When I was young, my parents cared a lot about my grades. They would always make me study hard and do my school work. I never had a lot of time to play because I was always doing work. I'm glad I did all that work because it helped me make good grades. All of that hard work really payed off.
when i was young , my parents cared a lot about my grades . they would always make me study hard and do my school work . i never had a lot of time to play because i was always doing work . i ' m glad i did all that work because it helped me make good grades . all of that hard work really pay ##ed off .
All of that hard work really payed off.