I noticed that as I was browsing. Welcome back!
Hi Sugar! Thanks bunches for checking on me! Made my night! It’s nice to know someone cares. I’m taking a break. Writer’s block. 🙂 Love you and miss you! XOXO!!
Omg. You are wonderful!! This comment lifted my spirits sky high. Abundant thanks and blessings!! I’m here for you too my darling friend. You are so deeply valued and loved. XOXO!!
Dear MWM oh yes, the theme of surrender is expressed and felt, known and longed for. This powerful poem screams of surrender knowing once given in that there is a resolve – much like the force of an aggressive lover where one fights against the ‘will’ only to collapse in to the truth and allow it to “be” to take over, to resolve….leaving one weak and yet satisfied.
I must say, you have inspired me to write something interesting this next couple of days. 🙂 I truly love what you expressed in this poem. Lots of heart and soul.
I love your close to a sharpened resolve following the defiance of indifference. Sometimes, we need a wake up call to gather our fortitude and indifference is an emotion of apathy that can be more offensive than antagonism.
Yes Keith exactly! Indifference is more offensive and can be more dangerous as it’s often cloaked and presented as something else. I was wondering if this poem was too obscure. Thank you! I appreciate your insight and comment!
Thank you gracious Grace. ❤ I appreciate your feedback and visit.
Hi Gail! Happy everything to you! How are you dear? Did you have a good Thanksgiving with your hubby?
The two parts, beginning with a fall and continuing into hope works so well.. I can see the hope in that end.
Thanks Bjorn! Yes, the ending is strong with hope.
There is an overpowering strength just remembering someone that it can distress one’s mind!