That's it. I give up. I'm throwing in the towel. I'm not finishing this book and frankly I wish I could forget what I did read. I'm sorry, S.G. Holster but you had no business publishing Thirty Seconds To Die. And for anyone who gave this book 4 or 5 stars, shame on you! You're lying. And this isn't a matter of opinion, this is a fact. Thirty Seconds To Die is awful.
To say the writing is amateurish is a gross understatement. It is downright childish. There is no structure, the pacing is terrible and it is glaringly obvious that NO ONE EDITED THIS BOOK. I felt like I was reading the rough draft of a grade 8 creative writing project. Worse, it stank of Twilight.
Holster, you might dream of being an author. But you need to be realistic. You are not a good writer.