Inventing a fake fiancé was an act of desperation for Zoe Montgomery-a knee-jerk response to her horrifying high school reunion! But now that she's convinced London's most unattainable bachelor to play the part, her little white lie is spiraling out of control.
Because everyone wants a piece of tycoon Dan Forrester. Including Zoe! Especially once she's seen the view from his bedroom-this might be a fake engagement, but she's certainly not faking anything else!
Too much character introspection! These protagonists, emotionally screwed up as they are, take the internal monologues to a new (& unwanted/unnecessary) level. If you need to work out your issues, do it at the therapist's, on your own time so us readers can enjoy the romance we paid to read about. You can skip pages (even an entire chapter!) of Zoe working out her problems in her head and the story would still make sense. Plus, all this psych101 isn't exactly what you signed up for when you pick up a Kiss novel. Fun and flirty, it was not.