In regards to the figures of speech he uses, he fails in rhetoric, of course, for one thing, because his figures of speech are crude, and you feel like you are going through the gutter when you read that stuff.
Darabiltzan hizkuntzaren figuretan... erretorikan huts egiten du, noski, arrazoi argi bategatik, hizkuntzako figurak... gordinegiak direlako, tripak nahasten dizkizutelako... gauza horiek irakurtzean.