in an infinite parallel of tales.
vibrant of the existences of many.
in a square of ageing memories.
of this place. The flora stating otherwise.
locks them in a shadowy cocoon.
cattle overlook this place as sentinels for the resting.
Who knows how many requiems they have forseen?
Two of my ancestors slumber here.
they succumb to the abyss of existence.
the scent lingers, livening the memories of the dead.
onto restful men as a silky melody.
strength, even the strong of heart feel the nip of its hunger.
like a fresh bucket of paint over white sheets on a clothesline.
The disappearance of any gaiety that comforted your life.
And the dryness of wilted flowers.
a square of senses in a quiet place.
This year’s entries were a delight to read from our budding young poets. A vast array of themes were explored from the tragedies of war, our natural world, relationships, hobbies, happiness, and animals. Many of the poems were descriptive and attempted to employ poetic devices to engage and capture the attention of the reader. The prize winning poems all had one thing in common in that their poems gave the impression the poet had a strong connection with the places and situations described in their writing. If any advice could be offered it would be to encourage students to select topics they have a connection or deep understanding of. The winning entries displayed these qualities as their images and language choices were more developed and engaging for the reader. Whilst there can only be one overall winner the efforts of all who entered should be commended.
This poem is a mature piece of writing that demonstrates a strong sense of place and conveys to the reader a deep connection with the subject matter. The reader is engaged by stanza’s packed full of imagery and subtle use of poetic devices; as well as managing to engage the five senses throughout. Overall an engaging piece of writing.