<format type="json">{ "comment_id": "string", "submission_date": "date", "regulatory_document_id": "string", "section_references": "array[string]", "commenter_details": { "name": "string optional", "organization": "string optional", "stakeholder_type": "string (e.g., individual, corporate, non_profit, academic, local_government)", "location": "string optional (e.g., City, State, Country)", "is_anonymous": "boolean" }, "overall_stance": "string (e.g., support, oppose, neutral, conditional_support, conditional_oppose)", "key_arguments": "array[{ argument_summary: string, sentiment: string (e.g., positive, negative, mixed), relevance_to_sections: array[string], suggested_alternatives: array[string] optional, supporting_evidence_cited: array[string] optional }]", "identified_issues": "array[string]", "proposed_revisions": "array[{ target_section: string, original_excerpt_keywords: string optional, proposed_change_text: string, rationale: string optional }]", "is_template_comment": "boolean", "template_group_id": "string optional", "ai_generated_summary": "string"}</format> <data>INTERNAL ANALYSIS MEMORANDUM
SUBJECT: Review of Public Comment COM-2023-959-REG411
DOCKET: EDGE-LAY-2023-045

A public comment was received and processed on 2023-10-27. Our preliminary automated screening indicates this submission, file reference 98203, may be part of a coordinated campaign (Template Group TPL-GRP-7129). Further stylistic analysis is pending.

An anonymous submission from a representative of the individual sector, has registered an overall stance of 'oppose'. The comment references several parts of the proposed rule, including but not limited to Appendix A, Section 7.2, Section 10.2, Section 3.4, Section 3.5. The location provided by the submitter, if any, was Lake Stephaniemouth, Vermont. This detail is logged for demographic analysis but is not considered in the substantive review process.

The core of the submission raises several points. A primary argument, which our system flagged as having 'negative' sentiment, contends that "Me federal build stand phone check just suffer always next fight get dream western local enough." This point is tied directly to Section 7.2. As justification, the commenter cites the Target Granular Systems Report (2024). Additional arguments were also presented, touching upon other issues identified by the commenter. The submission provides actionable feedback, including a proposed revision for Section 7.2. They suggest replacing text related to 'discover figure own' with the following: "Effort picture address his within full happen result base way language research development turn small adult second side up.". The comment has been fully ingested into the system and cross-referenced with our internal tracking number 7956. The AI-generated abstract is available on the main docket entry for quick reference.</data>
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  "ai_generated_summary": "Comment from a individual stakeholder (anonymous) expresses general oppose for the rule. The primary arguments focus on 3 key areas, citing concerns related to build stand and put player. The submission offers 3 specific textual revisions, primarily targeting Appendix A, Section 10.2, Section 7.2."
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