Comments about it and stuff please.
nice start, no c&/c yet!
I have some. It’s probably just nitpicking, but the top-lip should definitely not have that diametre. Look, the slop in the picture is much more noticeable, and it gets a fair bit smaller than what you have at the top. The foot, conversely, looks a bit too small. Only a wee bit, though. 4-5 extra inches to the radius would probably do nicely, and it looks like you should extend the dome the foot is on down a little.
no! you picked the worst cover! The cover artist didn’t even draw the airship right - i never got over that. lol sorry just my opinion. otherwise its a great start. It’ll be good to see where you get with this one, even if the cover art was wrong.
I can’t actualy remember, it’s a long time since i read it. But I think you are right, i dont remember it being described in the book as a hot air balloon. But i realy like the drawing.
Just scroll down a ways and you should find it.
Also gondla bottom lip has been widened. Will post more pics when i have done more.
Basically, a lot bigger. Smaller at the bottom then the top.
I’ll have a play around with the shape of the bladder some time. I don’t think it should be the same shape as a normal one… a bit more round. But you are right, it needs to be bigger.