i think you're really good at writing dialogue (the chair conversation in "here comes the sun", the play with the iphone power brick and the mechanical pencil). why don't you do more of it?
i'm going to do more of it, but i'm afraid it's a huge can of worms. i've discovered when i write with multiple characters, it never ends. i have multiple pieces that go beyond 10 minutes. which is lovely except i just don't know what i'm getting myself into. i'll do them soon