<prompt> Translate the following text to EnglishNi vizuri kuelekeza maoni yako kwenye nambari za fungu hususa, kutoa sababu zako za mabadiliko yoyote yaliyopendekezwa, na kupendekeza maneno yaliyorekebishwa.  <response>: It would be helpful to key your comments to the specific paragraph numbers, give your rationale for any proposed changes, and suggest revised language. 