The storyline sags like a worn mattress.
Characters behave in confusing and often perplexing manners.
Setting no longer contributes to the storyline.
In short, the story is boring.
The writer can’t give up. Instead of quitting, embrace the next segment of the novel by considering these tips.
Build each scene into another. For example scene 42 must have the action and events of the previous scenes leading up to it.
Complicate the characters’ lives. Relationships are never easy, so make your characters suffer and sacrifice.
Demonstrate the character doubts what he/she has learned.
Ensure a goal or a problem to solve, conflict, and high stakes are evident in each scene.
Find a believable reason for the protagonist to quit. Then show new inspiration for the protagonist to continue.
Force the character to choose between two rights—or two wrongs. Then face the consequences.
Incorporate a crucible. This is a situation, mental or physical, that connects people. The crucible is so important that no one is willing to give it up.
List the worst possible scenarios for all point of view characters. What works to add dimension, tension, and conflict to the story?
Study the protagonist’s and antagonist’s psychological traits. The writer’s best scenes occur when a character behaves the opposite of what the reader expects.
Toss a wrench into the middle of the story that changes the outcome.
Use subplots—problems involving other characters that are connected to the main plot.
Strengthen the muscles of your novel’s middle and finish strong.
How do you welcome the middle of your novel?
I always stall around that point. For me it's because I have plotted some but can't plot anymore until I write. I'm the proverbial PLANster. I usually have to stop and plot out the next third or so after the characters have changed what I was writing. This gig isn't for the faint of heart.
You are so right! Writing isn't for wimps! I'm a pantster too!
You got that right, Ane! Writing novels is not for the faint of heart. Thank you, DiAnn, for your expert insights. I'm in the middle of my current WIP now, and your advice is very helpful.
Hi MaryAnn, so glad I could help.
I always struggle with the middle point of my stories. This amazing post is like a lighthouse! Now I know what I must do to improve it.
I cannot thank you enough, DiAnn!
Thanks Ingmar, I appreciate your encouragement! Really glad I brought a little light on your book.
Wow, lots of great tips. I'm reading "Save The Cat" on novel writing. It has ways to help the middle as well.