"How?" "When?" "Where?" "Why?" "To what degree?" "How often?"
It's nice enough, but it doesn't tell us how he giggled.
Bob giggled like a nervous hamster.
But when did he giggle?
When Sheri asked him to dance, Bob giggled like a nervous hamster.
And why did he giggle?
When Sheri asked him to dance, Bob giggled like a nervous hamster because he secretly liked her.
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From the blog post "4 Steps to a Rigorous Writing Program"