I'm experimenting with posting a novel made of short stories as a webcomic.
The interludes between the reporter's stories may all end up being done as little 5-page comics; there's a 5-page comic which would be preceding this chapter, but an old friend drew it, and I don't have his pages... I'll have to contact him and see if he has high-res versions he can Dropbox my way. You don't need to have read it to understand this chunk of story.
Let me know, please, if the font size is working for you.
I'll probably post the rest of the chapter all at once within a few days.
The font size is great, and the length of the lines too.
The two first sentences and I was like hooked already, it's like diving right into the story, getting pieces of information which makes me want to know more. Well done.