Is this because you thought the scenes dragged out too long, or was it something else?
there was no time limit on it. the only reason for changes here would be to make it better. actually there was another reason for some other changes you can't see, something that actually got changed twice. Just after "this is the only restaurant that still serves food", there was an opportunity there to jump into a small song bit i've had for a long time. However, i realized that i might not want to go there, so i also wrote a backup option, which is something else that happens in the room where their table is. Unfortunately i'm a complete idiot and forgot that they're actually on the roof, and this other bit is completely impossible on the roof. it's too bad i couldn't use that part because that was one of my favorite parts. that line was also written in the script with "--" next to it, but i removed it from the version i posted here, because i don't want to give away that bit. i will hopefully use it later