cottrell, David Hand
The Jungle Book (1967)
Bagheera the Panther and Baloo the Bear have a difficult time trying to convince a boy to leave the jungle for human civilization. (78 mins.)
Director: Wolfgang Reitherman
Toy Story (1995)
A cowboy doll is profoundly threatened and jealous when a new spaceman figure supplants him as top toy in a boy's room. (81 mins.)
Director: John Lasseter
Stars: Tom Hanks, Tim Allen, Don Rickles, Jim Varney
Toy Story 2 (1999)
When Woody is stolen by a toy collector, Buzz and his friends vow to rescue him, but Woody finds the idea of immortality in a museum tempting. (92 mins.)
Director: John Lasseter, Ash Brannon
Stars: Tom Hanks, Tim Allen, Joan Cusack, Kelsey Grammer
Toy Story 3 (2010)
The toys are mistakenly delivered to a day-care center instead of the attic right before Andy leaves for college, and it's up to Woody to convince the other toys that they weren't abandoned and to return home. (103 mins.)
Director: Lee Unkrich
Stars: Tom Hanks, Tim Allen, Joan Cusack, Ned Beatty
A Bug's Life (1998)
A misfit ant, looking for "warriors" to save his colony from greedy grasshoppers, recruits a group of bugs that turn out to be an inept circus troupe. (95 mins.)
Director: John Lasseter, Andrew Stanton
Monsters, Inc. (2001)
In order to power the city, monsters have to scare children so that they scream. However, the children are toxic to the monsters, and after a child gets through, 2 monsters realize things may not be what they think. (92 mins.)
Director: Pete Docter, David Silverman
Stars: Billy Crystal, John Goodman, Mary Gibbs, Steve Buscemi
Finding Nemo (2003)
After his son is captured in the Great Barrier Reef and taken to Sydney, a timid clownfish sets out on a journey to bring him home. (100 mins.)
Director: Andrew Stanton, Lee Unkrich
The Incredibles (2004)
A family of undercover superheroes, while trying to live the quiet suburban life, are forced into action to save the world. (115 mins.)
Director: Brad Bird
Cars (2006)
A hot-shot race-car named Lightning McQueen gets waylaid in Radiator Springs, where he finds the true meaning of friendship and family. (117 mins.)
Director: John Lasseter, Joe Ranft
Stars: Owen Wilson, Bonnie Hunt, Paul Newman, Larry the Cable Guy
Cars 2 (2011)
Star race car Lightning McQueen and his pal Mater head overseas to compete in the World Grand Prix race. But the road to the championship becomes rocky as Mater gets caught up in an intriguing adventure of his own: international espionage. (106 mins.)
Director: John Lasseter, Brad Lewis
Ratatouille (2007)
A rat who can cook makes an unusual alliance with a young kitchen worker at a famous restaurant. (111 mins.)
Director: Brad Bird, Jan Pinkava
Stars: Brad Garrett, Lou Romano, Patton Oswalt, Ian Holm
In the distant future, a small waste-collecting robot inadvertently embarks on a space journey that will ultimately decide the fate of mankind. (98 mins.)
Director: Andrew Stanton
Stars: Ben Burtt, Elissa Knight, Jeff Garlin, Fred Willard
Up (2009)
Seventy-eight year old Carl Fredricksen travels to Paradise Falls in his home equipped with balloons, inadvertently taking a young stowaway. (96 mins.)
Director: Pete Docter, Bob Peterson
Monsters University (2013)
A look at the relationship between Mike and Sulley during their days at Monsters University -- when they weren't necessarily the best of friends. (104 mins.)
Director: Dan Scanlon
Stars: Billy Crystal, John Goodman, Steve Buscemi, Helen Mirren
The Muppets (2011)
A Muppet fanatic with some help from his two human compatriots must regroup the Muppet gang to stop an avaricious oil mogul from taking down one of their precious life-longing treasures. (103 mins.)
Director: James Bobin
Stars: Amy Adams, Jason Segel, Chris Cooper, Rashida Jones
Yellow Submarine (1968)
The Beatles agree to accompany Captain Fred in his Yellow Submarine and go to Pepperland to free it from the music hating Blue Meanies. (90 mins.)
Director: George Dunning
Stars: Paul McCartney, George Harrison, Ringo Starr, John Lennon
Help! (1965)
Ringo finds himself the human sacrifice target of a cult and the band must try to protect him from it. (92 mins.)
Director: Richard Lester
Stars: John Lennon, Paul McCartney, George Harrison, Ringo Starr
Ferris Bueller's Day Off (1986)
A high school wise guy is determined to have a day off from school, despite what the Principal thinks of that. (103 mins.)
Director: John Hughes
Stars: Matthew Broderick, Alan Ruck, Mia Sara, Jeffrey Jones
A Hard Day's Night (1964)
A "typical" day in the life of The Beatles, including many of their famous songs. (87 mins.)
Director: Richard Lester
Stars: John Lennon, Paul McCartney, George Harrison, Ringo Starr


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Our class went to the Kiwanis Music festival today. We saw the music by The Next Generation Leahy. The music festival was awesome. I had a lot of fun. He thanked us, and we had to return back to school. I got to go and it was amazing because they play violin, piano, accordion, and guitar in the band. We rode in the bus with Mr. Poluk.
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Prior to learning about Growth Mindset theory, there have been so many times in my life that I just felt like giving up on goals that seemed impossible. Can you think of a time that you stooped down to visit that same dark place? I truly believe that we've all been there once or twice! What do you do? How do you respond to these challenges? Well, for me, it varies. As I think back, I wonder. Do I strive to achieve my goals? Sometimes, I have given up. Other times, I have kept working away. Digging down, finding the determination or "grit" to fight harder. I tried my best. The end result? It may, or may not have been a "first place" every time. But, growth mindset theory has taught me that I have accomplished something greater. The ultimate win just may be that the final outcome when you try your hardest is that you become better at the skills you are trying to improve. What are your thoughts on the videos? What kinds of things were you thinking as you watched the students and athletes?
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7)كرة القدم
8)كرة السلة
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17)الافلام كرتون
18)اللون الزهري
19)اللغة العربية
20)اللغة الانكليزية
21)اللغة الفرنسية
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1) violin
2) reading
3) sports
4) mathematics
5) music
6) my family
7) football
8) basketball.
9) playing telephone games
10) songs
11) school.
12.) rabbits
13) birds
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15) flowers
16) my mentor and my teacher.
17) cartoon films
18) pink
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20) English
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Camper & Nicholsons Shipyard
Endeavour Quay (meet in Reception), Mumby Road, Gosport, Hampshire, PO12 1AH The story of Camper & Nicholsons, the oldest leisure marine company in the world, began back in 1782 when a shipyard was started on the land of Fort Charles at the harbour shoreline. In …Read More
Touching the Past at Explosion!
Meet at Shop, Explosion Museum, Heritage Way, Priddy's Hard, Gosport, Hampshire, PO12 4LE Discover more about the history of the site and the people who worked at Priddy's Hard with a brief talk and chance to handle some fascinating artefacts. Plus take a closer look …Read More
Lee Historic Waterfront Talk
Please note error on programme, this is the correct postcode St Faith's Parish Centre, Victoria Square, Lee-on-the-Solent, Gosport, Hampshire, PO13 9NF Pull up a chair and settle down to learn about Lee Historic Waterfront during this fascinating talk… and all without getting the sea breeze …Read More
The Somme: A family story
First Light Cafe, 68 High Street, Gosport, Hampshire, PO12 1DR In this short but meaningful talk, Joyce Brown will recount how her relative, Reginald Westbrook, lost his life in the Battle of The Somme. Reginald was a Gosport Fireman and had no need to go …Read More
The D-Day Story at Stokes Bay
Stokes Bay Sailing Club, Stokes Bay Road, Gosport, Hampshire, PO12 2BL In 1942 Stokes Bay was chosen as an embarkation point for vehicles destined for the Normandy beaches as part of Project Overlord, the invasion of France. The whole of the Bay became a restricted …Read More
HMS SULTAN – Fort Rowner Tour
HMS Sultan, Military Road, Gosport, PO12 3BY A tour around one of the Palmerston Forts built to defend Portsmouth from the French. Visit the Tunnels, Caponiers, haunted Keep and Fort Museum in the grounds of the Royal Navy training establishment HMS Sultan. This tour is in …Read More
The Old Grammar School
High Street, Gosport, Hants, PO12 1NS Imagine yourself back in school days as you take this guided tour inside the Art Nouveau building erected in 1901 as the Technical Institute & Free Library. But it was also once the home of the Grammar School and attended by …Read More
Haslar Peninsular Walk-about
RNSM Submarine Museum Car Park , Haslar Jetty Road, Gosport, Hampshire, PO12 2AS Enjoy insights to the military history and important landmarks from your Heritage Guide during this circular walk on roads and pathways of the Haslar Peninsular (a designated Conservation Area).This southern tip of …Read More
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Meet at the Clarence Tavern, Clarence Road, Gosport, Hampshire, PO12 1BB Meet your Heritage Guide, Carole, outside The Clarence Tavern. She will lead you along Clarence Road, North Cross Street, Minit Road and then back to Clarence Square, taking in Seahorse Walk and the cottage …Read More
Admiralty Experimental Works (QinetiQ)
QinetiQ Ltd, Haslar Road, Gosport, Hampshire, PO12 2AG A presentation and tour of the hydrodynamic and maritime life support facilities at QinetiQ's Haslar site, formerly the Admiralty Experiment Works. The presentation will cover the history and development of the site and the types of test …Read More


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- S M Genkins, F P Sanfilippo, B A Carroll
- AJR. American journal of roentgenology
- 1989
Recent reports have suggested the value of duplex Doppler sonography in the assessment of renal transplant function. Accurate diagnosis of acute rejection and its distinction from acute tubular necrosis and cyclosporine A toxicity have been claimed. We undertook a combined retrospective and prospective analysis of duplex Doppler examinations performed over… (More)
- Hirofumi Ota, Karen Fox-Talbot, +4 authors William M Baldwin
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BACKGROUND Both humoral and cellular immune responses can cause arterial injury in organ transplants, but the manifestations of these different inflammatory mechanisms have not been dissected fully. The present study was designed to define the effects of the terminal complement components on arterial injury in vivo. METHODS The authors have developed… (More)
- Z Qian, W Hu, J Liu, F Sanfilippo, R H Hruban, W M Baldwin
- Transplantation
- 2001
BACKGROUND A critical role for the terminal components of complement (C5b-C9) has been demonstrated previously in acute allograft rejection with the use of C6-deficient PVG congenic rat strains. The C6 deficiency prevents the formation of membrane attack complex (MAC) by C5b-C9. Hearts transplanted from PVG.1A (RT1a) rats are rejected acutely (7-9 days) by… (More)
- W M Baldwin, S K Pruitt, R B Brauer, M R Daha, F Sanfilippo
- Transplantation
- 1995
- T M Coffman, F P Sanfilippo, P C Brazy, W E Yarger, P E Klotman
- Kidney international
- 1986
Bilateral native nephrectomy has been suggested to improve renal allograft survival in man. This effect may be most prominent in patients experiencing acute tubular necrosis following transplantation. Thus, native kidneys may alter the course of ischemic acute tubular necrosis in the transplanted kidney. In the present studies, we utilized an experimental… (More)
- P Ruiz, P C Kolbeck, M W Scroggs, F Sanfilippo
- Transplantation
- 1988
A retrospective masked study of 120 consecutive renal transplant biopsies was performed to evaluate the potential associations of cyclosporine (CsA) therapy and other factors on the degree and progression of interstitial fibrosis (IF). Allograft biopsies were obtained from patients receiving CsA (CsA+; n = 59) and not receiving CsA (CsA-; n = 46);… (More)
- B P Croker, D V Dawson, F Sanfilippo
- Laboratory investigation; a journal of technical…
- 1983
The clinical and histologic features of 81 patients with IgA nephropathy were analyzed. Azotemia was present in 32 per cent of the patients, proteinuria was present in 88 per cent, and gross or microscopic hematuria was present in all of the patients tested. The median age of histologic diagnosis was 27 years. The median age at onset of clinical signs was… (More)
- A D Kirk, S Ibrahim, D V Dawson, F Sanfilippo, O J Finn
- Human immunology
- 1993
To investigate the role of gamma/delta+ T cells in allograft rejection, we have studied the TCR phenotype and function of lymphocytes infiltrating rejecting, rejected, and nonrejecting human renal allografts. Two-color immunohistologic staining showed that 19% of rejecting biopsies and 40% of rejected nephrectomies had significant infiltration (> 10% of the… (More)
- F Sanfilippo, W K Vaughn, R R Bollinger, E K Spees
- Transplantation
- 1982
- B A Wasowska, Z Qian, +5 authors W M Baldwin
- Transplantation
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BACKGROUND Alloantibody is an intrinsic component of the immune response to organ transplants. Although alloantibodies have been correlated with decreased graft survival, the mechanisms of alloantibody-mediated injury remain largely undefined in vivo. In the present study, we have established a model of alloantibody-mediated graft injury using B10.A (H-2a)… (More)


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For me there isn't one, so hopefully it's just a screen issue haha!
Ooopppssss it's probably fine??
Glad you liked that though
Everyone believes in grumpy hat man, but does he believe in himself is the better question…
Optimism is good though and I swear it's not all doom and gloom in Rifted
As always, thank you!
That's what the optimistic side of me is attempting to say- that it'll all end fine.
My optimistic side is even struggling with a reason why it thinks that, however.
I mean, I guess grumpy hat man should always just remember- if he's had the ability to pull off that kinda hat for ten years straight then he's at least got some skill, and if nothing else, believe in the skill of the hat.
I believe in the skill of the hat, at least.
And, yeah! I mean, as long as there's a rooftop around I'm sure they'll find some way to have some fun in all this chaos…
As always, happy to help!
Now, onto Chapter 20!
Maybe replace the "between his eyes" with "there", since you already specified that they're under his eyes.
Question here- do you mean to say that the others had been specifically taught that thinking the faeloren were just like them is wrong- or do you mean to say that it would be futile to shout anything about the faeloren at all because all they'd been taught is that there's monstrous animals attacking everyone that come from the east. Because if it is the latter, then add a "that" before "something". (But if it is the former then keep it as is. I figured it might be the latter which is why I put this up, since it seemed like nobody had been told anything about the faeloren- or at least anything that's accurate- but I wanted to be sure!)
There's a large paragraph break here and a scene shift, usually when you do that I've noticed a series of dashes/tildes- do you mean to add some here as well?
Add in "of people(/riders/Dravara/whatever other noun you want to put in here)" after "a number"
Replace "many" with "make"
Maybe add in an "as well" after the second "to a halt"- it should help with the repetition of the phrase.
Add in a break between these two lines.
Replace "too" with "two"
Comma before "turning"
Replace "handle" with "hand"
Comma after "air"
Well, y'know, my first thought was, again "Oh, shit," but then elaborated a little more as I half attempted to joke "where's the nearest rooftop?" Then I remembered that this all took place in the forest and there are no rooftops around. Now I don't know if that's inadvertently poetic or just horrible luck.
But gosh dangit, first Elizabeth and now Daniel? My poor heart can't take this. (B-u-t, I'm thinking maybe not all is as it seems? Considering Daniel was in the prologue and that took place thirteen years from chapter one, and we've yet to reach that point in time, and Rowena hasn't exactly been the most honest of people so maybe she's lying to get at Aurora? Or maybe I'm going to end up owing my optimistic side even more with this theory than I have with the rest.)
Speaking of theories, I have a quick side q- do you like hearing reader theories? Because it's sorta a habit of mine to read too deeply into text and come up with theories about the stories I love, and you've got the good ole head gears turning, and I do love your story, so I was wondering if you wanted to hear some of the ones I'm secretly harboring? If you don't then that's all cool too, of course!
But, yeah! I don't really have a lot of editing notes for this chapter other than the minor spelling/grammar above. So this is hopefully the less is more kinda situation?
Either way, and as always, Good Luck!
Both?? Maybe??
Daniel being in the prologue should help you from feeling too much heartbreak here. Siding with optimism is the right path…for once.
Pulls up a chair.
I live for them.
Headcanons, theories, random thoughts, etc are always welcome. They're probably my favorite part of sharing Rifted around.
That's all good with me! Man, you catch some really dumb ones. I can't believe some of the words I've flopped around haha!
And, as always, thanks so much!
Maybe it's poetically horrible luck?
Yes! I knew I would win against myself one day!
… Which technically also means I lost against myself.
This is confusing.
Yay! Okay, well, I'll put them under the details bar so that this doesn't get too long and ramble-y.
So I'll start with my more rabbit-hole theories that really aren't based on any direct textual evidence but more just general feelings and overall "I only trust Rowena as far as I can throw her" thoughts. Though there's a high likelihood that they're all wrong, I figure we'll wait and see.
The first of these crazy ideas (and admittedly maybe the craziest) is that Rowena might've killed Benjamin. This is mainly based off of their interaction together, the one point we follow Ben's perspective. She's especially cryptic here, especially with the line
Something about that just reeks thinly veiled threat to me. Also, now that Daniel has sorta taken Ben's place, and he's never really mentioned again, I can't help but wonder… what exactly happened? I guess the logical explanation, and the one kinda mentioned, is that he retired from the Dravara. But I can't help but feel that Rowena just… wouldn't let someone who knew that much about everything that's actually going on just… leave.
Especially not when he seemed so hesitant during their conversation. Directly noting that his tone "became disappointed", that he "sighed heavily", and the sorta fear of her that's hinted at, especially so when he's staring at her cloak.
I mean, if Rowena's actions so far have been any indication- she doesn't take too kindly to people who don't listen fully to her orders.
So it got me thinking- "What if Ben isn't just gone-retired, but gone-gone? What if Rowena killed him? Or at least ordered he be killed?"
It then, also led to me to sub-conspiracy-theory, or rather conspiracy-question, that if this holds any water at all and isn't just more leaky than the boat in Jaws after it's been mauled by said shark, how often would she do this to people who know the truth? It's obvious she isn't exactly treating Aurora with the best of intentions, but it's pretty obvious that he intends to shut her down… But what about those who she thinks intend to do the same? I mean, if she did kill the previous Dravara who found out and wanted to help (though I don't entirely trust her word on that, either… But maybe I'm just too distrustful of Rowena, haha) I can't help but wonder just how often does she practice this… murder hobby?
(Oh hey, also as a side note, I realized that I missed one tiny error when I first combed through this chapter- or at least I think I missed it? I don't remember putting it up before, either way. Whoops.- But! Here you go-
Take out "they".)
And… wow, this got a lot longer than I anticipated. I'll probably just leave it at one conspiracy theory per day because otherwise this entire thing would just be… too much.
Sorry about that
But, y'know, I really love your story and everything that it's got going on. So… Yeah! My mind kinda goes off the rails when it comes to theories of the stories I love.
Oh, geez, you should see some of the words I mess up in my own writing (sentences, even, as sometimes my brain works faster than I can type and then I accidentally end up skipping entire sentences). Trust me- you're fine when it comes to flip-flopping words.
No problem!
Now, onto Chapter 21!
Just a heads up- you first say that his arms were chained behind his back, but then later on say that they're chained above his head. Which one is it?
Either add "a" before "murderer" or take out the "a" before "killer"
Comma before "but"
Replace "her" with "him"
Replace "you're" with "your"
Comma before "which"
Not a correction but a question about the dashes thing again. Although, I'm now noticing that in the later chapters you use the dashes less and just the paragraph breaks more. Either one would work- so it's your choice on which one you like better, aesthetically, but you might want to just go through to each long break (including the earlier chapters) and choose whether or not there'll be dashes.
Missing a break here.
I think you mean "hand through his hair" (… Though this gives a funny image, if instead of hair he just had an extra hand on his head…
It would be… odd, to say the least.)
Missing a paragraph break here, I think.
Hoo, well, I'm happy I was correct on one of my less crazy theories (and, wow! One of my other more crazy theories!). But at the same time- ah, geez, poor Aurora. It's okay, though, I still believe that the grumpy hat man will be able to get out of this.
But! Yeah! I enjoyed this chapter as well! You're doing really well in the sense that I'm feeling this is going to become another turning point for Aurora's character, which you've set up very well. You're also doing really well with Rowena as an antagonist, portraying her more dastardly aspects well through conversation and action. You also did very well with Aurora's sorta descent into… well, I don't want to say madness since he hasn't gone insane but more… apathy? No, that's not quite correct either… Mmm, I can't quite think of the word right now (my fault), but especially with the line about the heels seeming impractical you're sorta playing with this deterioration of his mind and will, which is good! (Well not good, not for him, but it's done well.)
So, yeah! I hope this helps some!
As always, Good Luck!
Do tell me in details your crazy theories when you have them!
I love hearing about that kind of stuff.
Honestly, you're entirely correct about it being a turning point, and I'm glad it comes across well!
She…gets worse?
Honestly, I try to be as realistic as possible when it comes to portraying mental illnesses. I see them a lot being treated like…well, you know how romanticizing goes, so I've tried really hard to keep things on more of a realistic and, well…not…that. Anyway, I hope that makes sense??
It's a pet peeve of mine when someone shows signs of something or is dealing with obvious mental issues, and then it just poofs away like nothing happened.
Oops small rant but there we have it!
Once again, thanks so much!
Also sorry for late reply!
So, weird compliment, but I just watched a movie today and it was absolutely horrible in that nothing was consistent, but it got me thinking about things that do hold their consistency well since a pet peeve of mine in any story/movie/etc. is inconsistencies- and one of the examples of good consistency that popped into my head was of Rifted and its characters. I know I've complimented your writing and distinction of character voices before but I also just wanted to mention that I really do enjoy the fact that not only do you have distinct characters, but you keep them consistent as well. Which, I guess, is a weird compliment like I said before but… Yeah! You do well there. It's something I've noticed as I read.
Haha, I have one of them inside the details bar (tab? triangle? I have no idea what to call that thing) up in the previous post but lemme see if I can put another here as well…
So this is my other rabbit hole theory that I'm 99% sure is probably wrong but I still like to entertain the idea of every now 'n then. I said that my 'Rowena killed Benjamin' theory might've been the craziest but that's mostly because it has the least amount of textual evidence to back it up.
But if we're really talking reading way, way too deeply into the text (and just general 'where the hell did you even come up with this'), then this idea might be even further out there. As in… it's not on Earth anymore. In fact, there's a big chance that it may currently be orbiting Jupiter. But I guess that's for you to decide.
I should stop stalling.
My secondary tinfoil-hat theory is this: That Silas may have been the first one to interact with the faeloren.
Now, this theory mainly revolves around said scars he totes (or… toted, since we're not entirely sure what's happened to him), and his general fearful nature, as well as his extreme distrust of the Dravara.
Now, at first I chalked this up to being him having seen an attack by the faeloren as they were defending themselves, or perhaps even wolves, and him just generally being treated horribly by the Dravara as I'm getting a sense that such a thing… isn't entirely uncommon. But considering Rowena explicitly mentions that she tortured the man who first communicated with the Dravara… Well, I'm thinking that kinda thing would certainly established distrust of the Dravara, and he'd want to spare his brother from that, and it might even account for Silas' constant fear of most things, as Aurora seems to put it. Also, what if the marks are like what Bantrem did to Aurora?
Or I might also be reading too much into everything… But, y'know, fun food for thought.
… Well, okay, probably not fun for most people but…
It does make sense. It's an admirable thing to strive for/do (even though it really should just be the kinda thing you'd expect most writers to do, but sadly most don't, as you yourself pointed out), so, yeah, makes sense!
No problem, and also don't worry about it! (I should also apologize for missing a day. Whoops. My bad, sorry. )
Here we go to Chapter 22! (I can't believe I'm on Chapter 22 already! But, as they say, time flies when you're having fun.)
You repeat the word "taste" twice here, perhaps replace one of them with a synonym? (i.e. "flavor", or something of the like.)
Missing a break right here.
Just a heads up (pun not intended), but you use the description "shaking his head" twice in a row when describing Daniel's actions- maybe change or delete one?
Put in "knew" before "this"
Either add in a "that" before the first "it" and a comma after the second "it", or add in a "that" before "any"
Replace "the" with "they"
Oh, dang, I really like the way you end this chapter. I don't know why I like it so much in particular, but it feels like you really built up to that last line- like it's just a very perfect cliffhanger ending to the chapter. A page turner, and such.
Also, you've given me another crazy theory- but first I need to ask a question. I've noticed, throughout your story, though it is fantasy it's also grounded in reality, in a way. Essentially- no wild, out-there magic. Even the faeloren use their own technology instead of some mystical power, from what it seems. (I should be clear- this is not a criticism! Not at all! Just an observation, and I actually kinda like how you do it all. Since there is this kind of mystique around the faeloren until you find out what they are and you hold this idea that they might be something supernatural but also might be natural beasts up until you actually see who they are and that they don't really fit into either of those categories, and now I'm rambling again. Anyway,) but because it is fantasy and such things are possible, and I'm intrigued by this world you've created, I have to ask- is there any kind of magic in the world of Rifted? Or is it as it was with the faeloren? (Stories with some mystique surrounding them, but an explanation logical by this world's standards.)
Also, I'm really hoping Daniel comes to some form of his senses and realizes just how many lies Rowena is spouting. I've always said I believe in the grumpy man with the hat but now I've gotta say I believe in the kind man who needs to trust his own inclinations more than Rowena's.
But, yeah! That's all I got for this chapter, which I loved, as usual!
Good luck!
Oh gosh, you have no idea how much this means to me. Thank you so much!!!
I try really hard at this, and I'm super glad it shows!
I didn't want to copy the whole thing in case…spoilers??? or something?? if anyone else happens upon this thread.
Which, I actually applaud them if they read all of what we've posted here haha!
Anyway, as I was saying, I absolutely love these and won't confirm or deny obviously to avoid spoiling for you! I love when people pick up on details and use them to form their own thoughts about what happens in Rifted and related things. This is one of the most fun parts of sharing for me!
Aurora needs help at the end of this chapter. Being isolated for a while does things to people, and Aurora really starts feeling it.
I'm glad you like the ending though. The ending scene was short, but I remember liking writing that bit.
There is no magic in Rifted, and the faeloren really are just a fantasy race/whatever you'd call them. They're mysterious, but it's not due to any magical stuff.
Daniel is in a really difficult spot. On one hand, it's implied he's done some terrible things, but it isn't out of malice, and he really does just want to do what is "right". On the other, he really needs to start looking around and realizing some of this stuff isn't right.
While I don't think it's super explicit, Rowena is abusive towards him in whatever relationship, working or otherwise, they have. Their relationship is ambiguous on purpose, but her being abusive is definitely not.
And, as always, thanks a bunch!!
Haha, true! There has been quite a lot of conversation going on here! (Fun conversation, too!)
You kill me, Esog. I must know! (Ah, well, I'll find out whether these theories are as crazy as I think or if they hold any truth at all as I read!)
Yay! Well, I'm glad you like hearing them! Because there's definitely gonna be more from where those came from!
Ah, geez, poor Aurora…
I hope he finds some solace soon.
Or escapes.
Escape would probably be better for him in the long run.
It has good buildup and good dramatic quality (?? I have no idea if that's the right way to phrase this), and just in general feels like a nice temporary cliffhanger.
Okay, cool! I was just curious. (And I thought that might be the case, from what you've described within Rifted so far, but I wanted to make sure.)
Hmm… A mini-not-really-theory-but-still-kinda-a-sub-theory-though-it-should-really-just-be-called-an-oberservation-maybe theory of mine is that Daniel might not fully realize what he's doing as wrong?
Correct me if I'm wrong but it seems like Rowena has… for lack of a better word, brainwashed him so much so that he doesn't see what he's doing as wrong. And I would guess that from what you've written it seems as if this really… isn't the first time she's done so. Almost like this has gone on so long that she's sorta conditioned Daniel into blindly following her every word.
Or at least that's the sense I got from how she was able to twist his own thoughts in on themself when she made him think that Aurora shot him. So it almost seems like his thoughts aren't entirely his own, but that Rowena's trained him so much so to follow her own thoughts.
It comes across well. (If my mini-not-really-theory theory above was any indication, haha) You're definitely setting up Rowena as a cunning, threatening figure as we go on.
Now, for Chapter 23!
Replace "spoke" with "spoken"
Like I said before I'll point out all the large breaks that don't have dashes in case you want to add dashes to them.
Also, replace "long" with "longer"
Replace "he" with "her"
Well, dang, there's really not a lot to say correction-wise for this chapter. It was very good, you had a nice balance of description and action, and the pacing flowed smoothly. It's almost kinda eery having read this chapter right after telling you about my kinda-theory theory of Daniel being so drilled by Rowena to her will that his thoughts aren't his own. This entire chapter just seemed to push that further.
Also… I'm scared for that stable boy. I don't think good things are coming his way.
My optimistic side is also saying the same.
But maybe it's just still me not trusting Rowena at all.
I suppose we'll see soon though, yeah?
So, as per usual, I enjoyed this chapter! And, as always, Good Luck!
Hit it on the head! Not that Daniel has NO responsibility for his actions, because he does to some extent, but there's a lot that Rowena has done to make him this way.
She's…not a nice lady, to put it gently, but there's a lot more to her character than that. I think the books start getting into that in the second and third one the most.
Well, you've nailed that theory haha!
Daniel definitely needs some help here too.
Once again, no spoilers haha!
Thanks a bunch!
I'm curious to see how this time away will effect Daniel, if perhaps the space might help him sort out his own thoughts for what they are? (That's the hope I'll cling to, anyway.)
It definitely seems like there's something more than what's on the surface- mainly her motivation, which I assume is going to be important later on since Aurora kept referring to it.
Terrifying words, haha.
Happy to help!
Now, tally ho to Chapter 24!
This is another one where I'm thinking it might just be the way my computer is displaying it- but I'm wondering if you're either missing a space before the last line to separate it from the paragraph above, or if there's an extra space there because it's supposed to be a part of the paragraph above?
Comma before 'but'
^^ Ditto here (Comma before "but"
This is another one where I'm just pointing out the larger spaces so you can decide whether or not you want to add the dashes.
Question- what is the "Fine, why do you ask?" line responding to? I get that the "why do you ask?" is probably referring to if Aurora asked if Lucius is a runaway, but what is the "Fine" referring to? It sounds like he's answering a different question here? Did Aurora ask if he was okay after he saw the wound? If so, you might want to indicate that somehow.
Also here, Aurora never told him to stop anything, just to sit down- so what is Lucius responding to?
Add in a "you" after "are"
I'm not sure if I should be happy about being right on the boy, or sad because I didn't want to be right on the stableboy. I feel like this is a conundrum I find myself in a lot with you're story, haha.
Now I'm also scared for Harriet, I don't think good things are coming her way either. Though it is very interesting to get a glimpse of just how Rowena… operates(?). It provides some insight onto how Daniel must have been when he was first contacted by her and also some insight as to why he became… well, like I said before and for lack of a better word, 'brainwashed' by her tactics.
But, yeah! You had some good pacing here, a nice balance of description and action, and the only critique I would have for this chapter would be the two instances I put above where it wasn't entirely clear what someone was responding to. But those can be fixed rather easily so nothing particularly big or such! I loved this chapter as well!
Good Luck!
Good at picking things up, but they aren't always the happiest things to pick up haha!
Harriet provides more insight into Rowena, and becomes one of the points of view you see occasionally. She definitely is in a dangerous spot, even if this is what she's wanted, but I really like how her character changes over time…for better or worse.
Fixed them!
I'm glad you enjoyed though as always!
Thanks again!
Oh neat! I'm excited to see what it is that makes Rowena tick, then.
And… both excited and apprehensive to see what exactly happens to Harriet and how she changes.
Now, onto Chapter 25!
Question- Why would Lucius ask why Aurora is there despite being friends with Daniel if he already knows about Daniel's amnesia? Did he forget and then remember? If so, then you might want to indicate that.
Replace "close" with "closer"
There's another break here for you to do as you wish!
I'm afraid I can't do much of a summary tonight- have to get up very early tomorrow but I still wanted to squeeze in this chapter… admittedly mainly because I love reading Rifted each night. It's fun! A good way to end the day.
But! I'll write what I can quickly- first of all, wonderful chapter. I've said it before and I'll say it again- I positively adore the way you do character interactions. Especially at the end there with Lucius and Aurora.
Absolutely adored this chapter, overall, and I don't have any general corrections to put here.
So sorry for the rush, but, as always, Good Luck!
That's totally fine! I went back and fixed some confusing stuff, and I'm not really sure why I had that bit where Lucius asks if they were friends. It made sense to me until you pointed it out haha!
Once again, I'm very glad you did!
Also, and this more applies to your other comment, I'm glad you enjoy Rifted enough to keep reading and look forward to doing so. That means a lot to me, and I just can't really express how happy that makes me honestly.
Again, as always, thanks a bunch, and no worries about the rush!!
Well, I'm glad! I know I can't do a lot as I'm no professional editor or anything as the such, but I'm happy to help any way that I can because I really do love the story you've written here! Rifted is always a joy to read!
And, speaking of such, here's Chapter 26!
Comma before "and"
Add in a "to" before "leave"
Replace "remaindering" with "reminding" (although, fun side fact- turns out remaindering does actually mean something- as I was curious when it wasn't underlined red as I typed this out- it apparently means: 'to dispose of at a reduced price'… which I suppose makes since, considering what 'remainder' as a noun means. But, what do you know? Never knew it was a verb as well…)
Alright! Well, I have a horrible, sinking feeling that things aren't going to end well for Lucius…
Then again, I starting to get the sense that I usually have a horrible, sinking feeling for someone. And at this point I'm not entirely sure I'm just secretly a pessimist. But maybe that's being optimistic.
Anyway! I enjoyed this chapter as well. It played to your strength in characters and conversation, and you had some very nice moments in there with the rain and Aurora asking Lucius the different questions. I do (for once) have one editing note, though it doesn't necessarily apply to this chapter alone and more the past three or four chapters as I've noticed something- you tend to use the description of someone shaking their head a lot. Which, on its own, is fine, but it starts to become noticeable by this chapter and I'm thinking it might help some if you went back through the past three-four chapters and combed out just a few of the "shakes ___ head" (you don't have to get rid of all of them, but I think it might work better if you replace just a few with some other descriptions- such as someone's expression changing, frowning or a narrowing of the eyes, or if they gesture with their hands during that time- just some substitute.)
But, other than that, I've got no general edits to say! I loved this chapter as well, and, as always, Good Luck!
More dumb word flopping haha! Thanks for catching that!
No spoilers, as always, but I think there are times when both sides are right in Rifted at least.
On this whole thing, you're right.
I tend to get stuck on phrases and words occasionally, and really don't even notice myself until someone points it out. Thanks for catching that!!
And once again, thank you! Glad you're enjoying!
Alrighty then, can't think of much to say here so I'll just jump right into Chapter 27!
You repeat yourself here with "increasing" and "it only grew worse"- you only need one of those two.
Delete one of the two "teeth" mentions here
Nitpicky and not entirely necessary- but for the sake of repetition maybe replace the second hand with a synonym? (i.e. palm, hold, etc.)
I think you mean "eyes" here?
Another large break here for you to do with as you wish!
Take out the "it"
The respond line seems a bit odd considering he did just respond to her. Does she mean that she wishes he would respond more?
Either make it "until, inevitably," or move "inevitably" to after "would"
Another very nitpicky comment but since you're still talking about him rejecting her offer I don't think you need the "But" at the beginning of the second sentence.
Just pointing out another transition gap!
Alright! That's all there is to point out for this chapter! (Another heartwrenching one at that. But, as per usual, I loved it. I liked how you called back to the questions he kept asking before, it was a nice, albeit sad, touch. And the name, of course.)
But, I'm also able to say that I have some more optimistic predictions for the next chapter, now! As it seems like something's definitely happened and I have a keen feeling that it's most likely got to do with some faeloren friends.
Other than that, however, I don't have any general edits to make in regards to this chapter. It was very well done and, like I said before, I enjoyed it very much! But, I hope what I did point out helps some.
As always,
The useless question "game" Aurora plays with him was one of my favorite parts to write. It is sad, but for some reason it's just something I really liked to write.
Finally out of that prison, and on to new things. Aurora deserves a break, and a lot of kindness right now.
Once again, thank you very much!
It's done very well! Especially since it becomes a kinda (?) recurring theme (at least- there's a bit of a call back to it, I mean. So it works well!)
Here's to hoping that he gets just that!
And now, after a bit of a wait, back to Chapter 28! (Huh, that rhymes!)
And to start back off here's a very, very nitpicky suggestion- since the first half of the sentence talks about sound I don't think the word "though" would then be right since the blurry shapes have nothing to do with the fact that it's silent. If that makes any sense?
I think there's an extra space here.
Add in a "was" after "voice"
Add in either an "it" or "the vial" after "at"
I'm a little confused by the phrase "earth bowl" here- do you mean a "clay bowl"? Or a "stone bowl"?
I think you're missing a break here.
Maybe replace one of these two 'returning's with a synonym?
Replace "as" with "was"
There may be a break missing here.
^^ Ditto here.
Replace "Its" with "It's"
Alrighty then! It feels good to be back to reading Rifted! Missed it.
As always I enjoyed your chapter here. I like the interactions between the faeloren and Aurora since it's interesting to see where the story is going and why exactly they believe he can help so much. (I get the feeling there's something more- it seemed like Wren was going to say they reminded them of the previous Dravara who wanted to help the faeloren? And, if my odd suspicion/theory is anything to go off of, that might be because said person is Silas and he's Aurora's brother…? I dunno, but this chapter certainly gave me more to think about in regards to that specific theory!
I don't have much to say general editing wise. So I hope the more specific things I pointed out helps some!
Hey, I'm glad you enjoy it that much!!
I like this theory. Very good theory, but…no spoilers~~
Thanks as always! And glad to have you back around!
My first day back to this thread and already you torture me, Esog.
Either way! I will find out if my theory is correct! Or wrong! That also has a high possibility! One day!
Happy to be back!
And speaking of being back, here's Chapter 29! (No rhyme, this time…
Except for there.
I guess that makes my statement a lie… But I can't take it out or else it would be true… I haven't even started the chapter and I'm already in a conundrum! )
Replace "of" with "or"
Delete the "something" (or you could make it "with the sound of something that")
This one might just be me but maybe replace "weight" with "warmth"? I think it would make more sense given the context.
Question- is Aurora supposed to have said something here? He didn't answer Wren's question but she seemed to act as if he had.
Add in a break here.
Add in a comma before "therefore"
Add in a break here
Hmm… I have a new theory-in-the-making now. It's not entirely fleshed out yet but I'm thinking that Rowena's obsession with the faeloren might have something to do with that tree and river- and maybe even the seer? I don't know… seems like it's… special in some way and maybe special in a way that's drawn Rowena's attention?
It's an in-progress theory!
Anyway! I liked this chapter as well, and as per usual, haha. I'm thinking that maybe the time away from the Dravara was good for Daniel- he didn't seem quite as… bendable to Rowena's will(???) if that makes any sense at all. (Even tried to refuse her request at first! … Even if he ended up agreeing but still. I have hope for him.)
Also have even more suspicions told ye ole Silas being the other person who tried to help the faeloren theory with that fake name and the fact that I don't buy the crushed under the horse excuse. I dunno. Maybe I'm just seeing what my theorized eyes want to see but I suppose I'll find out eventually!
I have a li'l extra time tonight, so I'm gonna go ahead and do Chapter 30 as well. (Only three left! I'm both excited and also a li'l sad… and apprehensive. But I'm always suspicious about bad things on the horizon, haha.)
One question I have right off the bat is the indents- are these chapters supposed to be indented? I didn't see them in any of the other chapters, so you might want to add them in the others/take them out here for the sake of continuity.
Maybe replace one of the two "few"s with a synonym? (I.e. 'a handful', 'only a couple', etc.)
Replace "he's" with "he'd"
Move the second comma to after "imaginatively:
Nothing wrong here but I also just wanted to point out that the indents stop on this line for if you decide to converge all the breaks to have indents as well.
Two things. First- add in a break. Second (and just for your reference when correcting)- the indents resume here… But only for this line.
Indents resume again on this line.
Switch "learn" and "better"
The indents stop here, but just for this line.
Also- there's a large gap right after this line, but it doesn't seem to be as large as other ones that indicate a change of scene (nor does it actually appear to be a change of scene)- maybe delete a gap?
Last specific correction (though it's not really a correction, but another one for your reference, haha) is that the last line stops being indented again. It felt a little excessive to put up another screenshot when it was, quite literally, the last line of the chapter.
An-y-way! Hoo, boy, I'm kinda wishing I had just saved this chapter for tomorrow so that I could double-up then and not end on a cliffhanger like that today.
I adored this chapter as well. You've got very curious as to how this book's finale is going to go with how you've set it all up. And who exactly that second figure in the trees was. Was it Allikeo(/Silas because I refuse to give up on my theory)?
I also wonder if maybe this is going to be the kick Daniel needs to see beyond whatever pseudo-brainwashing Rowena has given him to make him realize the truth of the matter and who she really is.
But, yeah! I'm excited to see where these last few chapters go!
And, as always, Good Luck!


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Alright, I probobly wouldn't be writing this thread if I wasn't so frustrated I could almost tear my hair out. Okay heres a bit of a backstory, I am a guitarist who switched over from bass a year ago who is starting a blues/rock band. I could NOT find a bass player anywhere in my town who was not already in a band. So I decided to have my friend (who's a guitarist) use my old bass rig for the band. So everything is fine and good and we've been going at this for like a month now practicing and all that fun stuff and getting pretty good. Now we need a singer, well can't find that so I guess I have to sing and were gonna be a power trio. Next we need a drummer. THERE ARE NO AVAILABLE DRUMMERS IN MY TOWN OF 150,000 PEOPLE! I'll say one thing, drummers are damn good hiders. Been checking newspapers, local music stores, venues and **** and there is no one advertising who is still in high school. Checked all over my school of 3,000 people, still no one. SO PLEASE any suggestions on finding a drummer I mean ANY. Oh, thanks for putting up with my rant.
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go to local shows there's usually a lot of musicians there
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if you cant find any one at all convince a friend to start learning to play the drums. thats how i started to play the guitar my friend convinced me. it might take a while for them to get good but its better thatn not having a drummer at all
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There's a shortage of drummers in my area too - what's up with that? Everyone wants to play the drums for crissakes.
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Are you in a school bad (instrumental) too? if you are or know some people in one, then grab one of the marching band percussionists. Anyone half-decent will do able to lay down at least a basic drum part.
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You go to school?
Ask the music teachers if anyone plays drums.
Ask the music teachers if anyone plays drums.
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Why do they still have to be in high school? Trust me, there are drummers available, you are just being picky. I consider my area the tri-county since I'm from Eastern Shore Maryland and it's rural. Maybe 90,000 people in the tri-county and plenty of musicians. The problem is.. the definition of musician should be defined. I've found that the more advanced and serious you get, the less it easy it is to find people. My band is also looking for a drummer and we turned down a long time friend because we know he's not right for the band. Why accept mediocority? But if you are just playing for fun, that shouldn't matter. Also ask drummers that are already in bands, some will be wiling to play with a 2nd group.


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APC CUSB ER1 - Power adapter ( cellular phone connector ) - black - for Ericsson R300, T28; Sony Ericsson S710, T200, T306, T60, T608, T61, T610, T616, T62, T68Item#: 9478869 | Model#: RC-43-SN-100
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APC CUSB ER1 - power adapter Product Details
Product Type: Power adapter
Enclosure Color: Black
Localization: English
Power Device
Voltage Required: 5 V
Input Connectors: 4 pin USB Type A
Input Connectors Qty: 1
Voltage Provided: 5 V
Output connectors: Cellular phone connector
Cables Included: Power cable
Manufacturer Warranty
Service & Support: Limited warranty - 1 year
Compatibility Information
Designed For: Ericsson A2218z, R300d, R300LX, R300z, R320, R380, T28 World, T28z, T39m ¦ Sony Ericsson K500i, K700i, P800, P900, P910a, P910i, S700i, S710, T200, T226, T237, T300, T306, T310, T316, T600, T608, T60d, T610, T616, T61c, T61d, T61z, T62u, T637, T68i, T68m, Z200, Z500a, Z600
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Mfg Part No: RC-43-SN-100
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- Material: Synthetic
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Turn your smartphone into a super-phone with our choicest array of mobile accessories. These accessories are specially designed to boost the performance of your phone, along with giving you the option of customizing it to your own liking.
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