i know you've shared the original draft for the rabbit video along with the updated "final" script, but even the "final" script is different from the video. e.g., your omission of: 1. (person has looked at the caption, to his upper right) 2. damn, 3. phone: 'have you tried going on the internet'?  what informs these decisions?
it should be noted that the 'have you tried going on the internet' has a dash - written at the beginning of the line. that is my notation for this line is cut (cancelled). so that decision was already made. For the person looking at the caption, to the right, .... well, i think i just forgot to do that. Quite often, and i'm not proud of this, quite often i notice after i've finished producing a video, if i look back at the script there are various nuances that just got forgotten. Usually that's because once i've recorded the audio for the vocal, i don't check the script again. perhaps i should. Or, maybe, in this case, it might be the result of the fact that i went with a full-screen separate card for that announcement, so it wouldn't make any sense to have the character look at it. If someone had made me aware of that detail, i may have decided not to do it anyway