I can just see a detective leaning over one completely destroyed zombie corpse (in a huge taped-off area encompassing most of the train yard), peering up at his partner and saying, “Violence was committed here”.
Or maybe an even crappier detective saying, “Maybe now they’ll stay dead” with a crappy CSI Miami intro that directly follows.
And may I just say that I appreciate your attention to detail. The whole train manual section may have been a bit much, but it kept a valuable sense of realism in the chapter.
Oh hell yea!!! Finally, some good old zombie mass killing will ensue!