I like the feel of this very much. I think we as poets need to feel more comfortable leaving good enough alone and letting it stand on it’s own. And if I haven’t said beore I love this page. Your header and name are awesome.
Hot, steamy, sensual. A very nice read.
yes, i can feel the warmth of the steam too… the photo is taken in japan, i believe at a hot springs.
thanks for your comments ….
Love the steam imagery. Love the hair over your face.
If infrmoatoin were soccer, this would be a goooooal!
Nicely wrought poem and what a lovely blog and theme. Kudos! Happy picnic.
very very disciplined poetry- brief yet full of meaning.. 🙂 nice my friend!