forehead) have on the reader?
would disappear as his skin filled out.
2.)       Contrast the second sentence with the following.
When he blew the tuba, his face turned purple and his cheeks puffed out.
that attitude and how is it communicated?
the tuba and he baked, and his name.
know that he was actually trying to play the tuba.
the visual of his wrinkles in the second.
intensify the action through detail. Share your sentence with a partner.
Consider: CHARLEY(to WILLY): Why must everybody like you? Who liked J.P.
to the point Charley is trying to make?
look like a baker in a Turkish bath?
of a butcher I think of a man who is fat and carries a knife and meat in his hands.
It would make him come out to be a normal person.
your description with a partner.
refusing except under the stress of great events to speak his own mind.
men” and he has a cold shoulder toward Henry.