You seem to be in a bit of a major key overload,
minor songs always seem like a good idea in thought but then when it comes time for the magic, they have a habit of swapping themself out. for example, 'outside' verse (just picked up the newspaper) originally came to me with the first chord as it's relative minor. same melody but the first chord as it's rel. minor.   that was how it went (so then it would have been C#-7, F#-7, B7sus4) but then as i familiarized myself with the figure and started writing more lines, they automatically felt better starting from the rel 1 (E). speaking of outside, the chorus starts on 5 (and also the intro). it seems like a nice idea, in theory, to be sad sometimes, but in reality there is never a great time to do it