Tyler – I just got freaked out!!
The weirdest thing just happened ! I was strolling down this beautiful park when I saw these plain white statues. I don’t know why but they interested me, so I went to go check them out. When I did, there was an old sheet of paper and it had these weird words, “Dirpy Goats ahead.” I read it aloud, and all of a sudden the statues started to shake. When I came home they were suddenly right in front of me. I freaked out, but pretty soon I realized they were just lonely, and so we made friends. That was awesome.
What an unusual idea you created in your story. I know, if I had seen such strange statues in a park, my curiosity would have led me to investigate. I was expecting something darker when they came to life but they were really only lonely and wanted friends. Well done.
Your story is well written with only some minor changes you might have made when editing but you have shown your skills as a writer are growing. I hope you can continue sharing your adventures.