sorry about the first one, this one is in a sandbox now. This is my first SCP idea. Any and all critiques and reviews are greatly appreciated!
Any and all reviews are welcome and wanted! Thank you for taking the time to read this.
I've been thinking of SCP ideas for about about a week now. This idea kind of just came to me right before going to bed last night.
Dude you didn't have to make a second thread. Be patient. If you can't be, theres the IRC channel that also does reviews. I'm gonna call for a Stop to this thread and direct all traffic to his other critique thread.